Day 2 Writing Homework
Prompt : Imagine a world where the laws of physics do not apply. In 600 words, write a story about a character who must navigate this strange and unpredictable reality, and the discoveries they make along the way. Keep in mind today’s discussion!
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A Foreign World
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Sunnie He – DAY 2
The Shattered World
Elias woke up to find the sky was not where it ought to be. Instead of curving above him, it bent below his feet in a shining curtain, wobbling whenever he moved. The sun varied in fractured rhythms, jumping across the sky like a misplaced thought. Gravity was temperamental here—between pushing him down, then forgetting he was there at all.
He stepped forward, or attempted to. The ground tore away like tattered vellum, and under it, he looked down upon not soil, but an endless sea of spinning stars. Elias reached out involuntarily, and his fingers brushed against something that did not belong—cold, fluid, yet material, like time frozen into solid as it moved.
The outcome was a world that would not obey any principle he understood. Things would not remain stationary; a tree would blossom and perish in a moment, its roots spiraling in on themselves before vanishing completely. Light did not travel—it paused, reversed, then charged ahead in spurts, illuminating portions that were not supposed to be lit.
He stepped cautiously over the shifting landscape, noticing how air bent around him. Things flickered in and out of existence: cities of glinting glass, stairways that led nowhere, rivers that refused to flow, hanging in mid-air like threads of silk.
He soon learned to anticipate the changes, adapting with each step. Walking wasn’t guaranteed—there were moments when the ground writhed beneath his feet, so he leaped before it folded into nothing. Sounds weren’t stable either; echoes preceded words being spoken, creating an unusual, fractured harmony of past and future combined.
Then, Elias saw the people—figures blinking into existence like mirages. They moved with eerie confidence, their forms shifting and adjusting, their eyes glowing with understanding.
A woman approached, hovering just above the fractured ground. “You’re new,” she murmured, her voice arriving seconds before her lips moved.
“What is this place?” Elias asked, but the words twisted midway, reshaping into something else before reaching her ears.
She smiled knowingly. “You’ll learn soon enough.”
Elias realized then—this world wasn’t broken. It wasn’t chaos. It was a system beyond comprehension, where time, space, and logic were merely suggestions rather than rules. And if he wanted to survive, he would have to relearn everything he thought he knew.
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Valli – DAY 2
Here is my homework:)
The day physics disappeared
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The Day Physics Disappeared
Homework:
The Day When the Laws of Physics Was Absent
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Areeba – DAY 2
The Day Physics Disappeared
It was an ordinary Tuesday morning in April, the kind that usually stretched lazily under the sun’s gentle glow, coaxing vibrant life into the flowers blooming along the sidewalk. I awoke to the soft chirping of birds outside my window, a symphony of morning melodies urging me to rise. The smell of freshly brewed coffee wafted through the house, a familiar invitation beckoning me to the kitchen. Little did I know, this day would soon become anything but ordinary.
As I sipped my coffee, the world outside began evolving in unexpected ways. A strange stillness enveloped the neighborhood, making the soft rustle of leaves sound louder than usual. Glancing out the window, I watched children play in the street, their laughter punctuated by the thud of a soccer ball on pavement. Yet, there was a disconnect, an unsettling feeling stirring in my gut. Despite the sun shining brightly, an odd grayness clung to the air, as if the very fabric of reality had shifted imperceptibly.
Driving to school later that morning, my hands gripped the steering wheel tighter than usual, feeling an odd vibration beneath the wheels that wasn’t there before. The road seemed to wobble like a reflection in disturbed water, and familiar landmarks appeared slightly skewed. Traffic lights blinked erratically; drivers hesitated, bewildered by the chaos. We were all actors in a play devoid of direction, as if the stars of our well-rehearsed routines were fleeting shadows.
Entering the classroom, I noticed my students’ expressions mirrored my own—confusion mingled with excitement. The usual buzz of chatter was replaced by an electric tension that was palpable. I began the lesson, but the principles I had taught for years started to falter. The laws of physics—once a reliable compass—seemed to fade like smoke in a breeze. As I dropped a pencil, it hovered inches above the desk, wobbling gently, hesitant to complete its descent. Gasps filled the room, swiftly followed by laughter, a collective rejection of this absurdity.
In the hall, I witnessed what was once impossible. A physics club member, caught in the frenzy of curiosity, leapt from the second floor. Instead of crashing down, he floated gracefully, twisting and turning as if performing a ballet unshackled from gravity. We stood rooted in disbelief, voices bubbling into murmurs of wonder and dread. The walls shimmered, vibrating with energy as the fabric of understanding unraveled.
As lunchtime approached, chaos reigned. Cars floated in mid-air, stubbornly defying gravity, while lunch trays glided silently across the cafeteria. The aroma of fresh pizza wafted toward the ceiling, spiraling upward in whimsical tendrils instead of settling on tables. My friends and I stared, our earlier laughter replaced with uneasy silence as reality twisted around us. People wandered into the streets, gazing up at a sky where clouds danced in a dizzying rhythm. Birds swooped and dove gracefully, unbound by the invisible ties of gravity. Their songs transformed into melodies of freedom, echoing through the surreal atmosphere.
As evening fell, the chaos began to simmer, leaving behind a lingering haze of nonsense that felt oddly comforting in its strangeness. Devices that usually dictated our lives flickered, screens glowing erratically, as if mocking our attempts to reclaim our normal life.
On that fateful day, as night approched, I realized that a world without physics unveiled truths hidden beneath the certainties I had always taken for granted. I returned home, weary yet exhilarated, engulfed by a whirlwind of wonder and fear. Tomorrow’s dawn would either usher in the return of order or the complete unraveling of the coherent world I once knew. I had witnessed the day physics disappeared, and life, though chaotic, felt infinitely more alive.
here it works now I think
The day physics disappeared
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Animesh – DAY 2