Day 2 Writing Homework
Prompt :
Write a persuasive paragraph (~200 words) arguing that your school should add an extra art lesson each week. Use the three modes of persuasion (Ethos, Logos, Pathos) to strengthen your argument. Your paragraph must include: A clear claim (your opinion) At least one ethos statement (show you’re trustworthy/knowledgeable, e.g. “As someone who…”) At least one logos statement (a fact, statistic, or logical reason) At least one pathos statement (emotional appeal or imagery) A call-to-action at the end, urging your reader to agree
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- Due Date : October 2, 2025
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18 thoughts on “Day 2 Writing Homework”
I absolutely believe that schools should have an extra lesson for Art. It gives great hand-eye-coordination which helps for many sports like cricket, soccer, table tennis, tennis you name it! It also supplies your imagination, now days people rely on technology, chat Gpt and more, it makes your brain unhealthy and not relaxed, unlike art ,it makes you feel calm and relaxed. This is why an extra art lesson a week will do good.
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Y4RWD2-Agasthya Sawant
Imagine a world with only black and white things. How boring would that be! I strongly believe that all school should add an extra art class as many reasons support it. As a student at school, I have seen many people enjoying the subject, art! As art is able to be a career, people should try harder so that they might get a high paid job in the future. If a student doesn’t do very well in their HSC exam, they will be able to have a second chance. Additionally, not only is it for peoples careers but also for enjoyment. My principal had once done a survey about student’s like towards art and it proved that eighty percent of the school actually enjoys it! Enjoyment is a key element in life so I think everyone must make an effort into drawing. I remembered the time when I was young I hated art classes. As time passed I started to appreciate it! The time my pencils ran across the page making pictures form everywhere! So go grab a letter and scribble a note to your principal and ask for mew art classes.
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Y4RWD2-Aiden Wang
Howdy there readers! Should we add an extra art lesson each week? Yes, There might be too much people in the class and there won’t be any space, we need more room to keep our storage in class, there will be too much noises when people speak. If you don’t do this quickly, your child will be left behind. I have experienced this happen in my class, there were too much people who kept talking and I could not focus. If we add one more class , we can split half of the class so half of the class on first day, second half on second day. Did you know that if you do art regularly, you will increase your creativity by 41%. This is why we need more art classes in the school.
Howdy there readers! Should we add an extra art lesson each week? Yes, There might be too many people in the class and there won’t be any space to sit you might have to stand and you don’t want that, there will be too much noises when people speak you might get distracted. If you don’t do this quickly, your child will be left behind. I have experienced this happen in my class, there were too much people who kept talking and I could not focus. If we add one more class , we can split half of the class so half of the class on first day, second half on second day. Did you know that if you do art regularly, you will increase your creativity by 41%. This is why we need more art classes in the school.
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Y4RWD2-Mehith agarwal
We should have extra art. As an artist, I have been painting for a long time, and I have considered that art is not just fun but can help your hand-eye coordination. It helps us with everyday activities, helps us learn professional skills, do some sport and learn health and safety. Well, how does it help our safety and health? Hand-eye coordination is useful in safety because quick, accurate responses, rehabilitation and more are safety things and include hand-eye coordination. Did you know that 8 out of 10 people get a work when they grow up because of art? That’s why we need to have more time on art. Would you like to be homeless and be begging food on the street? Of course not, so we need to have more time on art. Do you like art? I like it. Just imagine that you like art and you only have an hour each week at school. You finally have time to let your pencil weave its artistry across the page. You just can’t stop smiling, your brain dancing with ideas and bounding in creative glee. You are finishing your masterpiece and on the last second, Bring! The school bell. Your happiness burst through by sadness, your dreams shattering. That’s why we need more time on art too.
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Y4RWD2-Jeremy Ye
I believe that every school should have an extra art lesson!
As a artist I believe that every school should have an extra art lesson, since it provides students a longer time period to use their creative skills at school. This is necessary because it allows students to practice what they learnt in class. This means that the student gets two lessons, one for learning the skill and one for practicing the skill. This will also encourage them to develop a passion in art and use their imagination more frequently! Art is misunderstood as some random old picture, whereas it is a way of conveying a message or expressing your feeling! These two skills are vital part of a child’s life. Thus, I believe that every school should have an extra art lesson.
I believe that every school should have an extra art lesson
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Y4RWD2-Shirley Das Majumdar
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More art classes
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More art classes
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Y4RWD2-Aarush Gowda
Did you know that around 67% of the world’s artists are successful in HSC. wellI believe that artists are the most successful people in the world. Well we should have an extra period for art, because art improves the hand co-ordination skills so you could do many different tasks at once ( also known as multitasking), and if you have a job and a few people like workers don’t rock up at work you can do their tasks. If you’re an artist like Vincent van Gogh or Leonardo da Vinci they would probably cheer them up because art is supposed to be a fun and relaxing task to do. Everyone like Vincent had a true destiny to be a professional artist. So art is a really fun and engaging experience for young ones like us and toddlers and having an extra class can lead to kids getting more social and not addicted to their phone or any technology doing bad games like roblox. Art is relaxing so we can put an extra class at the end of a school day because it motivates the kids for after school. Since school is short (6hours) and kids don’t really learn that much, but the benefit of having it is so that kids can learn a new thing.
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Y4RWD2-lemonteablossom
Art class is very fun and relaxing. As someone whose hobby is drawing, adding an extra art class would level up a students brain with curiosity and creativeness. Art creation also improves memory, problem solving and critical thinking skills. Art allows people to express their emotions on a canvas. Taking an extra art lesson each week would make the student calm and peaceful after such a long day of maths and English. Art class is very fun, relaxing and calm. Adding an extra art class would be fun, exciting and relaxing. As a person who loves colour, I can say that a colourful thing can make you feel excited and happy which will help with better emotions. Art can express a students feelings through colour and style. Art can improve hand eye coordinations which is a vital skill for school.Art can strongly improve with logical thinking and learning multiple techniques.Art involves a whole another level of skill and complexity of precision.Art can massively help with creativity as there are lots and lots of things for you to paint, for example:you can draw self portraits to landmarks to anything in the world!Art class can also help with quick reactions like if you spill your water of if you draw over your canva, artists would immediately try to clean up the mess with tissues before preventing anymore issues or flaws.
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Y4RWD2-Auston Ji