Day 2 Writing Homework
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Imagine a Brazilian Carnival taking place in Mongolia. Write a creative and descriptive radio program transcript that captures the essence of this unique cultural fusion. Describe the sights, sounds, and emotions experienced during this extraordinary celebration. 500 WORDS
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A day of celebration
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DAY 2-Y6RW-Joella Mathew – FEEDBACK
Brazil in Mongolia ever heard that before? Boom! Colours are exploding in every direction colouring the craggy cliffs of Mongolia bright red. Brazilian dancers are prancing all over the place keeping the aroma flashy and festive! Come with me and ill show you how the eccentric Brazilian spirit mashes up with the beautiful scenery of Mongolia and becomes an all-out celebration!
Brazil is celebrating all-year round with colours, lights, dances and so much more. Picture this: dazzling bright lights flashing fabulous images in the starry night sky, dancers jumping and twirling in flawless costumes, and everybody gleaming with colour as the magnificent show goes on. How does that sound?
Let’s move on to Mongolia with its beautiful big mountains and its humongous, lush plains of grass. Not only do all the humans love it there but I bet the animals do too! If you happen to be in Mongolia its all for nothing if you don’t visit Ulaanbaatar the capital city of Mongolia. In Ulaanbaatar, the big bright beautiful city is no match for the impeccable views, scenery and nature.
Now after hearing all that Imagine, fabulous performances, dazzling displays, and bright colours in a vast, beautiful, lush plain of grass with snowy mountains soaring up above the clouds! That is the whole vibe in Ulaanbaatar over the next few days so make sure to give it a check!
If you’re wondering why all this is happening well, why not! Nah just kidding. If everybody was the exact same, then how boring would life be? I think we all know the answer to that. Luckily in our world we have the privilege of all being different and unique which is a wonderful thing, something we should celebrate!
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DAY 2-Y6RW-Aadhya Nanda – FEEDBACK
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The Brazilian Carnival
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DAY 2-Y6RW-Oscar – FEEDBACK
Brazil in Mongolia
Brazil has the loudest beautiful and memorable parades, consisting of samba dances and lots of food. Now let’s go to the other side of the world, Mongolia, a calm, peaceful Asian country. Imagine putting these festive crazy parties in the grassy urban hills of Mongolia. A company called Fusion is actually hosting a Brazilian party in the heart of Mongolia. The number of Brazilian companions in Mongolia is very small. That’s why there are not many parties and festivals Brazilians can attend.Most parties in Mongolia are culture related and people who aren’t part of their culture will have a hard time coping with all the rituals.
But Brazilian parties are welcome to the whole population since one sixth of a Brazilian party is culturally related. The only cultured part is Samba and food but these delectables are amazing.
Brazilian carnivals are loud and bold. Most parties happen in the streets. Celebrating their way through the town. As more and more houses pass the more and more people come to dance and have fun. One thing that is amazing is that these parties are welcome to anyone, so if you love to dance and meet new people or learn about Brazilian culture, then you will definitely love going to these parties.These parties last for a really long time if you go at ten in the morning you will come back at ten in the night.
Now back in Mongolia there are beautiful urban grasslands where animals roam. There are also many alpine tree forests and there are also many lakes where small ducks and fish travel daily. Also Mongolia is very hot in some places and in some there are long freezing winters that can go below negative 45 degrees.
Imagine combining the Brazilian parties with their naturistic Mongolia. That is a weird combination.BUt if we do happen to put on Brazilian parties other people from Mongolia will be able to meet new people, dance and enjoy. This benefits everyone, ensuring a fun time.Imagine the fun right bold colors of the Brazilian oart stand out in the cool tones of Mongolia.
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DAY 2-Y6RW-Sri – FEEDBACK
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DAY 2-Y6RW-Reina – FEEDBACK
There’s Brazil, Inside Mongolia?
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By Abhinav Vantedhu
INTRODUCTION
Picture this: Samba glistening through the jubilant crowd, stated in the gargantuan mountains and endless skies, offering both a court for merging cultures, and a kaleidoscopic view of clashed colours. In this article, we explore an amalgamation of Brazil’s vibrant spirit, and Mongolia’s rolling grasslands. Join us as we delve into a celebration like no other.
THE ECSTATIC BRAZILIANS
You see the elegance of the samba, so sublime that each person stared with a hint of hypnotism in their eyes. You hear the sublime tunes, ethereal, dynamic and able to make someone’s day. You smell the ambrosial aroma filling up Ulaanbaatar. Its Signature scent wafted between your nose,able to put you into a coma. You taste the overwhelming flavour throwing a party in your mouth. You can feel everyone’s melancholy disappearing as soon as you step foot into the parade. This is just a sneak peak into Brazil’s ceremonious culture. THE STRETCHING HORIZON OF MONGOLIA
Welcome to Mongolia, the land of scenery, with natural landforms the highlight of the country. From the scorching Gobi Desert, to the more livable conditions brought to the table by Lake Khovsgol, to the freezing Altai Mountains, Mongolia has a wide variety of landscapes to choose from not mentioning ,seismically active areas in the West, the patagonian steppes, and lush alpine forests.
MONGOLIAN TERRAIN AND BRAZILIAN SAMBA COLLABORATE
We’ve seen Brazilian Culture, and Mongolian Landscapes, but what if they both merged? As you can already guess, Brazilian Samba desires space as it is a “hip” dance, meaning it uses the pelvis as its core, and many people participate in it. This is what Mongolia is, spacious. The range of places this could occur is also another selling point. The sheer amount of biomes in Mongolia, added with the adaptability of Samba makes it the best collaboration for both countries alike.
THE RHYTHMIC PARADE IN ULAANBAATAR
Drums singing their heart out, Capoeira performers leaving the crowd in awe and electric Brazilian pop dissonant, yet chromatic. This is the lead up to the explosion of jubilee in the heart of the Sukhbaatar Square. This, even though amazing its glory, is not all. We can’t forget the breathtaking visuals of the iconic Samba, the bioluminescent Bossa Nova, and the contagious reality of the vivacious and enthusiastic crowd.
Conclusion
By infusing the colorful and festive spirit of Brazil into the urban heart of Ulaanbaatar, this festival would offer a unique cultural exchange, showcasing the vibrancy of Brazil while introducing a new and exciting experience to the people of Mongolia.
There’s Brazil, Inside Mongolia_
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Flashing lights and huge fireworks burst through the vibrant Mongolian mountain like a parade. In fact, it is a parade but not what you would think of. Here in the Mongolian country, a special event has happened. Big crowds of Brazilian people have showed up to this parade. You may be thinking. Why? Well this is actually a Brazilian parade and that’s the thing that’s so special. Today I will be taking you on this journey from the skies of Mongolia to the dances of Brazilian.
When I first got here, I smelt the aroma of feijoada brazils national dish twist and turn through the air. I saw many fireworks light up the Mongolian mountains. I felt excited and in awe as I saw big Mongolian birds swoop down with much speed you could miss it with a blink of your eye.
You may be thinking. Who would do this? Bringing the festive samba dances from brazil and putting it together with the Mongolian nature making an almost dream like experience. Well, a small company named together has been working across the globe to help others experience different cultures without moving. This is wonderful and also the reason I’m here. This takes place in Ulaanbaatar, the capital of Mongolia. Well why would anyone need this you might be thinking. Its because how boring would it be if you couldn’t go to other countries and see festivals? Well together is bring the festivals straight to you!
The exceptional scenery helps with making it more of a paradise. There are foods like feijoada, moqueca, and polenta. All foods of Brazilian culture. You can experience many dances and songs within this parade like samba which is a colourful dance where you gather in circles and dance together. Something I really enjoyed in this experience would definitely be how both Mongolian and Brazilian peoples are coming together, learning each others language, and celebrating together. It is truly fascinating how people that have never met can share each others religions so well and get along with each other so well.
I saw Mongolian food like Mongolian beef rice as well as many Brazilian foods that I shared with others. They were very tasty and satisfying. The mountains and view of mongoliia are great and mixed with a Brazilian parade are perfect . In Ulaanbaatar, the feeling is great and your surroundings are very lively.
Word Version writing homework by Gabriel Tu
Brazilian Carnival taking place in Mongolia_Gabriel Tu
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DAY 2-Y6RW-Gabriel Tu- FEEDBACK
Welcome, dear listeners, to a celebration like no other! Picture this: the rolling green hills of Mongolia, usually home to vast herds of horses and camels, now alive with the vibrant colors of Brazil’s Carnival. The sun is setting, casting a golden light over the scene, while the air hums with the rhythm of samba music. The sound of drums fills the sky, mixing with the distant call of eagles soaring above. Costumed dancers, wearing brightly feathered costumes, sway and spin with a joy that’s infectious, their movements a perfect blend of Brazilian flair and the graceful step of Mongolian horse riders. The crowd watches in awe, clapping and laughing, caught up in the energy of the celebration.
The streets are lined with giant paper lanterns, painted with the bold colors of both cultures—deep reds, vibrant yellows, and electric greens. As the music plays, people move together in a dance that seems to have no beginning or end, swirling around bonfires that crackle and pop in the cool night air. Traditional Mongolian instruments hum alongside the beats of Brazilian percussion, creating a unique sound that feels both ancient and modern. Food stalls line the pathways, offering exotic treats that blend the flavors of Brazil’s feijoada with the savory tastes of Mongolian lamb dishes. The rich smells of grilling meat mix with the sweetness of tropical fruit and sugary sweets, making the entire festival a feast for the senses.
As the night deepens, the sky above turns a deep shade of blue, dotted with stars. The music swells, and everyone dances, laughing and celebrating, no longer two separate worlds, but one shared joy. People of all ages, from Mongolian elders to young Brazilian tourists, move together, their faces bright with happiness. It’s a true fusion of cultures, a reminder that no matter where we come from, we all have something beautiful to share. In this magical moment, the hills of Mongolia echo with the spirit of Brazil, and the world feels just a little bit smaller, a little bit more connected.
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BRAZILIAN FESTIVAL IN MONGOLIA
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