Day 3 Writing Homework
Prompt :
Write a persuasive piece on: Why your favourite season is the best season
- A clear opinion in your introduction (what you think and why)
- At least three strong reasons to support your opinion
– Use the ACR structure for your body paragraphs (Argument, counterargument, rebuttal)
A conclusion that reminds the reader why your opinion is right
Persuasive language (e.g., “surely you can see…”, “everyone knows that…”, “imagine if…”)
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- Due Date : April 25, 2025
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15 thoughts on “Day 3 Writing Homework”
Why Autumn Is the Best Season
When people talk about their favourite season, many choose summer or winter. But I believe autumn is the best season of all. It has perfect weather, beautiful leaves, and a calm, cosy feeling. Let me show you why autumn is better than the rest.
Firstly, autumn has the best weather.
The air feels fresh, the sun is warm but not too hot, and you can wear a jumper without getting too cold.
Some people might say spring has good weather too, because it is not too hot or cold.
But in spring, there is lots of rain and pollen that makes people sneeze. Autumn is much drier and calmer. Surely you can see why autumn weather is easier and more enjoyable.
Secondly, autumn is the most beautiful season.
The leaves change into red, orange, and yellow. The trees look like they are on fire, and the ground is covered in colour.
Some people think snow in winter or flowers in spring look nicer.
But snow can be grey and dirty after a while, and spring flowers do not last long. Autumn gives us weeks of colour and wonder. Imagine if every walk looked like a painting—that is what autumn gives us.
Thirdly, autumn makes us feel calm and cosy.
You can enjoy warm drinks, soft blankets, and quiet afternoons with a book.
Others might say winter is more cosy, with holidays and fireplaces.
But winter is often too cold to enjoy without freezing. Autumn gives us comfort without the chill. Everyone knows that sitting near a window with hot chocolate in autumn is one of the best feelings ever.
In conclusion, autumn is clearly the best season. It has the nicest weather, the prettiest trees, and the calmest feeling. While other seasons have good parts, they cannot beat autumn. Surely you can see why autumn deserves to be your favourite too.
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winnie – DAY 3
Spring is The Best
The trees sway and the sun beams to people on the ground, flowers smile at by-passers as children run. I definitely believe spring is the best season of all time. I believe this is true because spring offers a perfect temperature, not too cold, not too hot (like Goldilocks Zone), spring has the most beautiful landscapes and that you can have longer days.
Spring has the most comfortable temperatures, often reducing the chance of getting sick and allowing you to enjoy outdoor play which is good for your eyes. The temperature can also affect your academic performance. Research shows that kids get better grades in spring months compared to winter months, at school. It is clear that spring has Godilocks weather and climate.
Futhermore, spring provides beautiful landscapes. During spring months, flowers tend to blossom the most. This is due to temperature changes. Flowers are common, so you can take some and put it in your house as decoration. However, some argue that flowers and grass that blossom in spring can cause allergies, but allergies only occour when you have really large amounts of flowers around you and that means a LOT. It is absolutely true that spring has exquisite landscapes.
Moreover, spring gives longer days, letting you do more tasks or have more entertainment. Although one hour may sound like little, you can accually do a lot of things during that time. Despite all these benefits, many people say longer days might affect their sleeping habits, but research shows, humans only need two to three days to adjust.
As you can see, spring is DEFINITELY the BEST season in the entire world! You get many benefits like extra time, comfortable temperature and pretty landscapes. There should be absolutely no doubt that spring is the best season ever.
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Ran – DAY 3
I strongly believe that winter is the best season. This is because of all the good things you can do, but I will explain just three reasons. Firstly, you can have and enjoy hot chocolate. Secondly, there are flies in every other season. Finally, in winter you do not get hot for most of the time in winter.
Firstly, in winter you can have hot chocolate. Sure, you can have it in other seasons. But you do not enjoy it. That is different to winter. In winter it freezes. The hot chocolate will feel so good in your mouth. Just imagine how it would feel to sit next to a warm fire with hot chocolate. Who does not love that? This is why I love winter.
Secondly, there are flies in every season except winter. Flies are annoying, right? Who hates flies? Me. I mean, who loves flies? Basically NOBODY. In winter, it is so cold that flies do not fly around. This is why winter is the best season.
Furthermore, you do not get all hot in winter. Do you like the feeling of sweat? Certainly not! This is definitely why you should agree to believe that winter is the best season.
In conclusion, winter is definitely the best season overall. Think of all of the good things you can do in winter. So you better agree with me that winter is the best season.
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Jeremy Sun – DAY 3
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Dhinesh – DAY 3
Why Autumn Is the Best Season
Autumn is the best season of the year because it has the perfect balance of weather, beauty, and fun activities. Unlike Summer, which can be too hot, or Winter, which can be too cold, Autumn gives us cool, comfortable days filled with colour and joy.
In Autumn, the weather is just right. The days are warm enough to play outside, but cool enough to wear a cosy jumper. You can go to the park, ride your bike, or kick leaves without getting sunburnt or freezing. The wind feels fresh, not too wild or icy, and the sunlight is soft like a golden hug. Even walking to school feels nicer in Autumn.
Also, Autumn is beautiful. The trees turn red, orange and yellow like a painting. When the leaves fall, they cover the ground like a rainbow carpet. No other season shows nature changing so slowly and magically. It’s also the time when animals gather food, and the world feels calm and peaceful.
Some people say that Summer is better because of the school holidays and beach trips. It’s true that Summer has lots of free time and exciting moments. People go on vacations, swim, and eat ice cream in the sun. It can be fun—if you like the heat.
But the heat in Summer can be too much. The sun gets too strong, people get sunburnt, and it’s hard to sleep at night. Not everyone lives near a beach, and sometimes the weather ruins plans. In Autumn, the cooler air makes it easier to enjoy the outdoors. You can still play outside, but without sweating or getting too tired from the sun.
In conclusion, Autumn is the best season because it gives us lovely weather, beautiful views, and fun times without the extremes of Summer or Winter. It may not have snow or swimming, but it has something better—balance. That’s why Autumn is my favourite season, and I think it could be yours too.
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Eva – DAY 3
The three months where it is not too hot nor cold, birds sing a song, flowers bloom and everyone is happy. I strongly believe spring is the best season out of summer, winter and autumn. Spring supports life and it is when life finally comes back to the world. There are longer brighter sunny days and this is the season when my birthday appears.
Spring supports life and animals start to appear. When animals come out, winter is officially over and the weather is in the middle which is why animals come back from their migration routes or they stop hibernating. You might think I am wrong and that autumn is better, and it might be true. However, autumn is when trees start to die and then they get new leaves from spring and not many animals are around because it is still too cold. This is why spring is the best season because it supports life.
Additionally, longer and sunnier days appear in spring which is fabulous. When we have long and sunnier days, our mood gets better and we get to play more outside in the sun rather than inside facing a computer, iPad or phone. Summer is better for brighter and sunnier days but it is too hot and playing outside might cause skin cancer. This is why spring is the best season because of its weather.
Moreover, spring is when my birthday happens and surely you like your season because of your birthday. It is not only me who has a birthday in spring.In 2023, 77,489 out of 26,821,557 people were born in spring which means people’s spirits are lifted with joy and they become excited about their birthdays coming. Even though 77,489 people in Australia are not the majority, summer has 68,880 birthdays, autumn has 71,750 birthdays and winter has 68,880 birthdays. Therefore, spring has the most birthdays. This is why spring is the best season as it makes people happy because it is their birthday.
In conclusion, spring is where all life pops out, there are longer sunnier days and it is when most people’s birthdays appear. That is why spring must be the best season. It is also not as hot as summer and not as cold as winter. Spring is where all the children laugh in glee as they can finally play outside.
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Ho Yin – DAY 3
Autumn is by far the best season ever, with its beautiful lush leaves and warm moist air. No other season can beat that! Autumn is the best season because it’s the perfect time for outdoor activities, it enhances sleep and it’s the time of the year that has the most fruits. Everyone knows why it’s the best.
Firstly, Autumn delivers perfect temperatures for activities. With the ocean at its best, and hiking turning to a must do on your bucket list, Autumn has so many things prepared for us! Temperatures provide warm sand underfoot, beautiful views of colour outside, there really is no excuse. You could go fruit picking, paint pumpkins, go canoeing or have a picnic. Any of these will make that sadness go away!
Secondly, did you know that Autumn can improve sleeping? As the daylight decreases and melatonin production increases, your body automatically feels more sleepy. And off you go into dreaming! Autumn’s cooler temperatures can also make it easier to fall asleep and this can lead to healthier sleeping habits. I know many are scared to sleep too early or waking up too late but that’s what alarm clocks were made for. So sleep tight!
Lastly, who loves fruit? Well, Autumn has the best fruits in season, like apples, pears, plums, figs, grapes, persimmons, kiwis and tons more. So going to the shops is a must when buying fruit. Just be careful and don’t excessively consume too much, unless you want to gain weight.
So Surely you can see why Autumn is the best season. All because of its outdoor activities, improving sleep and it’s the time of the year that has the most fruits. This season has vibrant colours, crisp air, and a sense of renewal! So enjoy Autumn in its eighty nine days, twenty hours and thirty seven minutes!
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Cybill – DAY 3