Week 10 Writing Homework
Persuasive Writing
Write an Elevated Conclusion for Autonomous Vehicles. 400 WORDS
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Autonomous Vehicles Must Be Implemented- The Conclusion
Countless chairs every day are being emptied because of careless driving, tired driving, annoyed driving. The chairs would never be emptied if autonomous cars had been implemented, it’s not too late now we still have time to save the lives of the remaining. We all could have been people eating and watching a movie on a 20-inch tv with a 4K screen while their car takes them to the shops. When an autonomous vehicle changes lanes people feel like chilled silk is draped upon them. The affordability of this wonderous machine is so inexpensive that it barley costs one thousand dollars at most. This at most one-thousand-dollar car is compared to the at least ten-thousand-dollar manual accident-prone car. I address not only my beautiful country of Australia but the whole world, yes, the whole world must introduce this life-saving device so that graveyards are not packed to the rim. Beds do not gather dust and cobwebs. So that countless people do not die. I have vision that when we mandate autonomous vehicles graveyards are not packed to the rim, lots of beds are full, and many people do not die because of car accidents. That is my vision, not a vision but a upcoming reality which will only happen when autonomous vehicles are implemented. I have also mentioned previously that people may state that we are stripped of the freedom of driving, the luxury of the steering wheel, the happiness of control. The answer to that is what is more important- your freedom or life of you and innocent others? So, we must act to save people’s lives, and we will not be stopped by the one grain of personal freedom that you demand rigorously.
Autonomous Vehicles Must Be Implemented- The Conclusion
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Let us not stay eternally imprisoned under the agonising manacles of preventable car accidents, suffering in the abyss of countless lost lives. There is a hope, a hope of escaping this relentless cycle of despair and we must inevitably work toward it. It is imperative that we move away from the darkness of our current era, and shift towards the zenith of safety, effortlessness, and assurance. The solution of autonomous vehicles lies our grasp, the step we must take to move away from the substanial dilemma of innumerable human errors, dangerous, congested roads and our generation of fatigued drivers. These AI-powered cars are the undeniable fix, offering to eliminate driver neglience, promote safer roads and allow productive time use.
We must shift into the sunlit path of road safety, comfort and productivity. We must move away from the steel chains of driving peril, where thousands of innocent people are killed from car accidents daily. We must march into the future of autonomous vehicles, a paradise of euphoria where every vehicle glides across the roads like skating on ice as they all effectively communicate between a vast network of sophistication, something unachievable by manual driving. To ensure security during tough driving conditions rocky terrain, which are truly obstacles for artificial intelligence to drive, all autonomous vehicles will be harnessed with the protective power of RescueX. This is an advanced system when drivers will be notified when radio waves emitted by the car detect obstacles ahead like wildlife or difficult driving environments and can also be manual activated in the unlikely scenario of something being undetected.
We must not delay this because every day we postpone, thousands are at fatal risk. It is imperative we switch to this innovative alternative as soon as possible to safeguard our hazardous roads from human error, life-threatening accidents and the exasperating inconvenience that pervades our world. There is a vision. A vision where everyone is safe, happy and relaxed. That is the unlimited potiential of autonomous cars.
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In conclusion, while the transition to fully autonomous transport presents undeniable ethical and technical hurdles, the potential rewards—namely a near-total reduction in human-error accidents and a revolutionary gain in urban efficiency—far outweigh the risks. We currently tolerate a status quo where human distraction and fatigue claim thousands of lives annually; to reject autonomous technology is to accept those preventable losses. As we move from Level 3 to Level 5 autonomy, the focus must shift from “if” we should adopt these vehicles to “how” we can most safely integrate them. By prioritizing algorithmic precision over human fallibility, we are not just changing how we drive—we are choosing a future that is demonstrably safer, greener, and more accessible for all.
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Millions of phone calls are missed and screams of people echo in the night everyday all thanks to human caused car accidents. We must not dwell in the malicious and dark abyss of human caused accidents. All these horrendous disasters will be avoided if we make the transition to autonomous cars immediately. There will be no more drunk driving, no more over exhaustion and no more human related car accidents. Instead of stiff joints, sore feet and red eyes that cause many dangers on the road, autonomous cars can make your car into a safe car.
Besides being a safer car, an autonomous car can also become a mobile movie theatre. Imagine comparing a $30,000 dream mobile movie theatre to a $90,000 normal car. The autonomous car would be much more affordable and has many more functions making it a better choice for us all. The car could have a 15-inch 8K screen with smooth, plush leather seats and a large, refrigerated tray full of popcorn, chips and ice cream. You could watch a movie and eat ice cream legally while your car glides effortlessly between lanes and weaves between cars without a single bump all with no human guidance or assistance.
These cars will also be able to find the fastest and most fuel-efficient path to your destination. This would drastically reduce the amount of greenhouse gas released into the atmosphere and make work productivity shoot up. As I have mentioned earlier, 40% of greenhouse gasses are caused by human miscalculations in routes when driving a car. If we make the switch, we would be taking away 40% of greenhouse gasses making the ozone layer fix itself quicker.
To make this change, we will be working with Waymo and implement its AI technology in all autonomous vehicles in order for the road to become truly safe for us. If the car encounters obstacles the car will find the most effective way across using state of the art sensors, cameras and microphones. Our country has a goal. A goal to advance our country and make it safer tenfold. Autonomous cars are our future and our solution to human related car accidents.
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Perfectionism is a huge issue that humanity has developed. When inviting people over, you make your house look like it was cleaned seven times that day by a butler. When going out for your soccer match, you overthink it trying to be perfect and end up missing every shot. People either do things to impressively and show their fake selves, or they start to overthink everything. Take option on and your mask will slip and your reputation is gone. Take number two, and you won’t be able to do anything in life. Perfectionism is a horrible problem with people, and it shows their real selves. People need to embrace their uniqueness and stop trying to make everything perfect as it just won’t work and it could have an opposite effect.
People say that perfection is the enemy of good enough. In everything, there is a line. And that line is where it is enough. If you are a perfectionist, then you shall always cross that line. But anything on that line or above is good enough. It’s like life – climb to high up, and soon the altitude would defeat you. But go to low, and you’ll drown. That line is an important line, as it is always where you should stop if you have arrived there, but it should also be your highest goal in life if you are not there yet. People always tried too much, and they don’t stop and think about the risks. Being too much of a perfectionist could have potentially harmful consequences for your body in many mental ways. You might get overwhelmed from the responsibility and the expectations everyone sees after your first perfect act, as they think that is your usual self. Is the mental risk really worth living in a fake life that isn’t really you? According to Growth Mindset, it is crucial to start excepting yourself as you are, without any perfections or touches. It is a must that, if we want to get anywhere in life, we need to learn to accept imperfection and stop perfecting every tiny aspect of everything.
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The steering wheel has long been a symbol of individual autonomy throughout many generations, and we will sooner or later find ourselves at a crossroads where we ponder the threshold of a paradigm shift greater than smoother traffic circulation or cleaner which aspect of the autonomous revolution we hold dearer: the autonomy of the human-driven experience or the unconditional safeguarding of human life itself. We stand at atmospheric quality; with this revolution, it embodies an irreparable transformation to the human experience warranting an imperative of autonomous incorporation. In opting to forego human error in favor of the accuracy of autonomous technology, we reclaim our most precious asset—time—and raise safety standards from a mere dream or wish to a tangible guarantee. To postpone a possible implementation or acceptance for this technology or any other form of autonomous innovation would mean to accept unnecessary tragedies as an avoidable ramifications of modern mobility solutions. Mandating autonomous transport, at its very essence, transcends from a policy consideration to an ethical imperative in forging a new world—where the road to nowhere stops draining us to empower us, and where every road takes us, as it was meant to, to safety.
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When Human Error Becomes Fatal : The Case for Autonomous Vehicles – conclusion
Cemeteries are getting filled quicker and quicker with the countless accidents made by human error – vulnerable to that vampire screen of blue light, to that notification sent by a friend, to that fatigue after long hours behind the wheel, each a desperate cry from the road for caution ignored, for seconds lost that can never be regained, for lives shattered in the blink of an inattentive eye. This stark reality underscores the urgent need to reconsider how we travel and strengthens the argument for mandating autonomous vehicles, which can reduce human error, protect lives, and restore safety to streets that have become unforgiving arenas of preventable tragedy.
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Self-Driving Cars: Good or Bad? (Conclusion)
So now let me give you a scene again. You are on the same highway but in a different car, a self driving car. This silky Swift glided through the gaps between the trucks while you lay down on your velvet “car seat.” This seat was more like a king-sized bed with mechanical arms that stretch out to give you massages and cool drinks. The sun beats down on your car, only to get repelled by the anti-UV windows. The air conditioning cools the rest of the car, and it works so well that in the 40-degree weather you start to shiver even under 7 layers of pants.
This is the paradise that you can have with the power of an AI car.
So in the end, no matter which side you choose, we all want the same thing: safer roads. We want our family and friends to arrive home safely, not become another crash statistic. Hundreds of millions of cars take to the roads every day and at least a hundred are involved in fatal incidents. Imagine the lives we can save by using AI cars! While job changes are a real concern, protecting human lives must come first. “Safety first” is a common catchphrase that we use to make our citizens aware of the dangers of cars. That is why we have things like seatbelts and airbags to protect human lives. If laws apply to wearing seatbelts, why don’t we have a law for AI cars? Self-driving cars are a smart step forward, because they can reduce tiredness, distraction, and human error, and help make our roads safer for everyone. So let us break out of the chains of the human drivers and into the light of the AI cars!
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Imagine a road full of autonomous cars, each controlled by AI, which could turn corrupt at the command of a hacker. Cars flipped, then combusted into a fire behemoth, causing citizens to squeal and run. I adamantly believe that autonomous vehicles should be banned because they are subject to hacking, may not function properly in certain conditions and will cost thousands of people’s income for the overpriced autonomous cars.
First of all, autonomous cars are not flawless, and they can have issues or be hacked. Hackers can stop you from taking control of the car, and kill you and many pedestrians and, even if no one is in the car, it is still possible. Studies have shown that one in three autonomous cars have made errors at a time, which can be extremely dangerous. Also, each year, an average of two hackers manipulate cars and turn them into killing machines. However, some argue that rates of human error are much higher, as 98% of car accidents are made by man, but think, how many autonomous cars are there right now, compared to human cars? The large difference between the two types of cars is a huge factor, and some studies have shown that for every five hundred normal cars there is one autonomous vehicle. Therefore, autonomous vehicles should be banned because they can also make errors, and are less consistent than humans.
Furthermore, autonomous cars can get blinded by snow, or if not consistently cleaned by hand, the cameras could get blurred by dust or soaked in water. Autonomous still have not developed backups for these aspects. Not only do these problems require frequent attention, they also can cause the car damaging its cameras and crashing, or becoming unusable. Studies have shown that no matter where you are, autonomous vehicles require a cleaning every three days, and sometimes cannot be driven. Some people may argue that it also applies to humans, but humans can simply use the windsweepers, as they do not need cameras to drive. Studies have shown that when it snows, human accident rates increase by one half, while autonomous cars’ accident rates quintuple. Thus, autonomous vehicles should be banned because they cannot function in rain, and have to be taken care of constantly.
Also, autonomous vehicles being enforced or popularised would cause hundreds of thousands of drivers losing their jobs. Not only would an entire industry collapse, but it would also mean that lots of people wouldn’t be able to access cars, as they cannot or aren’t wealthy enough to buy one. This could drive people into poverty, and cost support companies millions, and also affect the governments’ tax profit. Recent surveys have shown that 82% of families would rather not buy an autonomous car, and 29% cannot afford one. However, some opponents argue that with technology developing, it is obvious that prices will plunge, but it is not possible that the switchover will work, and it would only result in negatives. Also, without everything being autonomous, humans could crash into autonomous vehicles, still not ensuring safety. So autonomous vehicles should not be enforced because it would strip thousands of drivers of their jobs.
Ultimately, autonomous vehicles should not be enforced, as they are targets of hackers, are also not perfect and will cost thousands of jobs because of the ban of gasoline cars. Now imagine a world where autonomous cars are banned, and with the occasional screech of tires, things will improve – inventions will happen – features will be enforced – like corrective driving. This decision could save thousands of future lives. We cannot let go of the wheel.