Writing Prompt: Take the sentence “The boy/girl was scared of the dark room” and rewrite it into a vivid, 100–150-word character moment that shows the boy’s fear through his actions, sensory details, and the setting of the dark room. Focus on using precise vocabulary, a metaphor or simile, and subtle hints about his personality or backstory to make the moment engaging. Ensure the description feels immersive and reveals the boy’s character indirectly.
Use at least two sensory details (e.g., sight, sound, touch) to describe the dark room. Include one metaphor or simile to enhance the portrayal of the boy’s fear.
Show the boy/girl’s personality or backstory through his actions or thoughts, not direct statements.
Use a sophisticated connective (e.g., nevertheless, consequently, whilst) to link ideas.
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week 2 writing
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2-RW-Y5-thirteenyao
Week 2 writing finish
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As the moonlight swiftly passed through the barrier of dark light, woven together to keep the sun lights out, the pine tree waved around not in a sympathetic way but harsh and merciless. A mysterious sound echoes and roams through this area. As for a girl, inside an ebony black dark room, she was as small as you can’t even imagine. The small size won’t help. Only tall sizes will fit in this case. But she spun. She turned. Heart pounding, she tried to search for the exit. All that she saw was a window and a fan. Trembling, she started to feel fatigue and famine as the last time she rested and ate was 5 hours ago, the sparks of determination were now extinguished. What next? The life journey that she has been on has ended.
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2-RW-Y5-Cherry Cheng
homework here sry im kinda late
The Unknown Darkness
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2 – RW-Y5-Shawn Pan
heres my hw, maybe i made it too gruesome lol
Week 2 writing T3
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2 – RW-Y5-Emily Chen
hi it me