Week 4 Writing Homework
Prompt :
Write a paragraph about a critical moment in the Jupiter Jelly Wars, featuring a gummy bear hero. Use the formula to present the character, describe their action, and the outcome of this encounter. Let your imagination capture the dramatic and colourful essence of this galactic battle.
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- Due Date : June 7, 2025
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It is 4 o clock in the morning and war has just started in sweet treat land. At the time, there were only three living creatures that existed: lollies, jelly, and gummy bears. There were not many gummy bears left in existence at the time, but they played an important role in stopping the other two beings from fighting. Lollies and jellies had always been arguing over who should control the land, but they have somehow been able to live in peace for so long, but now they have started war. Every day the Jelly General and the Lolly king would both send a small number of troops to the other army’s base but both teams would always fail because both teams had giant cannons that they used to defend their base. After a while, the leaders of both clans started to think of new ideas to defeat the opposing team. First, the Lolly King sent captain Colin to spy on the Jelly base which is where all the enemy troops were housed. Colin knew that his mission would he hard, so he spent two whole days making a clone of the jelly uniform. Now that Colin was ready, he waited for it to be nighttime, then quietly marched to the opposing team’s base. Luckly, he didn’t get spotted and was able to complete the first half of the mission. Colin found out that the jellies were going to send all their troops to the lolly base because their small groups weren’t good enough. Now that he knew that has work was done, Colin started marching back to his base, but before he could, he got ambushed by a group of jellies! The jelly team knew that Colin was not a jelly was not because the two creatures were different shape, instead, it was because at the exact time that their opposing team was watching while Colins fraud uniform was slightly stretched to reveal that he wasn’t a jelly. Another reason could be that Colin was not walking towards the destination that corresponds with the uniform that he was wearing. Now, both teams knew each other’s plans The Jelly General sent a letter to the lolly king that said that the Jelly General wanted to settle the war with a dual. It would be a 1v1 dual and both leaders were going to fight whoever wins gets all the land. The Lolly King agreed, and the battle started the next day. During the first part of the dual, it was pretty even and both leaders were badly wounded. They both knew that if one of them didn’t win, the other one would get to much power. What they didn’t know was that they were being watched all along and that they won’t be happy with what happens next. Suddenly, a giant green gummy bear appeared, and he ate them both. The gummy bear waited so long because that is how long it took for both to from weak. Now the gummy bear had control over everything because he won. The war has now ended so the living creatures can now live in peace.