Week 5 Writing Homework
You are a superhero and have recently discovered that you have powers. Write a diary entry where you detail the process of coming to terms with your new skills, and grapple with the responsibility of great power. Make sure to use the regular structure for a diary entry (date, opening, body, closing). Try to include sensory amplification, an internal monologue of disbelief and juxtaposition between normal life and your bizarre new superhuman abilities. Think about how your life would change, and include these thoughts! (~300 words)
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Saturday, 7th December 1967
Dear Diary,
It is almost Christmas and I have a very long wish list of things I want from Santa and my friends and family. Aside from that, I feel that I got an early Christmas present. This is because I recently learned that I could fly! For some reason, I can also read minds, too!
I don’t know what happened to my body, but I just seized up and thought about flying, and then I flew ten feet into the air. Normal people won’t have these abilities, so I feel special, really! I imagined how I could save humanity with my new powers. I can control when I want to read minds as well! It seems like I can control my superpowers and use them whenever I want to! I have already tested my superpowers and found a few criminals that way. The Sydney Police Force are baffled that I can find criminals and catch them easily with my new superpowers. Nevertheless, I don’t want everyone to find out. I really don’t want all the fame. I also think getting interviewed by famous news channels, such as ABC News, CNN News and other news channels is a waste of time.
My life will definitely change now that I have bizarre superpowers! Finding a job would be easier because I have superpowers because my rate of doing things is high because of my superpowers, and I will find a high paying job as well! Life will go much easier with my superpowers, and yet, I have a giant responsibility to save humanity from criminals, fires and so on. I can help humanity by flying to burning buildings to save people, or warn about criminals and hijackers as well! I still can’t believe that I have superpowers, but I am telling the truth!
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Dear Diary,
12/5/1227
In the luxury shimmering layers of the aqua blue colour mixed with the light teal colour of the Lambourghini, Adventador SVJ. I trudged while driving towards my gym for fitness. Inside the rich vibrant piece of the vivid Lambourghini. There were jumbo luminescent prioritizing comfort seats, packed with world class technology and with boosted acceleration and with high horse power. 5 minutes later I arrived at the gym.
In the Gym my musecles were burning scorchering crimson red. I was lifting the 10 kg weight lifter above my arms for 3 hours and then moved on the excersiece doing 5 hours of push ups, squats, burpees and agility training. Then I went on to my karate class practicing high standards of kicking, punching with full extreme force and defending punches and kicks. After 5 more minutes the class ended. After the class ended a swirll of sweaty plams and hands entered my skin. ” Okay that was intenesfull I should go and have a rest.”
“Now I think I will go to the restaurant because I am hungry”. “Or should I just go home to see what to do next?”
“I think I will go to a restaurant because I haven’t even had food for so long.” ” Okay I am walking on the street trying to find a restaurant on the plaza. “I see a Japenese restaurant I think I shall go in there.” Inside the restaurant the tips of my nose drifted up just as my squezed peice of nose, against the enchanted aroma of the enlightenet smells of sushi. As I ordered my meal an air fizzing piece sprinted on my finger print just like a bone squezed into mud. After finishing my meal I pulled of my long selves of my cloth. Normally what I see everyday is a piece of blended weak lacking strength musecles. But when I did it now. I saw 10 inches of musecles with ribs and an 8 pack body muscle. I got shockd. I was imensively strong just enough to carry 2 massive cars all at once.
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