Prompt :
Write a paragraph about a thrilling day in the life of a pirate penguin searching for the Golden Fish Stick. Use the formula to introduce a character, detail a challenge they encounter, and describe their reaction. Bring to life the adventurous spirit and the high seas drama in your narrative.
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One day there was a group of penguins In Antarctica were preparing to go on an adventure to the Arctic to steal the golden fish stick from the polar bears. The penguins already have the silver fish stick, and they need both so they can turn anything that the pair touch, become fish. They would have to sail for a long time; therefore, they spent 2 years hunting for food to pack on the adventure. The whole penguin army was going to go, and each one was given a special job on the gigantic ship that had three levels just to store fish and another two for weapons that are going to be given to every penguin to fight the polar bear guards and another one for ice when they reach the equator. The month before they set off, all the penguins got together and discussed their plan to obtain the golden fish stick. After thinking of the plan, they spent the rest of the time memorising it and checking it as well as packing everything that they needed. The day before the voyage, the penguins did some last-minute preparation like putting up the sails and loading the cannons. The next day they set sail across the Tasman Sea and Pacific Ocean while stopping to steal treasure from the people of Australia and New Zealand. After robbing them, the penguins had enough supplies to last the rest of the voyage. When they reached the equator, each penguin had to eat two ice cubes every twenty-five minutes so they could stay cool. Once they reached the arctic ocean, the penguins encountered a group of polar bears on a mission to find the silver fish stick in Antarctica which the penguins have been guarding for many years. Both ships had a violent fight, and the penguins ended up winning because they had loaded their cannons before they had left. Both sides had lost many soldiers, but they had ended up finding the golden fish stick. The penguins sailed back home only stopping at Australia and New Zealand to put down both sticks on the sand that turned into billions of fish. Once they arrived home again, the penguins made a pile of ice and stuck the sticks in so that they got one thousand because if something is separated, it counts as one thing. Now they just sit back, relax, and eat ice-cream because who said ice-cream can only be eaten when it is cold.
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Y4-SEL_WK4 – Jayden M