⚠️ The Year 5 Writing Crisis
Year 5 NAPLAN tests persuasive writing. Your child has never been taught how to write one.
Think about it: your child has spent four years writing stories. Now, suddenly, they’re expected to construct persuasive arguments with evidence, write structured informative reports, and produce multi-paragraph responses to texts. Nobody taught them the transition. We do.
52%
of Year 5 students below
NAPLAN writing proficiency
Persuasive
writing is the NAPLAN
genre, not narrative
60 min
of live expert instruction
every single week
3 genres
persuasive, narrative &
informative, we teach all 3

📝 “They got Band 5 in NAPLAN reading but Band 3 in writing”

This is the most common pattern we see. Strong readers, weak writers. Your child can comprehend complex texts, but writing is a production skill, not a comprehension skill. It requires structure, planning, vocabulary selection, and revision. These are all teachable skills that most schools assume children will “pick up.” They don’t. We teach them explicitly.

❌ “They don’t know what a persuasive text even looks like”

Year 5 NAPLAN assesses persuasive writing, but many students have barely written one. They don’t know how to state a position, provide evidence, use persuasive devices, anticipate counterarguments, or write a compelling conclusion. We teach all of it: OREO structure (Opinion, Reasons, Evidence, Opinion restated), rhetorical questions, emotive language, and logical connectives.

📉 “Their teacher says they need to write more, but more of what?”

“Needs to develop ideas further” is the most common Year 5 writing feedback, and the least helpful. What does “further” mean? We break it down: topic sentences that signal the paragraph’s purpose, supporting details that add evidence, and concluding sentences that link back to the main argument. It’s a system. We teach the system.

😤 “They’re great at maths but English is dragging them down”

Sound familiar? Your child is in the top maths group but struggles to put their ideas on paper. This isn’t unusual, analytical and mathematical thinkers often need explicit writing frameworks because they think in structures, not streams. Once they have the framework, writing clicks. We give them the framework.

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📚 Curriculum
11 weeks of analytical & creative writing through Boy in the Tower.
Polly Ho-Yen’s Boy in the Tower introduces your child to genre analysis, critical reading, and the foundational skills of literary analysis, alongside sustained creative composition. A significant step up in writing sophistication.
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Novel Study: Boy in the Tower by Polly Ho-Yen
Dystopian Elements · Family · Fear · Hope
WEEK 1Dystopian Fiction: Genre Conventions & Atmosphere

Students examine the conventions of dystopian fiction (surveillance, social collapse, restriction, and the uncanny. They investigate how Ho-Yen constructs an atmosphere of dread through restraint rather than explicit statement.

Dystopian genre conventionsAtmosphere through restraintThe uncanny & the familiar made strangeVocabulary: tension & unease
Homework: Write the opening of a dystopian story set in your own suburb or neighbourhood. Something is wrong, but don’t tell the reader what. Let them feel it through atmosphere and detail (250 words).
WEEK 2Indirect Characterisation: Evidence-Based Character Profiles

Students analyse the distinction between direct and indirect methods of conveying character. They construct evidence-based character profiles from close textual reading of Boy in the Tower.

Direct vs indirect characterisationEvidence-based character analysisCharacter profiles from textual evidenceInference: reading between the lines
Homework: Create an evidence-based character profile of Ade from Boy in the Tower. For each trait you identify, provide a specific piece of textual evidence that supports it (300 words).
WEEK 3Atmosphere & Tension: Sentence Structure as a Tool

Atmosphere and tension studied as technical problems. Students learn to deploy sentence structure, sound patterning, and the strategic withholding of information as tools of affective control.

Sentence length for tension controlSound patterning (alliteration, sibilance)Strategic information withholdingBuilding dread through detail
Homework: Write a scene where a character realises something is terribly wrong, but reveal the truth slowly. Use short sentences, sound patterning, and withhold the key information until the final line (250 words).
WEEK 4World-Building: Revealing Reality Incrementally

World-building addressed as a narrative skill. Students examine how Ho-Yen reveals the altered reality of the setting incrementally and purposefully, never dumping exposition.

Incremental world-buildingShow the world through character experienceEnvironmental storytellingAvoiding exposition dumps
Homework: Write a scene set in an unfamiliar world. Reveal three key facts about this world, but only through what the character sees, hears, and experiences. Never state facts directly (300 words).
WEEK 5PEEL Analytical Paragraphs: From Narrative to Argument

Introduction to formal analytical paragraph writing through the PEEL framework (Point, Evidence, Explain, Link). Students move beyond narrative response towards interpretive argument about Boy in the Tower.

PEEL framework (Point, Evidence, Explain, Link)Moving from summary to analysisSelecting textual evidenceExplaining the effect of techniques
Homework: Write two PEEL paragraphs analysing how Ho-Yen creates a sense of fear in Boy in the Tower. Each paragraph must include a clear point, specific evidence, explanation of effect, and a link to the theme of fear (300 words).
WEEK 6Persuasive Essay Writing

Students learn the structure of a formal persuasive essay, introduction with thesis, body paragraphs with evidence, and a conclusion that restates the position. Applied to themes from the novel.

Persuasive essay structureThesis statementsEvidence-based body paragraphsPersuasive devices & rhetorical techniques
Homework: Write a persuasive essay arguing whether it is better to face your fears or avoid them. Use evidence from Boy in the Tower and your own experience (350 words).
WEEK 7Poetry: Anaphora, Volta & Enjambment

Students explore poetic techniques including anaphora (deliberate repetition), volta (the turning point), and enjambment (lines that flow without pause). They compose poetry inspired by the novel’s themes.

Anaphora (deliberate repetition for effect)Volta (the turn in a poem)Enjambment (flowing lines)Poetry as compressed storytelling
Homework: Write a poem about isolation, fear, or hope using at least two of the three techniques studied (anaphora, volta, enjambment). Annotate your poem to identify where you’ve used each technique.
WEEK 8Comparative Writing Across Texts

Students learn to write : analysing how two texts treat similar themes differently. They compare Boy in the Tower with a shorter extract or picture book studied in class.

Comparative paragraph structureSimilarities and differencesLinking words for comparison (similarly, whereas, in contrast)Comparative thesis statements
Homework: Write a comparative paragraph examining how two texts explore the theme of family differently. Use linking words to connect your analysis of each text (250 words).
WEEK 9Extended Analytical Writing

Students write an extended analytical response to Boy in the Tower, multiple PEEL paragraphs with an introduction and conclusion. This is the most sophisticated analytical task of the term.

Multi-paragraph analytical responseIntroduction with thesisSustained argument across paragraphsConclusion that synthesises (not summarises)
Homework: Write an analytical response to the question: “How does Ho-Yen use the setting of the tower to explore Ade’s emotional journey?” Include an introduction, at least two PEEL body paragraphs, and a conclusion (400 words).
WEEK 10Original Dystopian Narrative: Planning & Drafting

Students plan and begin writing an original dystopian narrative demonstrating command of the genre’s conventions and the creative and critical skills developed throughout the term.

Dystopian narrative planningIntegrating genre conventionsAtmosphere, tension & world-buildingCharacter-driven storytelling
Homework: Plan your original dystopian narrative. Write the first half, establishing your world, your character, and the central problem, using atmosphere, indirect characterisation, and incremental world-building (400 words).
WEEK 11Dystopian Narrative Completion & Portfolio Review

Students complete their dystopian narrative, revise and edit. End-of-term before/after writing comparison demonstrates measurable growth. Portfolio shared with parents.

Revision & editing for effectGenre convention checklistBefore/after writing comparisonEnd-of-term portfolio
Homework: Complete your dystopian narrative. Then write a 100-word reflection: what is the single most important writing skill you’ve developed this term, and how has it changed your writing?
✅ What’s Included
Everything your child needs. Nothing they don’t.
Every feature is designed to produce one outcome: measurable improvement in your child’s writing ability.
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Weekly Live LMS Class

60 minutes of live instruction every week. Real-time interaction, live writing workshops, and immediate feedback. Not pre-recorded. Not passive. Your child is thinking, writing, and improving every session.

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Weekly Homework + Model Responses

One writing task per week with full model responses provided. Students see what excellent Year 5 writing looks like, then measure their own work against it.

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Expert Writing Feedback

Every piece of writing your child submits receives detailed feedback: not generic comments, but specific coaching on structure, vocabulary, technique, and expression.

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Progress Reports & Parent Updates

Mid-term and end-of-term reports with before/after writing samples. You’ll see your child’s improvement in black and white, not just hear about it.

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Success Coach + 7-Day Support

Dedicated Success Coach monitors homework, provides feedback, and communicates directly with parents via Telegram and WhatsApp. Contact us 7 days a week.

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Full Recordings Library

Every class is recorded and available for 2 weeks. If your child misses a session or wants to revise, they can re-watch the full lesson at any time.

🚀 Included with Every Enrolment
A suite of intelligent learning apps, built into your child’s programme
Every Writing Wizards student gets access to Scholarly’s suite of adaptive learning apps, continuously adapting to their progress.
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Readly

Personalised reading comprehension that builds the analytical skills behind great writing

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Writely

Guided writing practice with scaffolding, vocabulary prompts, and structured feedback

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Vocably

Vocabulary building tied directly to weekly writing topics and reading materials

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Mathly

Adaptive maths practice to keep quantitative skills sharp alongside English development

Unlimited personalised practice

With endless, personalised questions and reading materials, these apps provide unlimited practice opportunities.

One connected ecosystem

Every app connects to the Scholarly platform, giving students more ways to grow in Reading, Writing, Vocabulary, and Maths.

✨ The Scholarly Difference
Why parents choose Scholarly
Writing Wizards isn’t just a writing class. It’s a complete learning environment with technology, expert instruction, and support.
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In-Class Learning Support

  • Instant Q&A help during lessons via Lana and iDoubt
  • Unlimited questions with safe, confidential support
  • Students never feel stuck or left behind
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Interactive Technology

  • Real-time lesson transcripts and live polls
  • Smart note-taking with auto-save
  • Parent dashboard tracking progress in real time
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Expert Instruction & Support

  • Highly-qualified tutors with stellar academic backgrounds
  • 7-day support via multiple platforms
  • Detailed progress reports with percentile rankings
  • Gamified learning with points and awards

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❓ Frequently Asked
Common questions from parents.
Is this a pre-recorded course?
No. Every class is live on our LMS platform with a qualified English tutor. Real-time interaction, live writing workshops, and immediate feedback. Recordings are available for 2 weeks after each class for revision.
How is this different from school English?
School assigns writing tasks. We teach your child how to write. That means explicit instruction in planning, structure, vocabulary, paragraphing, and revision. The specific skills that turn average writing into excellent writing. Think of it as the operating system upgrade that makes all their school writing click.
How much time per week does it require?
Approximately 1.5–2 hours: 60 minutes for the live class plus 30–45 minutes for the weekly homework. All homework is submitted and receives feedback within 1–3 days.
My child hates writing. Will they engage?
Students who “hate writing” almost always hate the feeling of not knowing what to do. Our programme gives them clear frameworks and step-by-step structures for every writing task. Once they have a system, the blank page stops being terrifying, and most students discover they actually enjoy writing when they know how to do it well.
Will this help with school assessments?
Absolutely. The writing skills we teach (planning, structure, vocabulary, paragraphing, revision) are exactly what school assessments require. Parents consistently report that their child’s school marks improve within one term of starting the programme.
NAPLAN won’t wait. Neither should your child’s writing.

Year 5 is the year writing matters most. Give your child the frameworks to excel.

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