Week 1 Writing Homework
Prompt :
Write a paragraph about an adventure in the Invisible Skatepark in the Sky. Use simple examples and formulas to describe the setting, what happens, and how it feels. Your paragraph should bring to life the sensations and emotions of skating in such an enchanting place. 400 WORDS
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- Due Date : May 16, 2025
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One afternoon after it rained, I went out to the skatepark to get some exercise for the day. When I got there a strange looking ramp had appeared. It was the size of a mountain. I didn’t know how far it goes and if the ramp will disappear or not so I quickly went home, told, my parents, told my friends to go with my and off we went. On the way up the ramp, we passed the clouds so I opened my mouth to find out what it tastes like. We went through multiple clouds and each one had a different. The pink one tasted like strawberry, the yellow one tasted like banana, the orange one tastes like oranges and the blue one tasted like blueberry. All those clouds made me feel joyful, proud and a sense of belonging. The green one tasted like lime and the white one tasted like rotten eggs. There was still a while to go after the clouds so I started to feel worried about what is at the top. Some questions started to come into my mind. What if I never make it home?what if I get kidnapped by aliens? Before I could take action the ramp ended. Where was I? At first, I could only see and feel a dark sticky liquid that was covering my face. What was it. Aliens? Oh no. if the aliens kidnap me than I can’t go home. My mum’s beef pie is still waiting for me in the oven. A few seconds later I could see again. I was on a ramp shaped like a circle and I was just doing laps around it. Once I got there, I didn’t know where I was.There was still quite a lot of time left until the pie is cooked so my friend and I started walking around until we saw a giant sign that said that it was just an invisible skatepark in the sky. The sign also said that the park only exists for half an hour so we went around looking for ramps. Each ramp had its own unique feature. One had an extremely deep dive at the end and another looked so scary that no one would ever want to go on it but my friend and I are daredevils so we both went on it. Before I went on it, my palms were sweating like crazy and I had butterflies in my stomach but when I got on, it was actually really fun! I could hear the wind howling and I started to get an adrenaline rush. After the ride I wanted to go on it again but I heard the countdown and swiftly slide back down and went home just in time for the beef pie. Overall, I really enjoyed my adventure and so did my friend.
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lanazheng – WEEK 1