Week 2 Writing Homework
Prompt :
Write a paragraph about a doughnut enjoying a dance in the Disco Dimension. Use the formula to describe the type of
doughnut, its actions on the dance floor, and the sensations it experiences. Imagine the vibrant lights and energetic
moves, bringing your doughnut’s adventure to life. 400 WORDS
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- Due Date : May 24, 2025
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Have you ever wondered what happens to the donuts that don’t get sold? One day, I was walking down the street at night, when I saw a donut shop. It was closed but I could still see inside, and you won’t believe what I saw next. It looked like the donuts were acting like the counter was a football field so that means they were alive! Each individual donut had its own personality and name which was shown on a nametag that was shows just above the hole. In the kept keeping my eye on Bob who I thought would taste the best. After having a chat on the counter, all the donuts gathered in a tiny room that could somehow fit all the donuts and a disco ball, lights turned on and it was like a disco. For some weird reason, Bob had a banana stuck through his hole and he used that to cover the whole floor with pieces of banana. Now it was like the donuts were in a foam pool, so they started sliding around everywhere and making a mess. the entire room was covered in banana! Then, Bobs best friend Ben, came along, jumped in the biggest pile of banana and covered everyone in banana pieces! Even though all the doughnuts were now covered in banana pieces, none of them seemed to care because now they would taste better. The banana made the whole room slippery so not the room was like an ice-skating ring with a disco ball than a party room but at least they were all happy and that is all that mattered to them. All the donuts started rolling around and crashing into each other until ben had a fabulous idea. He said that because they were all unsuitable for sale, they could get as dirty as they want. The doughnuts couldn’t agree on what to do so they decided to vote. The options were: A contest to see who could roll the furthest, a battle so see who can knock the most donuts or a soccer machine using ben as a ball because he was to fat. Everyone except for ben voted for a soccer match so that is what happened. There were just enough donuts to have a 5v5 match. For most of the game, everyone was just trying to knock each other over until bob decided to score just seconds before the time was up. Before the donuts could start another match, they heard footsteps. It was the store owner. The store owner putt all 12 donuts in the bin and told me to leave so that is what I did but the next day when I walked passed again, I heard some strange noises coming from the bin, so I opened it to see what was going on. I saw bob and all his donut friends but after taking a look the store owner told me to leave. Looks like no one can outsmart the donuts.
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Jayden M – WEEK 2