Week 7 Writing Homework
Prompt:
Write a 5-7 sentence paragraph for a newsletter that encourages someone to join a kindness project in your area, using the Issue + Emotion + Solution formula. Talk about a specific problem in your community, share your strong belief in kindness as a way to solve this problem, and inspire the reader with what can be achieved when we work together.
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- Due Date : March 29, 2025
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Homeless people don’t have much food to eat and also don’t have a proper place to live. For example, streets, train or Metro stations. We should give money to homeless people for having a little bit better choice.
We have to help homeless people because they need your support. They don’t have money to pay the doctor, even though that they are feeling sick. Of course I’m not telling to pay them for doctor, that’s the government’s responsibility. But you can give them two dollars and if everyone give homeless people two dollars, they will save money and finally can go to see the doctor.
Do you want them to be happier, so tell at least ten friends to help homeless people. You can also hand out posters to convince people on the street to help homeless people. I hope you will listen to me. THANK YOU!!
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Y4_RC[WK7] – Adeline
Kindness Now;Ban Wars
Imagine what you whould feel if you where a lonley and hopeless orphan sitting in the middle of a deserted street, in a war and about to be blasted? Well donate money to orphanages to prevent this from happening. All over the world this is curently a devistating event where solderies are mistaking them as impartant children on other sides and killing defencless orphans. This is only happening because orphanages are not being donated enough money so they are forced to kick out orphans and shut down. If those important orginisatoins shut dow and kick out all the children then the chidren may die of hunger or die in a war if there is one in that city. Another reason orphanages are shuting down most commonly is because solderies are needing food less than orphans do, in a war they blast buildings including the defenclece orphanage and also the goverment may ask the orginisation to give money to the solders so they can buy wepons. Plus why whould any one kill small defencless orphans? The answer is because wars are cruel! We must donate money to orphanags so they can buy food and rebuild after destruction if there is one. In conclution we must donate money to orphanags and ban pointless wars now!
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Y4_RC[WK7] – Eric Li
Climate change is affecting the whole world and we need to change this. There are lots of ways we can fix this major issue. You can save the universe by saving energy at home, the three Rs, and switching to an electric car.
Imagine our whole earth in a drought with scorching hot weather. Now imagine our whole earth in a severe storm with freezing weather and chunks of hail shooting to the ground. Because of a fraction of people, everybody is soon going to be affected.
I’ll give you 2 choices, the first one is where we all argue and not help the world from this natural disaster. The second one is where we collaborate together and everybody helps to save the world. I know you’re going to be like “Arjun, I love the second option but you only gave us limited information on saving the world” Read the next paragraph for more.
In order to save energy at home, you need to turn off lights and appliances when not in use, manage heating and cooling efficiently, and address drafts to reduce energy consumption. In order to save the world using the three Rs, you need to reduce, reuse , and recycle. Last but not least, in order to switch to an electric car, you need to research available models, consider your needs and budget, and explore government incentives and charging infrastructure options.