Day 7 Writing Homework
Prompt : Write a complete feature article (800-1000 words) on the Silverwater Creek pollution issue.
Your article must include:
An engaging headline
A compelling hook
At least two paragraphs that follow the PEEL structure
Incorporation of ethos-building elements (expert quotes, data)
Balanced presentation of perspectives with a persuasive lean
Vivid descriptive language and imagery
A persuasive conclusion with call to action
Be prepared to share and discuss your article in the next session.
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- Due Date : April 24, 2025
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Hi Amelie here, I’m just here to tell u that my PEEL paragraphs are: The Problem and The Impact. Tyy 🙂 Hope u like my writing
Surviving with Silverwater: A Cry for Clean Water
By Amelie
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A Silent Crisis Unfolds
There was once a gleaming lake populated by colourful fish, now a polluted dull river. Silverwater used to be a holiday destination, now a forgotten landmark. It’s once ecosystem, now dead from pollutants. We need to act fast, before Silverwater Creek perishes. It used to flow with pristine clarity, a haven for local wildlife and a cherished stop for families and friends. Today, it tells a different story – a tale of neglect and pollution that threatens its every existence. As we stand on its banks, the murky waters and pungent odour serve as a starkly reminder of the environmental crisis at our doorstep.
The Reality
Silverwater Creek’s problem is not just an environmental issue; it is a community crisis. Recent studies have shown alarming levels of pollutants, including sewage water and industrial waste. According to Professor Alexis Carter, head of the Environmental Institute of Australia, “The pollution levels in Silverwater Creek have reached a critical point. If immediate action is not taken, we will risk losing this vital ecosystem forever.” Even small acts of plastic waste reduction or using biodegradable products can help us get one step further to helping Silverwater Creek.
The Problem
Data from the University of Nature Protection (UNP) reveals that the creek’s water quality has deteriorated significantly, over the last two decades. The UNP discovered that levels of heavy metals and toxic chemicals have surpassed safe limits, with specific lead concentrations increasing by 40%, and mercury levels doubling. These contaminants originate from various sources, including nearby factories, agricultural runoff and untreated sewage. The accumulation of these pollutants disrupts the natural balance of the ecosystem, leading to the decline of amphibians and destruction of habitats. Addressing the pollution in Silverwater Creek is not about preserving the environment but safeguarding the health and safety of our community.
The Impact
The impact of Silverwater Creek’s pollution extends way beyond the environment, affecting the local neighbourhood’s quality of life. A survey conducted by the town mayor, found that residents living near the creek reported higher incidences of respiratory problems and skin conditions. Additionally, the once-thriving recreational activities like fishing and canoeing, have come to a halt due to safety concerns. Over 44% of residents expressed concern about the health risks associated with Silverwater Creek. The presence of harmful pollutants in the water not only endangers wildlife but also poses significant health concerns. The community’s connection to the creek has been served, leading to a loss of cultural and recreational value.
Community Voices
While the scientific data paints a grim picture, the voices of the community add a personal dimension to the severe crisis. John Mathews, a lifelong resident recalls, “I used to take my kids fishing here every Saturday. Now, I never dare let them near the water. It’s heartbreaking.” His sentimental anecdote is echoed by many who have witnessed the creeks decline firsthand. Sarah Thompson, a local teacher shares her concerns. “We used to come here for school field trips to learn about the world’s ecosystem, but now we have to find a new alternative because it’s too dangerous. This problem is both a loss to their education and our community.”
A Call for Action
The situation at Silverwater Creek is dire, but it’s not beyond repair. Experts like Dr. Williams advocate for a multi-faceted approach to tackle the pollution. “We need stricter regulations on industrial waste disposal, a better waste management, and community-driven clean-up initiatives.” she emphasises. “The local government must prioritize funding for environmental restoration projects and enforce stringent penalties for polluters.”
The Role of Education
Education plays a vital role in addressing the pollution crisis at Silverwater Creek. By incorporating environmental studies into school curriculums and organising community workshops, we can raise awareness about the importance of preserving our natural resources. Empowering the younger generation with knowledge and tools to protect the environment ensures that the efforts to save Silverwater Creek will continue for years to come.
A Vision for the Future
Imagine a future where Silverwater Creek is restored to its former glory-a vibrant atmosphere teeming with life, a safe haven for generations to enjoy. This insight is not a distant dream, but a tangible goal that requires collective effort. Community clean-up events, educational programs and sustainable practices can pave a way for a cleaner, healthier creek.
Join the movement
The fight to save Silverwater Creek is a fight for our environment, our health and our community. It is a call to action for every resident to take responsibility and contribute to the solution. By working together, we can turn the tide and ensure that Silverwater Creek flows clean and clear once more. Join us in this crucial endeavour, because every hand counts. To get involved in the efforts to restore Silverwater Creek, visit: https://www.helpthecreekwithus.com.au and sign up for upcoming clean-up events. Your participation can make a significant difference in preserving this precious natural resource, for generations to come.
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