Day 1 Writing Homework
Prompt:
Imagine spending a day helping animals at a rescue centre. You might care for injured animals, feed them, or clean their living spaces. 300 WORDS
Write a narrative (story) about your experience at the rescue centre and what you learned from it.
Think about:
The animals you helped and the tasks you completed.
How you felt while helping and what you learned.
How the day ended and why it was special.
Remember to:
Plan your story before you start.
Choose your words carefully.
Write in sentences.
Pay attention to spelling, punctuation, and paragraphs.
Check and edit your writing.
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- Due Date : January 8, 2025
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It was a warm summer day ,as I stepped in the field of daisies I pushed the gate behind me and felt sense excitement run down my spine I knew this is were I was meant to be.I heard the warm barks of energetic dogs witch made a warm smile on my face appear.As I washed the dogs smooth fur bubbles floated up in the bright sky making a reflection of the rescue centre.As I dried them off with a warm towl the all ran out of the tub to play.As I watched them a small kitten came up to me and rested on my lap!It was so adorable and its warm fur tickled me as it went to sleep but then woke up starting to fell hungry so I went to get some fresh cat food but when I came to feed the cat it looked much more bigger then i realised it was a older cat so I fed some food him as well. Then I saw something in the grass running around. What could it be? Then I saw a pink little nose peep out it running to me and then I found out it was a cute little guinea pig ! but its hair was all sticking up so I went back inside to a brush for the guinea pig. But when I came back he was gone but at that very moment I saw animal in the grass and I knew it was the guinea pig so i went to catch him we went back and fourth until I finally catched the cheeky guinea pig. It was sadly time to go but I did some combing until I had to say goodbye but I knew were I was going to visit on the weekends.So I left as the dogs gave cry but I gave them a treat and told them why I will come back so they were happy and I left with a smile I will always cherish that very moment.
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Aanya – FEEDBACK
As I opened the rescue centre gates, animals greeted me by wagging their tails to welcome me. I hear the noise of barking in the chorus of welcome. I started to bathe a filthy cat when it suddenly meowed thank you! I shivered with joy inside my body. Down underneath, there was a super cool lavatory. inside were all types of fish that I hardly knew. There was an angelfish the size of a hand, a deep sea cutter shark and many more. When I went to check out the right side, a ginormous shark appeared in sight. I knew this one because it was 10 times bigger than a great wihte. Its name was Megalodon. This is famous for its extinction and it is still alive. Occasionally, it is the only one left. Suddenly I realised this was the real ocean. I can tell it is the sea because there are other fish and lots of coral. this came to the end of the fantastic adventure and my shift. This made all the animals sad. I gave a foretell hand and promised to come back. I came out of the rescue centre happy and grateful.
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James Yang – FEEDBACK
I walked to the front of the animal sanctuary’s gleaming copper gates and pushed them open. When I skipped inside, I found myself surrounded with hungry, eager animals staring at me. As I went to get some food, the sudden smell of hay drifted into me. Then, I carefully picked up the right treats for the right animals bd started to feed. I spent most of my morning cleaning the hamster cages so they soon felt like smooth silk.
After lunch, I felt the sweat running down my neck as I combed the manes & tails of 6 different horses (half a hour). I also spent 20 mins giving a Labrador called Bella a bath. Bella’s tail tickled me so much, I could not stop giggling. What a crazy afternoon!
It was nearly time to go home. I spent the last few mins patting some fluffy animals. I left at 5:00 & I could not help grinning at the citrine yellow sun.
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Kiara Shah – FEEDBACK
Near my house is an animal rescue centre. I have always dreamed of what it would be like to work and volunteer at the rescue centre. I love animals very much, and it would be a good way to spend my time and help animals in need.
I can see myself cleaning animals, feeding them, and playing with them to make them feel loved. The animal shelter is a huge building with many animals behind steel cages and a waiting room filled with potential new pet owners.
I can hear the sound of dogs barking joyfully and cats purring after cleaning the cages. I imagine myself playing with the cats feeling their soft fur coats brushing against my hands. It reminded me of a nice cozy blanket.
After being washed with a fragrant shampoo, the dogs smelled like fresh butterflies falling from the sky. It was now time to feed the animals. When the animals were eating, they were cute and happy.
After my day at the shelter, I felt accomplished. I learned about taking care of animals and it made me feel happy.
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DAY 1 -Y3NAPLAN-Ethan – FEEDBACK
Lights flashed, and animals moved in a vibrant swirl of colour, making it suddenly hard to breathe. Nerves, I guess. It was the big day at the rescue centre. With a trembling hand, I pushed open the gate and felt the hot sun beating down on my back. I heard the soft meows of playful kittens and the cheerful barks of cute dogs wagging their tails. I saw a dirty little puppy with two tiny pupils and scruffy fur, so I took it for a bath. I cleaned its smooth fur gently as I felt a sense of calm wash over me I wiped its soft fur on a colourful towel. A pony called Rachel was waiting for her vibrant flowers to snack. As Rachel snacked on her flowers peacefully, her eyelids became heavy, and she fell asleep. I spent the afternoon brushing the majestic mane of the lion, who stood proudly. Now I had to clean the birds’ sanctuary; in return, they sang me a beautiful chorus. I saw the horizon with a shade of orange and pink. I knew it was time to go. I saw one of the animals heart beat with a mix of sadness and anticipation, a sweat trickled down my face because of the hard work today. I heard whines and whimpers. I took one look at the rescue centre and left with a warm smile on my face, and I knew I would never forget this remarkable and unforgettable day
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