Day 2 Writing Homework
- October 1, 2024
- 3:06 pm
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WRITING HOMEWORK :
Answer the question in a Persuasive Essay (300- 500 words). Be sure to use the 3 modes of Persuasion in your essay? Follow the PEEL structure.
Is a high school education necessary for a successful career?
3 PEEL PARAGRAPHS (Don’t worry about introduction and conclusion) – 3 separate points about why/why not a high school education is necessary.
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High school education is necessary for a successful career.
Without a shadow of doubt, I believe that high school education is necessary for a successful career. Using recent research, studies have shown that the majority of the people who completed high school education have achieved a great professional outcome. Even the great scientist of all time, Albert Einstein recommended high school.
High school is a fantastic place to meet new people from similar age group,expand your social circle and form life long friendships, which in turn can help you grow in your career.
High school not only teaches academics but also vocational courses like wood work, food technology, music, drama, and sports. These important skills that you learn will unlock many options to build your career. You might even need these skills in your personal life. Instead of buying pizza you can bake it yourself. And when you want to have something made out of wood, just build it with your carpentry skill. And when you are bored, and need quality pass time you can join a local tennis or soccer club.
Every single grown up person in my family has attended a high school, completed graduation in a university and have been financially independent, which proves that high school education plays an important role in the journey to independence.
You might not realise it, but high school actually teaches you valuable lessons. Instead of skipping high school, stay and learn. High school will also teach you good professional ethics such as punctuality, value of time and hard and sincere work. All these values are important ingredients for the recipe of personal, social and professional excellence.
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Sheetal Paranjape
Have you ever wanted to be sucessful when you grow up? Do you know the best way to achieve that? Well, today i’m going go tell you why a high school education is essential for a successful career.
First and foremost, high school teaches you all the basics of complex work. Take maths for example: at high school you would learn algebra, and if you don’t have that skill, when you try to apply for a job related to fianance nothing will suit you, since you didn’t learn the basics at school. You’ll need a full mind of knowledge and determination for any job you choose.
Additionally, high school is a great way to expand your social skills. From making new friends to chatting online, friends and family support you wherever you go. Public speaking is very important for any job you apply for. Even if you work at a fast food resturant, you’ll have to use your voice for many challenges in life, including a job. Going to high school helps you develop these skills that you will use for the rest of your entire life.
Lastly, High school will help you in university and even your resumé. If you have a lot of extra cirricular classes in high school, you will have more skills and more oppurtunites in life. Even if it’s just learning a sport, if you practice hard enough in high school, it’ll be a piece of cake later in life. So if you go to high school soon, i recommend trying out for any extra cirricular subject or sport, to have a better job and life.
Education, social skills and extra cirricular avtivities are all great examples of ways high school can help you in real life. So next time you question yourself, your parents or your teachers about why you need high school, keep my words in your mind.
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Emily Chen
Firstly primary school doesn’t teach much so many kids study at tutoring,so they study for selective which is high school.Primary is mostly classified as ‘easy’ but it’s because primary aged kids are younger and younger kids struggle with work.
Secondly,in high school you learn more advanced things that you do not get to learn in primary .If you just jump into the basics at a young age your brain will not be able to process it.
Thirdly,high school provides many opportunities to get a good job which is crucial in the future, and your own good. In the future you could get a husband/wife, wealth and happieness all by completing a couple extra years of school.
Thank you for your effort. Your essay falls short of the required 300-500-word count, possibly omitting some key ideas. Please expand it to include all class concepts and resubmit. I believe you can reach this goal!