Day 10 Writing Homework
Write a strategic email asking your school to extend the school holiday that utilises all the techniques discussed in class such as audience adaptation, content structure and a strategic conclusion. No word count. Make it short and sweet if possible.
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Dear Principal,
I am writing to you very sincerely to discuss the issue of an extended school holiday. I believe that this change would not only provide a longer relief for students, but can contribute to improved focus among students and much more.
The intention behind this request is not simply to seek more relaxing time, but to ensure that both students and staff have the adequate opportunity to rest and regenerate before returning to another term. As you are aware, the past few months have been filled with rigorous coursework, numerous assessments, and extensive co-curricular commitments. While these experiences are enriching and valuable, they have also contributed to significant levels of boredom among many students. An additional day or two of rest could play a crucial role in restoring focus, motivation, and overall mental health: factors that directly influence academic performance and classroom engagement.
Research on students consistently shows that rest and recovery are vital to sustaining motivation and productivity. When students return to school feeling refreshed, they are reported to perform better academically, engage more positively with teachers and peers, and contribute more effectively to class discussions and extracurricular activities. From a broader perspective, this small change could help strengthen the learning environment by fostering a culture that values balance as much as achievement.
In addition, extending the holiday slightly could also be seen as a gesture of recognition for the dedication and hard work demonstrated by both students and staff this term. Teachers, too, invest immense time and energy into lesson preparation, feedback, and student support. A brief pause could provide everyone in the school community with a well-deserved opportunity to recharge, ultimately benefiting the quality of teaching and learning upon our return.
I completely understand that adjustments to the school calendar require careful consideration, and I assure you that this request comes with genuine respect for the practical constraints involved. Even a single additional day could make a meaningful difference in morale and performance across the school.
Thank you very much for your time and understanding. I appreciate your dedication to maintaining a school culture that values both hard work and holistic wellbeing. I am sure that your thoughtful consideration of this request will continue to inspire students to do their very best when the next term begins.
Warm regards,
Wesley Liang
IF PRINCIPAL WAS YOUR DAD
Hi Dad,
I know you are very busy at school, and I really respect how much effort you put into keeping everything running smoothly. I’m writing this not just as your child, but as a student who’s been thinking carefully about how the recent term has gone for everyone. It’s been a long, busy stretch, and I wanted to suggest something that might benefit both the students and the staff: a short extension to the upcoming school holiday.
Before you roll your eyes, hear me out! This isn’t just about wanting lazy days, although I admit that would be nice. It’s more about recovery and productivity. The past term has been particularly intense, filled with heavy homework, rehearsals, sports carnivals, and extracurricular events. Many students (and teachers, too) are feeling drained. A slightly longer break, maybe even just one or two extra days, could make a real difference in how refreshed and motivated everyone feels when we return.
Studies show that rest isn’t merely wasted time; it’s an investment in focus and creativity. After long stretches of sustained effort, the brain needs space to reset. I’ve noticed that when students come back from holidays feeling rested, they’re more engaged in class, more enthusiastic about learning, and better at managing stress. Teachers, too, benefit from that same sense of renewal, and when they’re energised, the whole atmosphere of the school improves.
I know there are practical challenges to adjusting the schedule like curriculum requirements, term lengths, and coordination with external events. But perhaps there’s room for a creative solution: adding a professional development day that doubles as a student rest day, or even shifting one of the term dates slightly. It doesn’t have to be a big change to make a big difference.
I’m proud of how our school encourages balance, striving for excellence while caring for wellbeing. Extending the holiday, even briefly, would send a powerful message that rest and hard work go hand in hand. It would show students that you value our health just as much as our achievements.
So that’s my case, not just as your kid lobbying for more time off, but as a student who genuinely believes this could make our school community stronger. Thanks for listening, Dad. I know you’ll give it fair thought (even if you laugh about it at dinner tonight).
Love,
Wesley Liang
IF THE PRINCIPAL WAS YOUR PRINCIPAL
Dear Principal,
I am writing to you very sincerely to discuss the issue of an extended school holiday. I believe that this change would not only provide a longer relief for students, but can contribute to improved focus among students and much more.
The intention behind this request is not simply to seek more relaxing time, but to ensure that both students and staff have the adequate opportunity to rest and regenerate before returning to another term. As you are aware, the past few months have been filled with rigorous coursework, numerous assessments, and extensive co-curricular commitments. While these experiences are enriching and valuable, they have also contributed to significant levels of boredom among many students. An additional day or two of rest could play a crucial role in restoring focus, motivation, and overall mental health: factors that directly influence academic performance and classroom engagement.
Research on students consistently shows that rest and recovery are vital to sustaining motivation and productivity. When students return to school feeling refreshed, they are reported to perform better academically, engage more positively with teachers and peers, and contribute more effectively to class discussions and extracurricular activities. From a broader perspective, this small change could help strengthen the learning environment by fostering a culture that values balance as much as achievement.
In addition, extending the holiday slightly could also be seen as a gesture of recognition for the dedication and hard work demonstrated by both students and staff this term. Teachers, too, invest immense time and energy into lesson preparation, feedback, and student support. A brief pause could provide everyone in the school community with a well-deserved opportunity to recharge, ultimately benefiting the quality of teaching and learning upon our return.
I completely understand that adjustments to the school calendar require careful consideration, and I assure you that this request comes with genuine respect for the practical constraints involved. Even a single additional day could make a meaningful difference in morale and performance across the school.
Thank you very much for your time and understanding. I appreciate your dedication to maintaining a school culture that values both hard work and holistic wellbeing. I am sure that your thoughtful consideration of this request will continue to inspire students to do their very best when the next term begins.
Warm regards,
Wesley Liang
IF THE PRINCIPAL WAS YOUR DAD
Hi Dad,
I know you are very busy at school, and I really respect how much effort you put into keeping everything running smoothly. I’m writing this not just as your child, but as a student who’s been thinking carefully about how the recent term has gone for everyone. It’s been a long, busy stretch, and I wanted to suggest something that might benefit both the students and the staff: a short extension to the upcoming school holiday.
Before you roll your eyes, hear me out! This isn’t just about wanting lazy days, although I admit that would be nice. It’s more about recovery and productivity. The past term has been particularly intense, filled with heavy homework, rehearsals, sports carnivals, and extracurricular events. Many students (and teachers, too) are feeling drained. A slightly longer break, maybe even just one or two extra days, could make a real difference in how refreshed and motivated everyone feels when we return.
Studies show that rest isn’t merely wasted time; it’s an investment in focus and creativity. After long stretches of sustained effort, the brain needs space to reset. I’ve noticed that when students come back from holidays feeling rested, they’re more engaged in class, more enthusiastic about learning, and better at managing stress. Teachers, too, benefit from that same sense of renewal, and when they’re energised, the whole atmosphere of the school improves.
I know there are practical challenges to adjusting the schedule like curriculum requirements, term lengths, and coordination with external events. But perhaps there’s room for a creative solution: adding a professional development day that doubles as a student rest day, or even shifting one of the term dates slightly. It doesn’t have to be a big change to make a big difference.
I’m proud of how our school encourages balance, striving for excellence while caring for wellbeing. Extending the holiday, even briefly, would send a powerful message that rest and hard work go hand in hand. It would show students that you value our health just as much as our achievements.
So that’s my case, not just as your kid lobbying for more time off, but as a student who genuinely believes this could make our school community stronger. Thanks for listening, Dad. I know you’ll give it fair thought (even if you laugh about it at dinner tonight).
Love,
Wesley Liang
Please see the attached PDF for the feedback.
1-10(10)-Wesley L
As a student
Dear Principal,
I hope this message finds you well.
As a proud student of St Francis Xavier, I truly appreciate the school’s dedication to both academic excellence and student wellbeing. With that in mind, I’d like to kindly request your consideration in extending the upcoming school holiday by an additional day or two.
Many students have shared that this brief extension would allow for better rest, time with family, and a more refreshed return ultimately enhancing focus and productivity once school resumes. We believe this small adjustment could have a significant positive impact on overall student morale and performance.
We trust in your wisdom to weigh what’s best for the school community, and we appreciate your time and thoughtful consideration.
Warm regards,
Jacob Bu
5 Green
As a son
Hi Dad,
I hope you’re doing well today. I wanted to talk to you about something that’s been on a lot of students’ minds lately. With how full and intense the term has been, many of us were wondering if it might be possible to extend the upcoming school holiday by a day or two.
It feels like everyone’s been running on low energy these past few weeks, and a little more time off could really help us rest, reset, and come back to school in a better headspace. Even teachers might appreciate the extra breather to prepare and recharge.
Of course, I know there’s a lot to consider and that the final decision rests on what’s best for the whole school. But I thought it was worth bringing up, not just as your kid, but as a student who really cares about the school community.
Thanks for taking the time to think it over.
Love,
Your child,
Jacob
Please see the attached PDF for the feedback.
1-10(10)-kathleenhao@gmail.com
FORMAL VERSION:
Dear Mrs Ward,
I hope this email finds you well. I am writing to kindly request an extension of the upcoming school holidays. Recent events and unforeseen circumstances, such as increased stress levels due to upcoming exams, health concerns, or other personal matters, have led me to believe that an extension of the holiday period would greatly benefit both students and staff. The additional time off would allow everyone to recharge and return to school feeling more refreshed and better prepared for the remainder of the term.
Given the current academic schedule we’ve faced in recent weeks, the standard holiday break appears to be insufficient for the students to fully rest and prepare for the upcoming schoolwork. Many students are experiencing fatigue and headaches during the day, and an extended break would provide them with the much needed time to manage these difficulties. This extra time could also help in enhancing their overall well being and mental health, allowing them to return to their studies with focus.
Furthermore, an extension of the holidays would also allow families to address any personal matters that may have arisen during the academic term. Some students are currently dealing with extra stress due to the selective exams and a longer break would provide them with an opportunity to deal with this without the added stress of school. This extension could ensure that students return to school in a better mental and emotional state, ready to engage with their studies.
In addition to benefiting the students, an extended holiday would give the teaching staff an opportunity to better prepare for the upcoming term. With the additional time off, teachers would have the chance to revise lesson plans, assess progress, and incorporate any necessary changes to improve the learning experience. This would allow for a more structured and effective educational environment when students return to class, ensuring that everyone is on the same page and that the learning process is as smooth as possible.
I fully understand that extending the holiday break is a significant decision and that it requires careful consideration of all potential implications. However, I believe that the benefits of providing students and staff with additional time to rest and reset would far outweigh any challenges posed by the change. I would be grateful if you could take this request into account. Thank you for your time and understanding.
INFORMAL VERSION:
Hey mum,
How are you doing? Can you please extend the school holidays for 2 weeks? Some of my classmates are saying that they’re really stressed because of the selective exams and that they want a bit more holiday time to just rest at home. Also, some friends mentioned that they’ve been really tired because of finishing up assignments and homework. Also, the teachers can plan a bit more and get organised.
Mum, with everything that’s been going on lately with school, I really feel like the holiday break just isn’t enough for everyone to fully rest. A lot of us have been feeling drained, some even getting headaches during the day. If we had a little more time off, it would really give us a chance to recharge physically and mentally. I think it would help us come back to school feeling a lot more focused and ready to handle the work.
Also, extending the holiday would give families a chance to take care of personal things that have come up during the term. A lot of students are feeling extra stressed because of selective exams, and a longer break would give them the time to handle that without worrying about school on top of it. It would really help everyone come back in a better headspace—more mentally and emotionally ready to dive back into their studies.
Also, a longer break wouldn’t just help the students, teachers could really use it too. It’d give them a bit of breathing room to sort out their lesson plans, see what’s working and what’s not, and make any changes they need to. That way, when we all come back, things can run a lot smoother and everyone’s on the same page, which makes learning way easier for everyone.
I know that it’s an important decision to make but it would really give students more time to just rest at home and it can give families to sort out personal things. The teacher would also benefit from this extra break since they will get to plan and organise more. Extending the holidays would me really good for all of us and will benefit everyone. Could you extend the holidays for two weeks?
Please see the attached PDF for the feedback.
1-10(10)-may
Samuel
Day 10 Samuel
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1-10(10)-Samuel Kang
Here is my 361 words email (Semi-formal email word count –> 156, Formal email word count –> 205).
https://docs.google.com/document/d/108nAIp-kvSUog8EOnsse4IlgO3pAwOp6PomS7e1k3Xs/edit?usp=sharing
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1-10(10)-Srimaan