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Write 200 – 300 words on whether you think cats are better than dogs or vice versa. Ensure you use evidence in the forms discussed in class along with strong opening and closing points.
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Dogs are better than cats
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1-10(4)-Lachlan Tan
Imagine a final showdown of a rivalry being what and what. You might think a strong rivalry is like a leopard to a tiger, a monkey to an ape, but this one beats all rivalries in this world. Cats vs Dogs. For many years, countless ancestors of ours have been debating about the final showdown, and which is better. For countless decades, we have finally received an answer. It is absolutely a universal truth that cats are better than dogs. Sure, they’re both cute. Sure, they’re both cool. Sure, they’re huggable, but most importantly, both share a rivalry between each other.Cats are definitely better than dogs.
Imagine being as lazy as Garfield, where everything basically goes his way. He gets everything he wants, food to have as a late-night snack, a pet dog and sleep. This is all you need to become as relaxed as you want, with no interruptions at night, then taking you hostage. Cats do exactly that. Cats just eat food, have fun with you and sleep with no disturbances, unlike dogs. Dogs bark at any scent, at any unfamiliar person. It’s only trying to protect you, but it makes too many disturbances.
While others say dogs are a man’s best friend, I say cats are my best friend. Not only do they live longer than dogs, cats don’t need to occupy that much space compared to dogs. Just a few toys, possibly a cat tower, a litter box and a waterer. Dogs need a dog bed, which can sometimes cost a lot, and they make a mess of everything when you’re at work. Imagine yourself, being a dog, thinking a ball is under the sofa. You push your large body into the small gap, only to charge straight at the wall with the sofa blocking your view. You broke your owner’s vase on the tabletop where you crashed into. What a mess!
And that is why, cats are better than dogs.
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1-10(4) – Alexander Wu
Here is my 446 words essay. Sorry for the extra 146 words.
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1-10(4) – Buddi
Cats or Dogs
For decades, the debate over whether dogs or cats make better companions has divided animal lovers. While cats have their cute charms, dogs consistently prove themselves to be the superior choice for companionship, loyalty, and emotional support. Their intelligence, adaptability, and ability to connect deeply with humans make them far more than pets. Dogs are truly man’s best friend.
One of the strongest reasons dogs are better than cats is their loyalty. Dogs form bonds with people that are unmatched in the animal kingdom. They wait patiently by the door for their owners to return home, wagging their tails in excitement. They protect families with a sense of responsibility that comes naturally. History is filled with stories of dogs that saved lives, warned of danger, or stayed faithfully beside their owners until the end. Cats, by contrast, are more independent and often aloof. While this independence appeals to some, it cannot compare with the warmth of a dog’s unwavering devotion.
Dogs are also remarkably versatile. They serve roles that cats cannot. Guide dogs provide independence for the visually impaired, therapy dogs bring comfort to hospital patients, and police dogs help solve crimes. Their intelligence and willingness to be trained allow them to contribute to society in meaningful ways. Cats, although entertaining and sometimes affectionate, cannot match this level of service. A dog is not only a pet but also a working partner and a helper.
Another compelling advantage is the health benefit dogs bring to their owners. Research has shown that dog owners are more active, as walking a dog encourages daily exercise. This routine lowers stress, improves heart health, and promotes stronger social connections, since dog walking often leads to conversations with other people. Cats may provide companionship, but they do not encourage the same physical activity or outdoor lifestyle. Dogs inspire healthier, happier living simply by being part of a household.
Finally, dogs bring joy through their enthusiasm. Whether bounding across a park, greeting their owners with pure delight, or curling up by the couch, their presence is a constant source of comfort. Their personalities shine in ways that bring laughter and love to a home. While cats may provide quiet companionship, they rarely display the same eagerness to please or to share joy.
Further statistics prove my point. The Statistical Global Consumer Survey reports that most major countries around the world have a significantly higher amount of dog-preferers than cat-lovers. On average, there are 21% more! This proves that dogs are superior.
For all these reasons, dogs stand out as the better choice. Their loyalty, usefulness, and ability to improve human lives make them exceptional companions. A dog is not just an animal in the house. It is a friend, a protector, and a source of unconditional love. Cats may entertain, but dogs transform lives.
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1-10(4) – Wesley L
Dogs or cats? That question has been asked countless times in the last few years and many people have concluded that one is better than the other depending on needs and lifestyle. However, when looking at the unique qualities of both animals, it is clear that cats are on the upper hand, compared to dogs. Cats, with their independent personality, low maintenance requirements and calming presence are superior to dogs. While dogs can bring energy and affection to someone, it is the calming nature of cats that attract many people.
One of the most recognised qualities of cats are their independence. Unlike dogs who require constant attention, cats are willing to spend time on their own. A study conducted by the Australian Board of Statistics has shown that 79% of cat owners have reported that their cats are happy to spend time by themselves, whereas only 24% of dog owners have reported the same. This characteristic allows cats to thrive in a diverse variety of living environments without requiring too much from owners.
Cats are generally much less maintenance than dogs. Dogs require daily walks, constant supervision when outdoors and need a lot of time and attention to feel content. In contrast, cats are more capable to entertain themselves without constant monitoring and attention. Studies have also proved that on average, a cat only needs 15-20 minutes of human interaction per day, making cats a perfect companion for most households.
One of the most overlooked factor of cats are their calming presence. The gentle purring of a cat from far away can be have a soothing effect, reducing stress from work. Many cat owners have also mentioned that patting a cat to be calming and relaxing. A study from 2008 has shown that cats are shown to reduce stress from patients with anxiety.
It is clear that that cats are on the upper hand when compared to dogs. They are independent, low maintenance and soothing to their owners, unlike dogs who can bring more stress. The next time someone asks you cats or dogs, think carefully, pick cats.
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1-10(4) – may
Dogs are better than cats because they provide stronger emotional bonds, greater usefulness, and deeper human connections, proven by science and real-world application. Emotionally, dogs have been shown to reduce stress, anxiety, and depression more effectively than cats. A 2021 study published in PLOS One found that dog owners were significantly more likely to report higher life satisfaction and lower levels of loneliness than cat owners. As anyone struggling with mental health can understand the comfort of a loyal dog curled up beside them after a long day.
Logically, dogs offer more practical benefits. According to the American Kennel Club, dogs can be trained to perform over 50 different tasks, including guiding the blind, alerting deaf individuals, and even detecting medical conditions like low blood sugar or seizures. Cats, while independent, lack this versatility. This clear difference appeals to dogs actively improve their owners’ safety and independence.
From an ethical and credibility standpoint , dogs have long-standing relationships with humans based on mutual work and loyalty. According to Smithsonian Magazine, dogs were domesticated as far back as 20,000 years ago to assist humans with hunting and protection. Their role as service animals, police dogs, and search-and-rescue partners continues today.
In short, dogs don’t just live with us they serve, support, and connect with us in ways cats rarely do. That’s what makes them the better companion.
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1-10(4)-jacob bu
Why dogs are better than cats:
In the never ending war between cats and dogs, I firmly agree that dogs are better than cats for various reasons. While cats have their own comfort zone, dogs have loyalty in keeping every surrounding safe. Cats might have that feeling of being lazy, but dogs have energy to walk and take care of their owner. In today’s argument about why dogs are better than cats, I will be explaining in depth about what is behind the mind of a dog.
In this generation, there have been many takeovers by Artificial intelligence making it more difficult for cats to adapt to new routines or human needs. Cats like it when they are isolated as they get their own comfort zone for example, ignoring commands or attempting to train them. But… on the other hand, dogs are like robots and are always welcomed to do a task. Dogs know how to find their ways and solve problems by themselves.
Secondly, dogs have loyalty. When I say the word loyalty, there is another meaning that is helping people in need. While some people are completely fine, can walk or can see, there are some people in the world who might have some disability for example seeing. As dogs have been well trained, some dogs offer to help required people in need, meaning that they need more training. By dogs doing this, it will help people in need to find their location.
And last but not the least,Furthermore, dogs offer emotional support in a way cats rarely do. After a long day, a dog will greet its owner with excitement and is always ready to bring comfort and joy. By dogs comforting their owner, this shows care and respect towards each other.
In conclusion, while cats have their place in some homes, dogs prove why they are considered loving and cared for as best friends.” Their loyalty, energy and emotions set them apart as not just pets, but true companions in a fast-changing world.
Why dogs are better than cats
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1-10(4)-Priyanka
Choosing the perfect pet can be tricky, right? But honestly, I think cats are better than dogs. Dogs can be loud, needy, and full of energy, but cats? Cats are independent, clever, and emotionally comforting. From my own experience, they bring a quiet kind of happiness that lasts all day. Here’s why I think cats make the best pets.
First, cats are independent. Isn’t it nice to have a pet that doesn’t constantly need your attention? Last summer, I visited a friend, and her cat Ginger kept me company without being clingy. She curled up beside me while I read or chatted, and I felt calm just having her there. Actually, studies show that 71% of cat owners say their cats are easier to take care of than dogs. Unlike dogs, cats are happy to relax on their own, which is perfect for busy people—or anyone who just wants some peace and quiet.
Cats are also clever. Have you ever seen a cat do something and just thought, “Wow, how did they do that?” Ginger once opened a cabinet just to get her toys, which completely amazed me. Research shows that cats are excellent problem-solvers and can learn by watching, which makes them endlessly interesting and fun to be around.
Finally, cats are emotionally comforting. Can just a few minutes with a furry friend really make you feel calmer? I know it does for me. During a stressful week at school, petting Ginger for a few minutes helped me feel relaxed and happy. Studies even show that 65% of cat owners feel less stressed when spending time with their cats. Unlike dogs, who show love loudly, cats give quiet comfort—and sometimes that’s exactly what you need.
In conclusion, cats are independent, clever, and emotionally comforting. My experiences with Ginger, along with research, show how amazing cats are. So if you want a pet that loves you without always needing attention, why wouldn’t you choose a cat?
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1-10(4)-Riya Prabhakaran
cats are better than dogs! -nikita
CATS ARE BETTER THAN DOGS
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1-10(4)-N __
Dogs or Cats? A question asked since the start of time. Everyone is divided and has their own opinions, but let me guarantee you something for sure: dogs are far superior to cats for an abundance of reasons, including their companionship, service to humans, and the health benefits you get from raising one. While some people may prefer the quiet company of cats, we must not forget that a dog is a man’s best friend.
Firstly, dogs are better than cats because of their unwavering affection. Imagine a blue sky, you’re outside with your furry best friend running carefree. You fall onto the soft, lush grass, giggling as he wags his tail, bringing you back the ball. Now imagine staying at home in the darkness, away from the wonderful adventures outside—isolated. Cats interact far less with their owners in comparison to dogs, and when they do, it’s often out of necessity. A cat is a creature that doesn’t let you go out even if it stays at home—a creature that uses you only when it needs something, and often doesn’t even acknowledge your presence. Dogs are the spark of joy in your life– always eager to spend their time with you. They are the ones who wait for you when you get home, unlike some others who disappear for hours and even days, only to come back when they need something. Can we really call this “independence” when it feels like emotional distance?
Furthermore, dogs are better than cats because they can be trained as service dogs. Cats, on the other hand, tend to be more passive, often content with staying still, grooming and silently observing. Dogs save lives and have helped thousands of people. According to the American Humane Society Organisation, “service dogs can reduce stress and anxiety levels, mitigate depression, ease social reintegration, provide comfort, and restore confidence in affected veterans and first responders by more than 73%.” This is what Christina, a Woodland firefighter and EMT, had to say: “Freja has been the most wonderful partner for me. She has learned nightmare and anxiety interruption, does deep pressure therapy and crowd control. On top of all this, she gives me constant love and attention. She is my best friend.” This shows that dogs help humans; they’re not attention-seeking or dependent on you. They unquestionably love you and are always willing to help.
Finally, dogs are better than cats because raising one can bring many health benefits. Now, I know that you don’t like exercising. No one does nowadays— not because you don’t care about your health, but because of laziness and lack of motivation. However, exercise is crucial for a healthy lifestyle, so why not make it easier by taking a dog with you on a walk or run? Dogs are very active and always energetic. By taking your dog, you can cancel out laziness, thus regaining the consistency and motivation you lost when having a cat who wanted to stay indoors for the majority of the day, fiddling with the toys you buy them. By simply choosing a dog rather than a cat, you will see many positive differences in your lifestyle. This is backed up by the Chameleon Effect. The National Library of Medicine states, “The chameleon effect refers to non-conscious mimicry of the postures, mannerisms, facial expressions, and other behaviours of one’s interaction partners, such that one’s behaviour passively and unintentionally changes to match that of others in one’s current social environment.” This proves that by having a dog, you can potentially be influenced by it to have a healthy lifestyle. Dr Thomas Lee, the co-chief of Harvard Health Publishing, states in an article by Harvard Medical School, “People who have dogs live longer than people who have cats, with dogs naturally causing the owners to be more active.” National libraries, master doctors, and even one of the best universities in the world all agree on this. So, should there even be a second thought?
To conclude, dogs are far better than cats for various reasons, including their warm interactions with humans, their ability to save lives as service dogs, and even helping you live a healthier, longer life. Dogs are like the stars in the night sky. Their affection is the light that warms even the darkest moments, their guidance is a glow that shows us the way, and their playful energy is radiant in a life like the night sky. Cats may drift as comets, nice to see but not always there, but dogs are the constellations we can always count on. So the next time you stumble across this controversial question, you know what to choose: dogs.
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1-10(4)-anshika-rajeshkannan
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1-10(124)- Samuel Kang
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