Day 1 Writing Homework
Prompt :
Write a passionate 400–500 word persuasive piece supporting physical libraries. Your writing should convince others that libraries with real books are essential for our communities. Structure your work using this outline: 1. Introduction: Set the stage with a formal address and your main argument 2. Societal & Cultural Value: Discuss libraries as community hubs 3. Technological Inclusivity: Explain how libraries bridge the digital divide 4. Environmental Stewardship: Compare sustainability of books vs digital 5. Conclusion & Call to Action: Powerful closing with clear actions Requirements: – Use at least 6 words from our vocabulary bank – Include at least 5 different persuasive techniques
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Dear local councils, I strongly believe that physical libraries are really important because they can connect people together, help people with no digital devices to learn and books are way more environmentally friendly then electronics. Would you really want a world where entertainment on devices thrives for a few years but the environment degrades when we can all just read books to help restore the damage that these deadly machines had made?
First of all, physical libraries are community hubs, they can socialize people in real life. Whereas staring at a computer all day and not socializing can lower self esteem. Scientists researched that all humans need real life connections with each other the most then other living objects on Earth. Therefore libraries play a crucial role to boost self esteem.
Moreover, people with no electronic devices can go to libraries to read books and learn new important things in life. Libraries can also save you a LOT of money as you know devices cost a lot of money to even buy and you need internet, charging and more. But these awesome physical places are free, no need to have internet and pay for books.
Finally, libraries are way more environmentally friendly then digital devices, these deadly machines make e-waste, use tons of power from fossil fuels and release greenhouse gases from production and disposal processes which harms both humans and living organisms and could lead to climate change.
Alternatively, some may say that digital devices can provide instant entertainment and learning. But all of these together can cause degraded mental health, headaches and vitamin d loss because you are staying in all day.
In conclusion, physical libraries are not just about books—they are about people, community, learning, and protecting our planet. They give everyone equal opportunities to gain knowledge, they strengthen real-life human connections, and they safeguard the environment from the harmful impacts of digital waste. While devices may seem convenient, they come at a dangerous cost to our health and our world. Therefore, I urge local councils to value, protect, and expand physical libraries so that future generations can continue to learn, connect, and thrive in a healthier, more sustainable way.
In conclusion,
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2-Y5RWD1-Kurtis Lee
Dear local councils, I strongly believe that physical libraries are really important because they can connect people together, help people with no digital devices to learn and books are way more environmentally friendly then electronics. Would you really want a world where entertainment on devices thrives for a few years but the environment degrades when we can all just read books to help restore the damage that these deadly machines had made?
First of all, physical libraries are community hubs, they can socialize people in real life. Whereas staring at a computer all day and not socializing can lower self esteem. Scientists researched that all humans need real life connections with each other the most then other living objects on Earth. Therefore libraries play a crucial role to boost self esteem.
Moreover, people with no electronic devices can go to libraries to read books and learn new important things in life. Libraries can also save you a LOT of money as you know devices cost a lot of money to even buy and you need internet, charging and more. But these awesome physical places are free, no need to have internet and pay for books.
Finally, libraries are way more environmentally friendly then digital devices, these deadly machines make e-waste, use tons of power from fossil fuels and release greenhouse gases from production and disposal processes which harms both humans and living organisms and could lead to climate change.
Alternatively, some may say that digital devices can provide instant entertainment and learning. But all of these together can cause degraded mental health, headaches and vitamin d loss because you are staying in all day.
In conclusion, physical libraries are not just about books—they are about people, community, learning, and protecting our planet. They give everyone equal opportunities to gain knowledge, they strengthen real-life human connections, and they safeguard the environment from the harmful impacts of digital waste. While devices may seem convenient, they come at a dangerous cost to our health and our world. Therefore, I urge local councils to value, protect, and expand physical libraries so that future generations can continue to learn, connect, and thrive in a healthier, more sustainable way.
In conclusion, physical libraries are not just about books—they are about people, community, learning, and protecting our planet. They give everyone equal opportunities to gain knowledge, they strengthen real-life human connections, and they keep the environment from the harmful impacts of digital waste. While devices may seem convenient, they come at a dangerous cost to our health and our world. Therefore, I urge local councils to value, protect, and expand physical libraries so that future generations can continue to learn, connect, and thrive in a healthier, more sustainable way.
Dear esteemed residents,
Before, when you used to venture into your local library, what would you see? I would probably be full of neighbors and residents leisurely reading a book on a nearby couch. But now, when technology arises, barely anyone comes into the building, unable to attract a single customer without having to add computers for gaming. Now, the council wants to tear the structure, bit by bit, and transform the remains into a arcade. Unfortunately, breaking down such facility could lead to massive impacts. So let me state on why we should protect our local physical libraries harm.
To start things off, libraries are basically the foundation of all technology. Without books for the public, ordinary citizens will have absolutely no chance to even learn to use a laptop. Take this for an example: A totally new resident who came from the countryside without any devices, come to a automation-filled city with some of the most complex mechanization and not one piece of paper (AKA; Books) in sight. Only he doesn’t know anything about iphones and Macs in the town. So when he tries to learn about it more accurately than he was told, it was almost impossible. Without books around, everything educational is on screens. And since he doesn’t understand one bit of science, there is definitely no way to grasp any idea on how to use a device properly.
Another reason is that using the library can make people have a much more higher chance for being successful than those who don’t. Bill Gates for instance, reads 50 entire novel nooks per year. Elon Musk read the whole Encyclopedia Britannica at nine years old. And you ought to know it but the Encyclopedia Britannica has approximately 44 million words whilst regular novels hold about 70,000 to 100,000 words. So unless a life of a shopkeeper suites you, libraries should still be here.
My final point is that with libraries, community relationship will undoubtedly be much more of a thing in a technological life. When people meet at the library, they can build bonds with strangers, make friends with the registration person and discuss topics of series with neighbors. With this sense of belonging around the area, no only will the unknown be together, once-broken relationships can be repair by just sitting in a quiet corner and promising to make up for their mistakes.
So now you have found out the reasons for the protection against the destruction of our public libraries, I hope you are officially convinced and is willing to help. Although there are reasons why our gracious building should be destroyed, there will inevitably be more pros than cons.
Regards,
Billy goat
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Day 1 Writing Homework
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2-Y5RWD1-Austin zhou
Dear fellow citizens, educators, and policymakers,
In an age dominated by screens and fleeting digital interactions, I stand before you with a resolute conviction: physical libraries—those sanctuaries of real books, quiet reflection, and communal learning—are not relics of the past. They are indispensable pillars of our present and future. To dismantle or diminish them is to sever a vital artery in the heart of our communities.
📚 Societal & Cultural Value: Libraries as Community Hubs Libraries are more than buildings filled with books—they are vibrant ecosystems of connection, equity, and imagination. They foster intergenerational dialogue, host cultural events, and provide safe spaces for children, seniors, and everyone in between. In a world increasingly fragmented by isolation and noise, libraries offer a rare antidote: a place where curiosity is cultivated and civility is practiced. They are the cornerstone of a literate, empathetic society.
💻 Technological Inclusivity: Bridging the Digital Divide While the internet promises access, it often delivers inequality. Millions still lack reliable connectivity, devices, or digital literacy. Libraries democratize technology by offering free Wi-Fi, public computers, and expert guidance. They empower marginalized voices and ensure that no one is left behind in the digital revolution. To remove this lifeline is to widen the chasm between the privileged and the underserved.
🌱 Environmental Stewardship: Books vs. Digital Consumption Contrary to popular belief, physical books are often more sustainable than their digital counterparts. E-readers and tablets require rare earth minerals, frequent charging, and contribute to electronic waste. A well-bound book, however, can endure for decades—passed from hand to hand, generation to generation. Libraries promote reuse, reduce consumption, and embody the principles of environmental stewardship. They are the original circular economy.
🔥 Conclusion & Call to Action: Defend What Matters Let us not be seduced by the illusion that progress means abandoning tradition. Libraries are not obsolete—they are irreplaceable. I urge you to advocate for funding, visit your local branch, volunteer, and speak out. Share your stories. Defend these bastions of knowledge with the same fervor we reserve for our most cherished institutions.
Because when we protect libraries, we protect access, equity, sustainability, and the soul of our communities.
My Homework
Dear readers
Would you want our precious library to go away or would you want our libraries to stay? We could have our libraries for longevity health, curiosity and to interact with people.
My first reason is for health. If you walk, you will have a good heart and stay heathy. The thing is that if you can be healthy you can ; live forever. You can see the libraries, see the books you want rather than scrolling on your phone to find a book . Data says that many people are scrolling on their phones on Australia and less people are going to libraries. You need to digital divide for your phone and go out. If you want a book go to a library or a bookshop.
My second reason is to spark curiosity. Libraries are known to be rooms of knowledge not boring pen and papers. Libraries are even paintings in your mind. As you read a fiction a book, a movie or image comes into your mind. These libraries are magical. They are irreplaceable. As we navigate, libraries come from Latin. You can gain knowledge. Our knowledge are lower than 21 IQ. That is my second reason.
My third reason is to interact with people. For example, you could interact with your librarians or order people who come to your libraries even family, friends and other people. This could help your relations ships. Without libraries you could not meet these people. That is my third reason.
My conclusion is longevity for libraries is important because it can improve health, spark knowledge, and socialize or interact with people. My idea is that you you all agree with me and we can help save our libraries.
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2-Y5RWD1-Muni Marudhamuthu
Today
Prompt : Write a passionate 400–500 word persuasive piece supporting physical libraries. Your writing should convince others that libraries with real books are essential for our communities. Structure your work using this outline: 1. Introduction: Set the stage with a formal address and your main argument 2. Societal & Cultural Value: Discuss libraries as community hubs 3. Technological Inclusivity: Explain how libraries bridge the digital divide 4. Environmental Stewardship: Compare sustainability of books vs digital 5. Conclusion & Call to Action: Powerful closing with clear actions Requirements: – Use at least 6 words from our vocabulary bank – Include at least 5 different persuasive techniques Slides: https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1_m7kxnl7YgJ4fatIgwAqCk6X-Qo9p238?usp=sharing
📚 In Defense of Physical Libraries: A Beacon for Our Communities
Ladies and gentlemen, esteemed members of our community,
In an age dominated by screens and algorithms, I rise to champion a timeless institution: the physical library. These sanctuaries of knowledge are not relics of the past—they are vital, vibrant, and irreplaceable. Real books, tangible spaces, and human connection form the backbone of intellectual growth and social cohesion. To abandon physical libraries is to forsake equity, sustainability, and the soul of our communities.
🏛️ Societal & Cultural Value: Libraries as Community Hubs
Libraries are more than book repositories—they are democratic spaces where everyone belongs. From toddlers attending storytime to seniors exploring genealogy, libraries foster intergenerational engagement. They are inclusive, accessible, and free—an antidote to isolation and a catalyst for civic participation. In a world increasingly fragmented, libraries offer a shared space for dialogue, discovery, and dignity. They cultivate empathy, nurture curiosity, and preserve cultural heritage. To walk into a library is to step into a realm of possibility.
💻 Technological Inclusivity: Bridging the Digital Divide
While digital innovation surges forward, millions remain disconnected. Physical libraries are lifelines for those without reliable internet, devices, or digital literacy. They offer free Wi-Fi, public computers, and tech workshops—empowering individuals to apply for jobs, complete schoolwork, and access essential services. This is not just convenience; it is justice. Libraries democratize information, ensuring that no one is left behind in the digital age. They are the great equalizers in a world of widening gaps.
🌱 Environmental Stewardship: Books vs. Digital Consumption
Contrary to popular belief, physical books often have a smaller environmental footprint than their digital counterparts. E-readers require rare earth minerals, energy-intensive manufacturing, and frequent charging. A well-loved book, passed from hand to hand, can last decades with minimal impact. Libraries promote reuse, reduce waste, and encourage mindful consumption. They are models of sustainability—proof that progress need not come at the planet’s expense.
🔥 Conclusion & Call to Action: Preserve What Matters
Let us not be seduced by convenience at the cost of community. Physical libraries are resilient, relevant, and revolutionary. They embody equity, sustainability, and human connection. I urge policymakers, educators, and citizens to invest in these institutions. Visit your local library. Volunteer. Advocate for funding. Share the joy of a real book. Because when we protect libraries, we protect the future.
Let us be the stewards of knowledge, the champions of access, and the guardians of culture. The library is not just a building—it is a beacon. Let it shine.
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2-Y5RWD1-Helina
Picture this: you’re in your mid-40’s, and you have 3 children. “Alright,” you call to them, “Time to read some books! Get off your screens now.” But that is impossible. All books, in a ‘library’ is on a small app, which seems to make everything easier, more accessible. But it isn’t. Do you want the future world to have a huge digital divide? We are already on the cusp of cracking the bridge that connects the internet geniuses and the bookworms or rather, people who aren’t as sharp when it comes to technology. This bridge is in fact, libraries. Also, blue-light, the light on your everyday screen, provides eye problems, and makes you even more tired than before. It is crucial that you agree libraries must not be stored on a screen.
Firstly, libraries connect people together and unites different minds. By having many different genres, everyone is welcome to study or read whatever they love. This brings plenty of resonance to all people, as they can read about what they enjoy, and read about other topics that different people prefer. From this, a digitally connected student can still talk and have conversations with a older woman in a guided, safe, stewarded sancturary. On screens, you cannot talk to people with ease about a range of topics. That is one of the many reasons you have to agree that libraries must stay in person.
Let us remember the times where going outside was everyday life and playing with your neighbours was the best, unlike now when screens have taken over and has been shining the unknown blue-light in our faces. Did you know that when we look at screens, the device shines a special light called the blue-light in our faces? This high energy blue light passes through the cornea and lens to the retina causing diseases such as having dry eyes, cataract, age-related macular degeneration, stimulation to the brain, inhibiting melatonin secretion, and enhancing adrenocortical hormone production, which will destroy the hormonal balance, as said from the National Library Of Medicine. Retina is the initial site of vision formation, and it is also the lesion site of various blinding eye diseases. It plays an important role in preventing blindness. Blue light can penetrate through lens to the retina and cause retinal photochemical damage. Furthermore, as you can see, screens are incredibally damaging to the eyes.
Is it truely worth trading a block full of stories, legends, myths, facts and biographies for a tablet or desktop without any berniaty which all librarians contain? Libraries are a resevour which goes back to 1160 years ago! The first librarian in the world even came from 284 bc, Zenodotus, who also showed care and compassion to all guests. However, on a tablet, how will people find the book they’re looking for? There are 129,864,880 published titles in the world, with around 170,000,000 books in the world as a whole. Roughly 2.2 million books are published every year, so how can someone find 1/170 million books from scrolling? This shows how poignant it is to save our libraries.
Ultimately, it is climacteric that libraries stay standing. Without them, future generations will never get to experience turning pages of a book, smelling the scent of old ink, and be able to dive into a story in a calming, egalitarian environment with no anxiety. If you want your descendants to feel the nostalgic sense of longevity in libraries, you must agree that libraries are a strong figure in our lives which shall not be discontinued. As Carnegie said in his influential book, The Gospel of Wealth: “The result of my own study of the question, What is the best gift which can be given to a community? is that a free library occupies the first place, provided the community will accept and maintain it as a public institution, as much a part of the city property as its public schools, and, indeed, an adjunct to these.”
Bibliography: https://pmc.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/articles/PMC6288536/#:~:text=This%20high%20energy%20blue%20light,the%20hormonal%20balance%20and%20directly
https://www.history.com/articles/8-impressive-ancient-libraries https://www.systemslibrarian.co.za/first- https://love-books-review.com/facts-and-figures-about-literature/general-literature-stats/how-many-books-are-in-the-world/#:~:text=As%20of%202024%2C%20it%20is,books%20are%20published%20each%20year.librarian.html#:~:text=The%20First%20Librarian,literary%20critic%2C%20and%20Homeric%20scholar.
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2-Y5RWD1-Chloe Chan