Day 1 Writing Homework

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Prompt :

Write a descriptive paragraph (150–200 words) about a food market or family meal that makes the reader’s mouth water. Use all three of the “chef’s tricks” you learned in class. Your writing must include: At least two senses (sight, smell, taste, sound, or touch) At least three precise nouns/verbs (e.g. “drizzled honey,” “crackling bread,” “velvety chocolate”) One simile or metaphor comparing food to something unexpected At least one word from the word bank (drizzle, crackle, velvety, zingy, sprinkle, crunch, fizz) A closing line that sums up the atmosphere (e.g. carnival, treasure chest, orchestra of flavours)

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17 thoughts on “Day 1 Writing Homework”

  1. Aiden Wang

    I slowly ambled out of the car, ready to taste the mouth-watering restaurant. The spectacular aroma bolted through my nose. My stomach growled as I stepped through the door of the five star shop. Anticipation shot through my body as the manager stepped up towards my family. “Welcome, what would you like to order today?” he questioned. After order fried chicken, I took a seat and started to rest. Abruptly, my families order had come. Quickly taking a bite out of my astonishingly delicious food, the zingy flavor drizzled on my taste bud. It was the last day of my life! The greasy taste tickled my tongue and my heart ached.

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  3. Auston Ji

    The strong, aromatic smell of the Italian sauce sizzling in the oven made everyone in the restaurant start drooling and asking which pizza it was. The chef quickly drizzled the homemade sauce of the pizza as he added basil and herbs. The pizza was as hot as metal bathing in the sun for 10 hours nonstop. The Coca Cola was as refreshing as a frozen popsicle on a 40 degree day. The cherry tomatoes bursted in flavour as the person bit down on it. My fingers grasped onto the slice as flour stuck on my hand as it was never ever going to let go. The anchovies were as salty as fermented fish laid out in the sun with 50kg of salt. The atmosphere was as busy as a colony of bees preparing for winter. The sound of the bar was as loud as a fighter jet taking off at full speed.

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  4. lemonteablossom

    It was almost dinner time. As dinner was getting served I sat in the room impatiently looking at the delight food on my plate, as I took my first bite, the silence fell like a blanket. I screamed hot hot hot, the water rose high in me, but slowly drained out when the milk came in handy. No I shouted I had to eat it up or I would suffer. Flames came out of my mouth uncovering the true power of it, changing my peachy skin dark red. I started to panic worrying about whether I would survive. It happened again. Tears flooded my eyes nonstop, filling my body up, the last bite I gulped as I thought about it, phew it wasn’t that bad when it had erupted ahhh I screamed at the top of my tongue as mum prepared the milk. Chugging the milk I closed my eyes and sank on the chair in exhaustion.

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  5. Mehith agarwal

    A fish burger is a delicious melody of cottony buns, scrunchy lettuce, dripping mayonnaise and crunchy battered fish. Fish burger is like a tsunami of different aromatic flavours.

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  6. Aiden Wang

    I slowly ambled out of the car. Every step nearer brought a new emotion. Sweat dripped down my back as I stepped into the restaurants. The spectacular smell bolted into my nose. Agitation shot through me as a long list of foods appeared in front of me. How was I supposed to read all of this, I thought. Abruptly, my family had finished already. They were all waiting for me now! Skimming through the list I found my favorite food. Fried chicken. Triumphant filled my body. Before I knew it, the waitress had come. Quickly, I devoured the food. The zingy flavor drizzled on my tongue and stung my taste buds. It felt like it was the last day of my life.

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  8. Jeremy Ye

    I pushed my plate forward and grabbed a tong. I placed layers of food on my plate and went to the bread station and snatched a bread from a tray. I placed it through a machine. Bzzzzz, went the machine as it cooked my piece of toast. After a million hours, it finally finished cooking and the piece of bread fell on a plate I placed earlier. Then i drizzled honey on the bread and placed both plates on a table where my mum was sitting. After that. I went to the the cereal station and helped myself with some cereal and some full cream milk. As I sat down on the table, my mum was almost finished so I started to eat my cereal faster than ever. Even thought transformed my tongue into Antarctica, the rich, tangly Aroma rose out of the bowl and out on the air. It smelt very good so I finished it all very quickly. As I finished the cereal, I slurped up the milk and went to eat the bread. Crunch, went the bread. The crunchy bread was so yummy I thought it was gone after a second. After eating all those piles of food, I went to get some velvety chocolate to eat. After a while, I sat back on my chair. The smell of the chocolate tickled my nose as i was about to eat it.When I finished my breakfast, i felt very full so I sat down on the chair for a minute before leaving. This meal was a orchestra of flavours.

    Day1 Writing – Jeremy Ye

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  9. Agasthya Sawant

    ‘It’s time for dinner’ Mum says. Ahh the smell! I really like my mothers cooking. My mouth waters when I see the sight of Roast chicken, ham sandwiches, chicken satays, dips and much more delicious food that is laid on the dinner table. My brother has saliva running down his tiny chin! Hmm that is outstanding, the roast chicken is cooked and seasoned exquisitely, the satays are even better! Deeelicious! I just dug in to a tender sandwich which explodes with flavour in my greedy mouth. I look to see all of the dinner finished, I hadn’t even started! I drag my feet to my bed and I fall into a gentle sleep.

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