Day 3 Writing Homework
Prompt : Write a complete 3-minute persuasive speech on climate change using all techniques learned today.
Your speech must include:
Clear AIDA structure
At least five different rhetorical devices (label them)
Strong emotionally evocative language
Rich physically descriptive language engaging multiple senses
At least two original symbolic or metaphorical images Effective transitions and cohesive paragraphs.
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Take a minute to think about what the future could look like. Scientists say that if we don’t do something soon, our oceans, which used to be full of colorful coral and amazing sea creatures, could turn into empty, poisonous waters. Animals that need the ocean to survive might slowly die out.
These same oceans, the ones where life on Earth first began, are rising. By the year 2100, the sea could get so high that it covers coastal cities, washing away buildings, homes, and history. Millions of people might lose where they live and have to move.
Is that really what we want to leave behind for future generations? Is that what we want to be remembered for? Is that what we call progress?
Here in Australia, our forests and bushlands, which were once full of birds, trees, and the sounds of nature, are turning into fiery disasters every summer. Fires spread fast, jumping from tree to tree. It gets so hot that the air can make its own storms. Animals try to escape, but many can’t. They either get too tired or get caught in the flames. What’s left is the awful smell of burning and a silence that means life is gone.
This isn’t just a scary story, it happened in real life during the 2019–2020 bushfires, when three billion animals died, either from the fire or from not having food or shelter afterward. Every piece of ash that rose into the sky was a reminder that we didn’t do enough. Every cloud of smoke showed how badly we’ve hurt our planet.
But the fires and floods are just part of the bigger problem. The Earth is getting sick because of how much pollution we’ve put into the air. And make no mistake,climate change isn’t just about the environment. It’s about your life, your safety, and your future.
Even now, while we’re sitting in safe buildings with lights and air-conditioning, the pollution we’ve released is wrapping around Earth like a thick blanket, trapping heat, messing with the weather, and causing changes that might be too big to stop.
This isn’t someone else’s problem. This isn’t something we can deal with later. This is our challenge, and it’s happening right now.
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Holiday Writing Course Year 6 Day 3_ Persuasive Speech about Climate Change
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Day 3 Praveen
Imagine a barren world devoid of life, where toxic fog drifts across the bleak landscape, encompassing every street, every corner, everything (Metaphor). This could be our Earth within just a century- it’s closer than you think. Envision reaches for a glass of water only to be rationed like a precious commodity and given out in droplets. Feel the cracked, parched earth beneath your feet, a testament to our dying earth. This is not just some dystopian future, it’s a very possible reality.
Our planet, our home, stands at the brink of total destruction. How many more global catastrophes can we endure before the inevitable? (Rhetorical Question) This climate crisis isn’t approaching-it’s already prevalent and at our doorstep.
All of this is caused by climate change. But what exactly is climate change?
Climate change or global warming is a change in weather or temperature over an extended period. Added together, it can raise temperatures to the point of notice.
It devours coastlines like ravenous beasts, and it melts the ice sheets like a blazing torch (similies), these and more are the atrocities caused by global warming. Yet despite knowing this, we continue to face disaster.
Consider, for a moment, the world that awaits future generations. Scientists predict that without immediate action, our oceans, once teeming with aquatic life, will become uninhabited and acidic. Is this the legacy we want to leave to our children? (Rhetorical Question)
This crisis affects our past, our present, and our future. (Tricolon)
In Australia, the once beautiful bush and wetlands have transformed into a hellscape where fire engulfs everything in sight, because of the rising temperatures. We doom millions of animals dependent on the bush for survival to slow, excruciatingly painful deaths. In Antarctica, the ice sheets are slowly being consumed by the sea and contributing to the rising sea levels that are threatening many coastal ecosystems.
We cannot ignore the wildfires, we cannot ignore the melting ice sheets, we cannot ignore climate change. (Anaphora)
These crises are only the beginning of a much more dreadful era.
When we talk about climate change, we talk about it like a far-away reality. Make no mistake. These events are the symptoms of a much deeper planetary fever. (Metaphor)
During a beach trip on summer vacation, my sister and I were looking forward to visiting the local beach. It was a yearly tradition in our family and meant a lot to us.
But to my sister and me eternal dismay, the beach had been closed a week earlier due to dangerous coastal erosions due by climate change.
That was supposed to be my sister’s first visit.
Some might say that taking a stand against climate change is a moral choice, not an economic one. They say that the money spent on renewable energy and cleaning up could severely weaken the economy, leading way to an economic crisis. While this argument is valid, research from the Department and Regulation of Renewable Energy shows that renewable energy is still in its early phases and creates more jobs than the fossil fuels industry. Within the last year, the renewable sector employed 25,000 Australians, and the numbers are rising steadily.
The real economic crisis would come from failing to act. The Climate Regulation Council estimates that climate disasters would cause governments a total of 100 billion annually by 2050 if nothing is done. By transitioning to renewables, we can create new jobs while creating a thriving world.
We stand at the crossroads of human history. One path leads us down the road of destruction, and the other, the one I urge you to take, leads to a thriving, prosperous world. So, what can we do to achieve a sustainable future?
First, we must start recycling. Recycling lowers our carbon footprint drastically. Unfortunately, according to a 2018 survey by the University of Sydney, only a small portion of plastic gets recycled. Secondly, we must switch to a sustainable form of energy, such as solar panels and wind turbines. Thirdly, we must be conscious of our day-to-day choices, for example, buying plastic things or eating out.
I implore you to join a larger movement to act upon climate change. In this changing world, inaction means doom. We must protect our oceans, we must protect our forests, we must protect our future. (epistrophe)
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What climate change does – Speech
Climate change isn’t just when the temperature increases but its also when the world changes to a whole new one; and starts to melt down and demolish into pieces. Would you want a terrible thing to happen to your world , one that you step foot on every single day? Well can you imagine a world where it rains almost every day , with a wide range in temperatures ?
Deforestation and emission of polluting gases is one of the key points in climate change.Scientists say that if people don’t stop deforestation or polluting gas emissions that the temperature of earth can get to catastrophic levels and cause global warming. Glaciers from Antarctica and cold places in the world will start to melt and soon our world will lead to flash flooding and torrential rain,
that would be bad, right? Because of all this in Australia, we are experiencing loss of habitat and causing extinction of endangered species once filled with all sorts of animals and bushland but now slowly decreasing in its number .
The earth is already starting to cough and people can feel it because of the earthquakes,flash floods , volcano eruptions etcetera that have been happening all over the world.
Aswell as that too many vehicles can emit smoke and gasses which pollutes the environment and makes the place feel gloomy.Like in specific places in the world like India the sky has started to get dark and residents are experiencing health issues that is because of all of this pollution and emissions happening.
Imagine just a tough world with the dark sky and people all tired and not able to walk as well, fishes lying on the sea shore moving in a tragic way just like a worm.I urge you all to help save this fantastic world , home to an infinite amount of people and animals.
What climate change does – Speech
Climate change isn’t just when the temperature increases but its also when the world changes to a whole new one; and starts to melt down and demolish into pieces.Would you want a terrible thing to happen to your world , one that you step foot on every single day? Well can you imagine a world where it rains almost every day , with a wide range in temperatures ?
Deforestation and emission of polluting gases is one of the key points in climate change.Scientists say that if people don’t stop deforestation or polluting gas emissions that the temperature of earth can get to catastrophic levels and cause global warming. Glaciers from Antarctica and cold places in the world will start to melt and soon our world will lead to flash flooding and torrential rain,
that would be bad, right? Because of all this in Australia, we are experiencing loss of habitat and causing extinction of endangered species once filled with all sorts of animals and bushland but now slowly decreasing in its number .
The earth is already starting to cough and people can feel it because of the earthquakes,flash floods , volcano eruptions etcetera that have been happening all over the world.
Aswell as that too many vehicles can emit smoke and gasses which pollutes the environment and makes the place feel gloomy.Like in specific places in the world like India the sky has started to get dark and residents are experiencing health issues that is because of all of this pollution and emissions happening.
Imagine just a tough world with the dark sky and people all tired and not able to walk as well, fishes lying on the sea shore moving in a tragic way just like a worm.I urge you all to help save this fantastic world , home to an infinite amount of people and animals.