Day 4 Writing Homework
Prompt : Complete Draft Speech:
Using the techniques we’ve learned today, write a complete 3-minute speech on climate change that
includes:
A personal connection to the issue
At least one paragraph with strong descriptive language
At least two simple rhetorical techniques
One paragraph addressing an opposing viewpoint
A memorable conclusion and a clear call to action
500 WORDS
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- Due Date : April 19, 2025
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Day 4 – The Climate Speech 2
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Day 3 Matthew Hwang
Our Shared Breath: A Plea for Climate Action
Friends, colleagues, fellow inhabitants of this vibrant planet, I stand before you today not as an expert, not as a politician, but as someone deeply connected to the very air we breathe and the ground beneath our feet. My childhood summers were spent exploring the rugged coastline south of Sydney, the salty air thick with the scent of eucalyptus and the rhythmic crash of waves against ancient cliffs. I remember the vibrant coral reefs teeming with life, the playful seals basking on sun-drenched rocks, the sheer, untamed beauty of a world seemingly untouched. But in recent years, a subtle yet unsettling shift has occurred. The vibrant colours of the reefs are fading, bleached and ghostly. The fierce storms are more frequent, more intense, eroding the very coastline I once knew so intimately. This isn’t just an abstract scientific concept; it’s a personal loss, a tangible erosion of the world I hold dear.
Imagine, if you will, a world where the air hangs heavy and thick, choked with pollutants, where the sun beats down with relentless fury, baking the earth until it cracks and withers. Picture parched landscapes stretching as far as the eye can see, the once fertile soil now barren and lifeless. Hear the desperate cries of animals struggling to survive in a habitat rapidly disappearing, the mournful silence where birdsong once filled the dawn. Feel the oppressive heat clinging to your skin, the constant threat of rising waters lapping at your doorstep. This isn’t a scene from a dystopian novel; this is the potential future we are hurtling towards if we fail to act. Are we truly willing to condemn future generations to such a reality?
Now, I know some voices argue that climate change is a natural cycle, that human impact is minimal, or that the economic costs of addressing it are too great. They might point to historical climate fluctuations or suggest that technological innovation will magically solve the problem without requiring significant changes to our lifestyles. While acknowledging the complexity of the Earth’s systems and the importance of economic considerations, can we afford to gamble with the only home we have? Can we, in good conscience, ignore the overwhelming scientific consensus, the tangible evidence of melting glaciers, rising sea levels, and increasingly extreme weather events? To delay action is not prudence; it is negligence.
The truth is, addressing climate change is not just an environmental imperative; it is an economic opportunity, a chance to innovate and create a more sustainable and equitable future. Investing in renewable energy sources will create new jobs and industries. Developing sustainable agricultural practices will ensure food security for generations to come. Embracing energy efficiency will reduce costs and improve our quality of life. This is not a burden; it is an investment in our collective well-being.
We stand at a critical juncture. The science is clear, the evidence is undeniable, and the urgency is palpable. Let us not be the generation that stood by and watched as our planet teetered on the brink. Let us instead be the generation that rose to the challenge, that embraced innovation and collaboration, that chose hope over apathy. Let the memory of vibrant coral reefs and the scent of eucalyptus on a clean sea breeze not become a nostalgic whisper of the past, but a living reality for our children and their children.
Therefore, I urge you, each and every one of you, to take action today. Reduce your carbon footprint. Advocate for sustainable policies. Support businesses committed to environmental responsibility. Educate yourselves and others. Speak up for our planet. Let our collective voice be a resounding call for change, a powerful wave that washes over indifference and propels us towards a sustainable future. Let us work together, with courage and conviction, to protect this precious Earth, our shared home, for generations to come. Thank you.
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Day 3 Divjot
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_Our Shared Breath_ A Plea for Climate Action
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