Week 3 Writing Homework
Prompt: Write a humourous letter from Rick to the Glebe community, reflecting on the outcomes of the market event and the building’s restoration. Consider using:
1.Over-the-top gratitude for the community’s support.
2. Exaggerated descriptions of the chaos and triumphs from the day.
3. A comical reflection on the heritage building’s transformation.
4. Playful anecdotes about Glebe’s uniquely creative contributors.
5. A feel-good conclusion on how the event has brought Glebe closer together.
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- Due Date : March 1, 2025
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Dear citizen of our good old community,
I would like to announce about having a good selective school in our community because we can raise money, we will have a group of smart people to help us with mysterious problems and many of us don’t have to move if we get into that school. This is why we need a good selective school in our community.
Firstly, if we have a selective school, then we don’t have to worry about money. For example, look at James Ruse. Their community has earned a lot of money because of its school and now it is like the government feeding us money to spend somewhere else. Therefore it is vital that we should have a selective school in our department.
Additionally, we will have a group of people that can help us. For example, if we have a mysterious case going on and we don’t have any idea of what on earth is going on. We can just ask them and they will take out something of their brain and be like ha I found the issue.Therefore it is vital that we should have a selective school in our department.
Finally, I strongly suggest that there should be a selective school because many people have to move after primary school to find a high school if we didn’t have a selective school and that will keep our community population really low. For example if we only have a primary school and no high school, then why will people live there if their kids have to study somewhere else.Therefore it is vital that we should have a selective school in our department.
In conclusion, it is vital that we should have a selective school because we can raise money, we will have a group of smart people to help us with mysterious problems and many of us don’t have to move if we get into that school.
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RW-Year 6_WK3- Rengaraja Rajamanickam
Welcome to the Glebe Markets, one of the most extraordinary events of the year. A time where shops of random items come together to make a tourist destination. But most of all, a time when the community of Glebe share their wildest ideas. Imagine seeing the most exquisite types of cheese all in one place made from the best cheese-makers of the world. This event is going to be so large that it will go deeper than the Mariana Trench.
Stress is hitting me harder than a kangaroo punching a person. Every one task completed, six more pop up right behind. I have heard some of the most bizarre thoughts, like this one person suggested that we build the Eiffel Tower with cheese. I am thinking that the amount of calls I have waiting for me would be larger than it. I have probably heard the most amount of words that one person has heard at a time at our community meetings. I have most likely said a gazillion words in just these four days.
The meetings we have had are full of enchanting ideas. One citizen mentioned having one whole section for selling different types of rats that they were teaching to read. Only the people of Glebe could ever think of ideas so wild like these. Debates spark about whether to make the best artists of Glebe draw them or digitally make them. A question that had many different outcomes. Another person had an opinion of making their very own coffee, which would be a mixture of the most liked types of coffee and chai.
The ancient heritage building (where birds play hide and seek in) is finally being restored in time for the Glebe Markets. We are hoping that even humans will be able to play inside the artefact. The community has hand painted the building with every community member’s handprint on the side of the building. From being untouched, this building will be restored by an army of Glebians working togther to make the best building ever.
The residents have united and utilised a lot of their precious time in the preparation of the Glebe Markets. Stalls stand proudly as their owners serve customers. My whimsical enthusiasm for the success of these markets can not be as big as the citizens’ anticipation. Joy and pride fills the streets of the suburb not even forgetting to make the cats happy. Bonds grow stronger in the creation of a spectacular time. The Glebe Markets will definitely flourish this year.
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RW-Year 6_WK3- Jinaya Patel
Dear Glebe Community,
I hope this letter finds you well and not too tangled in the festive chaos that is the Glebe Markets! Let me just say, as the self-appointed “Glebe Market Enthusiast,” I’ve seen enough artisanal soaps to offset my questionable hygiene for a whole year. Who knew that with the right scent, you could forget you hadn’t showered since the last market?
First, let’s talk about our charming old mansion that has recently undergone what can only be described as a “miraculous glow-up.” It went from a spooky relic that could double as a haunted house to the most snug community shelter this side of the southern hemisphere. I mean, if these walls could talk, I reckon they’d murmur, “Please, can we get some modern décor?” At least now, it only looks mildly menacing instead of downright terrifying.
And, oh boy, have you perused the stalls at our new Glebe Markets? A cornucopia of delights! There was that one stall dedicated to knitted socks. Yes, socks! Apparently, socially awkward squirrels in high places are very much on-trend now. I mustered up all my courage to ask the vendor if she had any in cheetah print. I received a diagnosis indicating I need professional help.
Then, we have the “Danish Delight” stand. I never knew there were this many types of pastries – honestly, I’m still trying to process the fact that “kringle” is a real thing and not just a word I’ve been using incorrectly for a decade. My waistline isn’t thanking me, but my taste buds have begun composing sonnets in praise of the fluffy, buttery, sugary goodness they encountered.
And how could I forget the “Homegrown Humor” booth? A local comedian wearing an apron showcased hope, stand-up, and… surprisingly, tomato plants. He assured me that together they could cultivate laughter and salad, but I’m convinced he just wanted to use the tomatoes as props for his jokes. They were okay—better than some of the punchlines.
It’s a community event like no other, where wholesome meets whimsical. I never knew that organic vegetables could come equipped with marketing tactics worthy of a Wall Street firm. “Bouquet of Beets?” Sure, I’d love a bunch that needs a personal life coach!
As the sun set on one enchanted Saturday, the mansion transformed from an antique space to a cozy hub bustling with laughter (and occasional awkwardness). We now have a permanent place where everything from community story-telling events to nail-biting chess matches can take place. Who knew a centuries-old structure could serve as both a sprawling history lesson and a hotbed for potato sack races?
So, if you haven’t yet, swing by the markets this weekend! Experience the unique melange of stalls while basking in the warm glow of our renovated mansion. Just remember—if you see someone with overly enthusiastic beets, it’s definitely not me. I’d be the one two stalls down trying to act sophisticated while failing to pronounce “quinoa” for the third time.
Much laughter, peace, and (hopefully) a whiff of artisanal soap,
Rick.
P.S. I hear a rumor that they’re considering turning one of the rooms in the mansion into a gaming lounge. My dream of trying to persuade a couch to embrace modern furniture styles might finally come true!
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RW-Year 6_WK3- LOUISA CHEN
Dear Glebe community,
I am Rick Simpson, and I would like to thank you for putting in a lot of effort in making the Glebe Market Event come alive. This year the Glebe Market is not going to be like any other year. This year it is going to be something special.
From flying soap sponges and chocolate exhibits to group races and plays in the heritage building, this year’s market event is going to be EPIC, and it might be so great that it will go deep down in history, deeper than the Mariana Trench.
And about that, this building just finished the building’s massive transformation and apparently it looks amazing like better than Buckingham Palace amazing. Now that’s something I call awesome. From what I have heard they renovated the whole interior of the building, repainted the outside and added a few new decorations. And what is even better is that it is going to be ready for the Glebe Event.
I just wanted to share to you all again how grateful I am for all of you guys and how you are all working together to make this happen. And I do not know if I am the only person who noticed but I feel like we got to know each other well and made new friends between our communities while working on this big project. Now after this event is over, I am sure everyone of us is going to have a few more friends to talk to in this neighbourhood.
If you are wondering if you should come or not, you have to come and bring your kids to. Before entering the event every child is going to be given a little wristband with both parents’ phone numbers on it in case, they get lost. And before leaving if anyone has a child with them there will be people there to make sure that parents have the right children. And at the event there will be multiple things for to do. From face painting and kid rides to mini games and petting zoos your child can be at one activity for 30 minutes long without getting bored. And for adults there are stalls, adult rides, mini libraries, photo booths, soap sponge someone if you want to get your rage out and much more. Just walking around will bring you joy seeing all the fun things and it is just that environment that everybody loves. And in case you get hungry there are going to be over 50 food trucks with over 30 different cuisines.
I just wanted to say thank you to every single one of you again for putting in even a bit of effort to help our Glebe community make this year’s annual Glebe Community Market come alive. I hope you all enjoy and if you have any feedback just let me know after the event but for now just enjoy.
HAVE FUN EVERYONE!!!
Kind regards,
Rick Simpson
Dear Glebe community,
I am Rick Simpson and I would like to thank you for putting in a lot of effort in making the Glebe Market Event come alive. This year the Glebe Market is not going to be like any other year. This year it is going to be something special.
From flying soap sponges and chocolate exhibits to group races and plays in the heritage building, this year’s market event is going to be EPIC and it might be so great that it will go deep down in history, deeper than the Mariana Trench.
And about that, this building just finished the building’s massive transformation and apparently it looks amazing like better than Buckingham Palace amazing. Now that’s something I call awesome. From what I have heard they renovated the whole interior of the building, repainted the outside and added a few new decorations. And what is even better is that it is going to be ready for the Glebe Event.
I just wanted to share to you all again how grateful I am for all of you guys and how you are all working together to make this happen. And I do not know if I am the only person who noticed but I feel like we got to know each other well and made new friends between our communities while working on this big project. Now after this event is over I am sure everyone of us is going to have a few more friends to talk to in this neighbourhood.
If you are wondering if you should come or not, you have to come and bring your kids to. Before entering the event every child is going to be given a little wristband with both parents’ phone numbers on it in case they get lost. And before leaving if anyone has a child with them there will be people there to make sure that parents have the right children. And at the event there will be multiple things for to do. From face painting and kid rides to mini games and petting zoos your child can be at one activity for 30 minutes long without getting bored. And for adults there are stalls, adult rides, mini libraries, photo booths, soap sponge someone if you want to get your rage out and much more. Just walking around will bring you joy seeing all the fun things and it is just that environment that everybody loves. And incase you get hungry there are going to be over 50 food trucks with over 30 different cuisines.
I just wanted to say thank you to every single one of you again for putting in even a bit of effort to help our Glebe community make this years annual Glebe Community Market come alive. I hope you all enjoy and if you have any feedback just let me know after the event but for now just enjoy.
HAVE FUN EVERYONE!!!
Kind regards,
Rick simpson
Dear fellow citizens,
Prepare to be dazzled because what I’m planning for Glebe Markets will make your jaws drop. Imagine market stalls stretching beyond the horizon. Our food court will feature culinary masterpiece sculptures made by Michelin-star chefs so good that sculptors will resign in a competition against them.
This isn’t just any market; it’s going to be a spectacular showcase that’ll make international headlines. Spark your curiosity by seeing how famous chefs create their signature secret recipes. Watch in awe as acrobats on trapezes do quadruple frontflips in the air. This isn’t just shopping; it will be a magical tourist attraction experience. People from all around the world will be booking flights there.
Prepare yourselves, event planners. Prepare yourselves to make a market so extraordinary that it will make video games boring. Video game enthusiasts will venture out of their homes and touch grass, using their five senses like that is a VR video game in real life. Invite an orchestra to enlighten their ears and allow famous artists to sell visual beauty. This isn’t just any market; it will be the biggest event that Glebe has ever seen!
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Dear patient neighbours,
Planning this market is like painting the literal sky with olden-day purple flag dye. Every time I finish making a tent, it collapses. I have to deal with that problem over and over again. The council’s paperwork multiplied faster than the pandemic, and I spend four hours a day in meetings, sitting on my office chair. It has been getting too painful sitting for too long. After tons of requests from people worldwide, my to-do list is longer than the Great Wall of China!
Some requests include a human-sized chess match, where actual humans will be chess pieces, and black and white market stalls in a checkerboard pattern can be an individual square.
____________________________________________________________________________________Dear Glebe champions,
Your response to our market mission has been more uplifting than a hot air balloon festival, from chefs creating masterpieces to farmers selling fresh produce – from performances and showcases from various people to tourists who are just having a good time.
We did it! Our market has become the talk of Sydney! You’ve created memories that will last longer than my to-do list. Organisers and tourists, you’re absolutely incredible!
Glebe Markets