Week 6 Writing Homework
Prompt:
In 400-500 words, write a persuasive email to the community, calling on them to become vegan to improve animal welfare.
Consider email conventions
Address it to the reader (community) Formal language Introduction
Body paragraphs
Why we should care about animal welfare (appealing to the reader’s sense of pathos)
Descriptive language (paint a picture of animal living conditions) Include an ethical argument (why do animals deserve to be free) Why is Veganism a solution to improving animal welfare? a. Statistics and data i. Give numbers to illustrate how becoming vegan improves animal welfare
Write 400-500 words. Please email your writing homework to scholarlywritingfeedback@gmail.com and we will provide feedback.
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Dear Community,
Have you ever thought about what happens to animals before they become food on our plates? Right now, billions of animals around the world are suffering in factory farms. They are locked in tiny cages, packed into dark, dirty sheds, and never feel the sun on their backs or the grass under their feet. Many animals live their whole lives in pain and fear before being killed for food. Cows, pigs, and chickens are treated as products, not as living, feeling creatures. But the truth is, they do feel pain, fear, and sadness—just like we do. They deserve a better life, and we have the power to help them.
If we love our pets and would never want them to suffer, why do we allow farm animals to be oppressed? A mother cow cries for days when her baby is taken away so humans can have milk. Pigs, as bright as dogs, are kept in tiny pens where they can’t even turn around. Chickens are crammed into cages, their feathers falling out from stress. These animals never get to run, play, or feel love. If we wouldn’t treat a dog this way, why is it okay for cows, pigs, and chickens? Every animal deserves to live a life free from suffering, no matter how big or small.
The good news is that we can stop this cruelty by making a simple choice: going vegan. Every person who goes vegan saves around 200 animals each year. That means if just 50 people in our Community stopped eating meat, we could save 10,000 animals annually! Imagine how many lives could be saved if even more people joined in. We show that we do not support animal cruelty by choosing plant-based foods. The less demand for meat and dairy, the fewer animals will suffer in factory farms.
Some people worry that going vegan is too hard, but it has never been easier. Supermarkets have so many plant-based foods and tasty vegan meals to try. From veggie burgers to dairy-free ice cream, everyone has delicious options. There is even plant-based milk, cheeses, and chocolates, so we don’t miss out on the foods we love. Going vegan is not just good for animals—it is also healthier for us and better for the planet.
We all have the power to make the world a kinder place. By choosing not to eat animals, we stand up for those who cannot speak for themselves. Imagine a world where no animal has to live in pain or fear. That world is possible, and it starts with us.
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Y5RW _ [WK6] – anisur_misyahoo-com-au
Dear Community,
Our world is turning into a blood-thirsty world, where animals are slaughtered everywhere in the world. Billions and billion animals all over the world are suffering from unacceptable conditions. Why would we kill poor, innocent animals for us, greedy and selfish, never stopping to eat these animals. Whilst some people may argue that animals are part of our digestive system, or animals being slaughtered and eaten is just part of their lives. But they deserve to live more than that, they deserve to be grazing on grassy fields, eating their hearts out, happy, joyful and most importantly, free. I am writing today to express my deep concerns to stop killing animals for a healthier, more reasonable life.
Killing animals means there is a shortage of these animals. Their blood splattering on the ground as we carelessly kill them, not understanding the ecosystem we are ruining. With that being said, here are the best estimates of how many animals are killed every day on a per-species basis. In total, this means that every 24 hours, between 3.4 and 6.5 billion animals are killed for food. That comes to a lower end estimate of 1.2 trillion animals killed every year. It may seem that it’s a colossal number but really, it’s just the beginning. Endless decimating is following to this one simple act. You may also believe that meat are the primary sources to food. It may be one, but there are so much more possibilities to eat. Vegans introduce fruits and vegetables, and vegetarians suggest dairy and grains. These are all delicious to eat, and they all provide you vitamins such as A, C, and E, while dairy and grains contain vitamins A, B, and K. Meat gives you protein, something you can find in eggs, dairy products, beans, lentils, nuts, seeds, and soy products. If we stop eating meat, we can all live a life of happy animals and happy people. Slaughtering animals can cause climate change, or in other words, greenhouse gas emissions, deforestation, habitat loss, water pollution, and biodiversity decline, potentially leading to ecological imbalances and species extinction. Greenhouse gas emissions make the world even more hot, burning up with an astonishing number of 2.7°C. Climate change is making a big difference and eating animals are helping. We all don’t want to be the culprits of burning up our planet, making it unhabitable for anyone. We should stop slaughtering animals for the benefit of the ecosystem and climate change.
Killing animals must stop and we can change by eating less meat, having larger pens or fields for the animals to roam, finding their freedom before laying down to us. We may be young, or old, or keen, or bored but we can make a change. Start supporting charities and fundraisers to keep our generation of animals alive. Let’s all start today, one step at a time, our journey not far from being accomplished.
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Y5RW _ [WK6] – Miranda Chen
Dear Community
Are you aware of the steps you can take to keep animals safe? It’s time we all pay attention because the reality is alarming. Across the globe, countless animals are suffering and losing their lives due to the devastating destruction of their habitats by humans. We cannot stand by and allow this heartbreaking crisis to continue. We must unite to protect these creatures and ensure their survival. We wouldn’t want to witness our lush forests turned into barren wastelands, would we? I’m reaching out because I’ve observed that many in our community aren’t prioritizing the environment as we should. If you’re ready to make a difference, here are some impactful steps to get started. First, let’s plant trees; it’s an incredibly powerful act that can transform our surroundings. Next, commit to nurturing these trees by watering them daily. And finally, when you invite friends over, let them marvel at the beauty of your garden. Their curiosity could spark a chain reaction, inspiring them to plant their own trees, and soon the entire community will join in the effort! Additionally, restaurants should be mindful of their impact on animal lives. Consider reducing meat consumption, limiting it to a small amount of pork or seafood each week. This will help protect animals and encourage healthier eating habits. As individuals, let’s limit our intake of meat, poultry, or seafood to just a few times a week. This not only helps safeguard our wildlife but also encourages healthier choices for ourselves. Let’s take a stand for our planet and its inhabitants. Together, we can create a positive ripple effect, making a real difference for animals and the environment. Always remember lending a helping hand to those in need is a value we should cherish and uphold in our hearts. Everyone is a part of a problem of supporting something. Please Community just helps us for the animal welfare and be healthy at all times. We should start the world that a percentage from zero till one hundred for animal welfare.
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Y5RW _ [WK6] – Yashal
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Y5RW _ [WK6] – Shawn Pan