Day 3 Writing Homework
Prompt :
Three new students have just arrived in your local area. Your teacher has asked you to write an advice sheet for them, making them feel enthusiastic about coming to your school.
Write 400 words advice sheet for the new students about how to get on well in your school and local area. Look at the examples above for reference. Think carefully about your formatting – what size font will you use? Which words will you put in bold? What will your line spacing look like?
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2-10(3)-AM
A start to your new school
Are you excited to go to your new school? Then follow these steps.
1. Making new friends
I suggest you make friends a bit later because some kids might seem nice at first. What I believe so far is that 40% of the kids in this school is worth hanging out with. You might need an idea on how people act around you to find the most suitable people you can be friends with.
2. Stay out of trouble and dramas
To have a good start in this school, don’t interfere with any drama even though you have a solution that might work. If people don’t know you they don’t want you to get in there personal life. Don’t try to find out what is going on in this school.
3. Listen to the teachers rules and don’t try to grab the teachers attention.
In the first week of school you just have to stay quiet. Find people you can talk to later on. Answer questions occasionally.
This school might seem frightening but you will get used to it eventually. Good luck!
A start to your new school
Are you excited to go to your new school? Then follow these steps.
1. Making new friends
I suggest you make friends a bit later because some kids might seem nice at first. What I believe so far is that 40% of the kids in this school is worth hanging out with. You might need an idea on how people act around you to find the most suitable people you can be friends with.
2. Stay out of trouble and dramas
To have a good start in this school, don’t interfere with any drama even though you have a solution that might work. If people don’t know you they don’t want you to get in there personal life. Don’t try to find out what is going on in this school.
3. Listen to the teachers rules and don’t try to grab the teachers attention.
In the first week of school you just have to stay quiet. Find people you can talk to later on. Answer questions occasionally.
This school might seem frightening but you will get used to it eventually. Good luck!
Aaradhya
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2-10(3)-arupknandigmail-com
Advice for our school
1. Don’t go into the 2nd floor boys bathrooms
In the 2nd floor boys bathrooms both cubicles are broken. The locks have been smashed off the door, leaving a mark where they should be. And the urinal has many dents, where anything will bounce off, and go in a random directions. The drain on the floor does not work, so when the bathroom is washed (which is not very often) all the water stays on the floor. Also on of the toilets does not flush, and anything in them stays there. Easily making it the most putrid thing in the whole school. So do not go into the 2nd floor boys bathroom.
2. Never use the playground tunnels
These monstrosities are made way too small, they constantly throb against your body. I had to learn this the hard way, as on my first day of year 4 I tried to use it. However, I got stuck and the teachers on duty had to climb in and pull me out (I had a bruise for weeks after that). After that incident nobody has ever gone in there, I once peeked inside, it had billions of spiders living in it. So never use the playground tunnels.
3. Never bring your own handballs to school
My friend once tried to do this and on his first day of playing with it, it got confiscated. The teachers hate it when people bring their own handballs to school, as apparently it is unfair to the people who don’t bring handballs and have to use the tennis balls provided by the school. And the teachers don’t even give the handballs back after taking them, they just stay at the bottom of their drawers, rotting away. It is like the teachers of this school are trying to rid the world of handballs. So don’t bring your own handballs to school.
4. Never sit on the wooden planks surrounding the tree
The planks surrounding the tree are old and mangled, a mess of mould and decay. Holes scatter the planks, some big some small some big enough for a child to fall through. Rats, cockroaches and whatnot climb up the holes frequently, constantly scaring the life out of anyone near it. So do not sit on the wooden planks surrounding the tree
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2-10(3)-Ajay
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2-10(3)-Sophia Cree
This is an advice sheet for new students at EPS, this advice sheet will introduce you to the places at our school and will help you in what to do at it.
1. At our school there are bulidings and demountables, there is a turf area to run on and an asphalt area to play handball onknow as the North Playground. There are toilet in the playground and an elevator to go on in the building.
2. The students and teachers are very kind, helpful and friendly. The classrooms have a smartboard and whiteboards, the school will provide stationery for students to use. They will also provide workbooks for the students to use throughout the year.
3. It is super easy to make friends at this school as there are people with wristbands that are friendly and you can make friends with them.
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2-10(3)-Jai Oruganti
Dear Jacob, Henry and Zak,
Welcome to Denham Court Public School. We are all very ecstatic for your arrival and to finally meet you. We are all very delighted for all of you to join DCPS, it’s ok if it seems like you don’t fit in, don’t worry, we’ve got your back. Here’s some advice to make you feel at home.
Firstly, Make sure to know your timetable such as knowing when lunch or recess is to know where you need to be. Since you are new, it will be good to draw a map of the school. Doing this can prevent you from getting lost very often, it can also build your knowledge at the same time.
Secondly, always remember to follow the school rules, be respectful, and treat others with kindness. This helps keep our school a happy, safe place for everyone. If you get the chance, try to join a club or activity it’s a fun way to learn new things and meet new people.
Lastly, if there are any problems or issues you might have, feel free to ask a teacher for assistance, speaking up can make huge differences in our daily lives. Whether it’s school work or making friends, please speak to our staff.
We’re so glad you’ve joined us, and we can’t wait to see all the amazing things you’ll do. Be patient with yourself, take one step at a time, and enjoy the journey. You’re going to do great!
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2-10(3)-nage_jyahoo-com
Advice sheet
Three new students have just arrived in your local area. Your teacher has asked you to write an advice sheet for them, making them feel enthusiastic about coming to your school.
If you are new to this extraordinary school at any point, this guide will advise you on how you work together, what are the rules you need to know and how you adapt to the environment by knowing the weekly routine. This will positively vibe you for a new experience at this unique school as it enriches development and unity hence, after this advice sheet you will also be considered as school member just like everyone else.
Tip 1#
To adapt into our school a major factor to develop is to work in groups as many thrilling activities are often shared with numerous partners developing socialisation and communication abilities. If you want to handle this concept you must start trying to find a friend but don’t overwhelm them by continuously bothering them. If not possible ask a teacher about how to get a friend not only can you ask trusted ones, but you can also start socialising with someone about something that you have in common with another person. Soon, it will be just enough help for you to work in groups perfectly.
Tip 2#
Rules, they are another key factor of schools and possibly the most important factor you need to know. At this school rules are highly vital and there are many rules you need to follow to manage your school career, some of which are class rules where you are advised to follow the teacher’s instructions, if you have a question you have to raise your hand up, you are to treat the classroom appropriately and of course try your best. As long as you try your best you will always succeed. At the playground the main factor is to avoid bullying and getting into trouble.
Tip 3#
As for the last advice piece I can provide you with is our school routine, with a set of complex subjects some for each day and also what subject we do at class. In our school we have a sets of 3 main subjects and 2 student vote subjects each day which consists of math, english, science, history and literacy rotations. Some of the leisure usage activities are sport, art, math games and free time which is specially done at the last hour of each Friday if we are not occupied by anything else.
Finally, now that you have ventured through the importance of my school you can now embark your journey on my school.
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2-10(3)-Krithik Singaravelan
1. High school rankings
Kellyville Public School is in the top 30 rankings of public schools making it having good teachers and smart students.
2. Kind students
In KPS there are kind students to aid you during rough situations along with the school captain giving you ideas.
3. Charities
In KPS there are charities done every year including activities where are held by the school captain.
Hi there! Thanks for submitting your work. We’re proud of your effort! However, we noticed that your response is a little short, and we’d love to hear more of your thoughts. Try expanding on your ideas by adding more relevant details. The more you share, the better feedback we can give to help you grow. You’re on the right track. Keep going, you’ve got this! 😊
HOW YOU CAN DO AMAZING IN SCHOOL
It can feel over whelming going somewhere or doing anything new, but don’t worry you will love it here!
Our school is friendly; it is a space where everyone is encouraged to be themselves, and to grow educationally and personally. Here are some tips to help you settle in:
1 the best way you can make friends is to smile, introduce yourself, and show interest in others. Don’t be afraid to join conversations or ask questions. Most students are curious about new arrivals and will be happy to get to know you.
2 Our school offers a wide range of clubs, sports teams, and creative activities. Whether you’re into music, drama, robotics, or soccer, there’s something for everyone. Joining a group is a great way to meet people who share your interests.
3 If you’re unsure about anything—whether it’s finding your classroom or understanding a subject—ask a teacher or fellow student. Everyone here is supportive and wants you to succeed.
4 We value kindness, respect, and inclusivity. Treat others the way you’d like to be treated, and you’ll find that people respond positively. Our school celebrates diversity, so be proud of who you are and be open to learning about others.
5 Keep track of your timetable, homework, and important dates. Using a planner or digital calendar can help you stay on top of things and reduce stress.
6 Our community is full of great places to visit. Check out the local library, parks, and sports centers. There are also weekend markets and cafes where students often hang out. It’s a safe and welcoming area, so take time to explore and enjoy it.
7 Most importantly, be confident in who you are. You bring something unique to our school, and we’re excited to have you here. Your voice matters, and your presence makes our community stronger.
Welcome aboard! You’re here for a reason, and your journey starts now. Embrace challenges, celebrate victories, and never stop learning. This is your time to grow, connect, and shine—your future begins right here.
how you can do amazing in school
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2-10(3)-Mahmud
How to get well at school. We recommend joining a club at our school, as it is a good opportunity to meet new friends and learn something new about our school. We will let you guys explore the school and learn about the building and places to go when it’s playtime. Please respect the staff since they did a lot of work to get you. We tell you our routine when you start in our classroom. Thanks. We want you to make sure everything is all right, so tell the teacher if you are feeling off.
Good luck on the first day of school
Your future at Pokjhat Public School
Welcome to the best school in the world and get ready to embark through the greatest advice sheet for school!
1. Focus on lessons
Listen to what the teacher is saying and take notes by writing them in your own words. Answer questions occasionally but don’t grab the teachers attention too much. Don’t try and goof around in class and don’t follow what other people are doing if it is bad.
2. Make friends!
I don’t suggest just going to a random person and bring friends with them. I recommend observing people’s behaviour and actions before you decide, try and choose a friend that is most suitable for you! Try to avoid fights and arguments with people as it might end up with trouble.
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3. Join in on extra opportunities
What I mean by this is to try and go to music or dance lessons, you might have fun!
4. Be an upstander
If somebody else is being bullied, don’t just stand there, be an upstander and stand up for them and tell the bullies to leave him/her alone. Comfort them and maybe be their friend for a while.