Day 1 Writing Homework
Prompt : Close your eyes and picture yourself on a beach. In 300 words, describe what you see, hear, taste, touch, and smell using the sensory imagery that we discussed today!
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- Due Date : April 16, 2025
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7 thoughts on “Day 1 Writing Homework”
Shut your eyes. As you walk barefoot on the golden, soft sand, the sun’s warmth caresses your skin, and the grains of the sand slide between your toes like warm sugar. The ocean shimmers beneath a cloudless sky as the horizon, painted in strokes of sapphire and aquamarine, stretches in front of you indefinitely. The sound of waves crashing against the coast reverberates like a steady heartbeat, and seagulls soar overhead, their wings slicing through the breeze like silver blades. The waves roll in and out in a steady rhythm, like the beach’s own heartbeat. Each one crashes gently, then fizzes out in a whisper against the shore. Off in the distance, seagulls call to each other, and the rustling palm trees add a kind of hush-hush background music to it all.
You can almost taste the sea in the air—salty, clean, and refreshing. Maybe you’re holding a cold drink in your hand—something tropical with coconut and lime that cools your tongue and reminds you to just be in the moment. You crouch down, letting your fingers trail through the foamy edge of a wave. The water is cooler than you expected, sending a little shiver up your arm. But it’s the good kind—the kind that reminds you you’re alive and here.
There’s this amazing blend of smells all around: ocean breeze, sunscreen, maybe someone grilling something nearby, and that earthy scent of driftwood warming in the sun. It’s like summer bottled up and set free. It’s not just a beach—it’s a feeling. Calm. Full. Free. Like time doesn’t matter, and for once, neither do worries. Just you, your senses, and the sea.
275 words
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tuyen – DAY 1
Idk how to hand in the homework properly so I’m handing it in on here
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Here is my HW. I hope you enjoy 🙂 (Sry that it isn’t 300 words or more, but I couldn’t think of anything else to describe, so i had to leave it at 277 words.)
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Parvinder – DAY 1
Hi,
Please review the attached document.
Thanks,
Manasi
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Manasi – DAY 1