Day 1 Writing Homework
Prompt:
Imagine you are a young explorer who has just returned from a day in the Enchanted Forest. Write a diary entry describing your magical journey, the mythical creatures you encountered, and the lasting impression it has left on you. 400 Words
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- Due Date : January 8, 2025
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Monday,before bed
Dear,Diary
Today I had THE BEST DAY EVER.My dream was to visit the enchanted forest.Since it was my birthday,my parents surprised me to visit the enchanted forest.It was amazing! Except for a few parts.
First,my mum told me to get ready for the day.I was the first one to get ready.That is how excited I was.My little brother,Max took ages to get dressed.I wore a pair of my favourite socks,favourite purple t-shirt,favourite shorts and my kitty cat cap.After 20 hours(not really 20 hours),Max was finally ready.
We planned to take the bus because our car broke down but we just missed it.NOOOOOOO!!!!
So we took a taxi there instead.Thank goodness there were no problems with the taxi!But it did stink and my sister Hannah vomited.The taxi driver stopped the taxi for fresh air.Mum let me sit at the front so I don’t vomit from Hannah’s vomit.
We took 6 whole hours to get there.my mum paid the tickets to go on the obstacle course.I was so excited.We were looking at the elephants but I couldn’t wait for the obstacle course.
We were finally up to the obstacle course!
I was-
Sorry Diary,mum wants me to go to bed, I will write more tomorrow.
See you later
Sophie
Tuesday morning,after breakfast
Good morning,diary.
Let me continue off from what I wrote yesterday.
The obstacle course looked simple but it was the complicated one my cousins went on and one one of them fell off and broke their arm and leg.Her name was Ella and had to stay in hospital for a week.That incident gave me the nerves.My mum went 1st and she had an awesome time.My sister went after and asked for my hat because it was too sunny.I let her use it but you never ever believe this.As she was on the obstacle course,she dropped my hat.My favorite hat.How could she!Now she made me not want to have a go.As they convinced me,I had a go.It was the best thing ever.I really want to do it again!But I’m still distraught about my hat.What if elephants step on it?
But the elephants don’t.Nothing happened to it.PHEW!I picked it up.I was so worried.My mum scolded Hannah and she had to do my chores and her own for a week.As we went home,we took the bus.No problems,this time!
PS:You know how my sister was forced to do chores for a week?Well,she pretended she had broken a bone so I could do her chores.How sneaky!
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I walked into the forest with a heart full of curiosity. I ventured deep into the forest. The canopy got thicker casting shadows on the forest floor. For a while everything stayed quiet but, in that moment, I heard rustling in the bushes, I walked towards it and a magical unicorn popped out of the bushes. Its majestic coat shined like she had put glitter on it. Just then in distance a saw a small mystical creature. I journeyed further into the forest and then the trees started to whisper to me each tree held a different story. Right there and then out of the corner of my eye I saw a little fairy. It said it would grant me three wishes. I thought about this for a long time, but I didn’t really have anything to wish for, so the fairy just flew away. After watching the beautiful sunset, I walked back to the edge of the forest I had to say goodbye to this magical realm. It will always be in my heart.
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Muhammad Ibaad – FEEDBACK
Tuesday 7 January
Dear Diary
This is the first time, I’m writing in my journal.Today I’m going to write about the adventures I had in the enchanted forest. I was taking photos in gehay in Zimbabwe that my First day there and it was already incredible. But I got lost in an enchanted forest. At first I tried to escape,but I couldn’t find a way to get out of the enchanted forest.
I walked around to find drinking water and had a sip of it as I forgot to take my water bottle,I took rest for 5 minutes and then started find my using a compass.On the way I found that it wasn’t just a forest it was an enchanted forest, because three lizards put fire around me. it was like the sun was so close to me.
but lucky I had fire inwisher so I could take all the fire out. After that, I started I found my way.
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Enchanted forest
By Raymond Liang
15/12/14
That day was a moment of my life, the enchanted forest. At the moment I stepped into the magical land, I felt waves of nature run into my eyes. I heard the sounds of animals echo through the forest. The soft grass tickled my shoe as I slowly creeped deeper inside the heart of the forest. At first I thought it was one of dreams again, but the moment I touched the green grass I knew it was not a dream. As my heart started to fill with more and more curiosity, I already noticed myself running through the grass!
As I got deeper, I saw a herd of horses near a small tree. As I got closer, I noticed they were different to the houses I see at farms. They had a big horn on the tip of their head. But what was most particular about them was that they were rainbow. At that moment I could not believe my eyes. It was an unicorn. It’s fur as white as a blanket. But I thought it was the end of all the magic that gave this place its name. I was so wrong. Not long after that unbelievable moment I spotted what seemed to be a giant flying lizard of some sort. Not then I realized, it was a dragon when it turned to face me. I was about to run away but something stopped me. The giant dragon flew down like an eagle next to me and started smiling at me. That made me think of when I was younger. I always thought dragons were ferocious creatures, but then I noticed they were actually nice. That moment felt comforting and mind changing about what kind of creatures dragons were really like.
Next was the most fascinating part of my life. Whispering trees. As I got deeper into the forest, that was when I started to notice whispering that came from the trees. I started to get closer towards the tree. Slowly, I lay my ear on the bark of the extraordinary tree and listened to the soft whispers of it.
It felt like it was speaking to me.
I knew it was time to go back now. I whispered a soft goodbye to the unicorns, dragons and the whispering tree goodbye as I set off home. That day was a memory that I will remember from birth to death.
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A Day In The Enchanted Forest
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A day in the enchanted forest
Date: 12/12 2099
Today, I walked into an enchanted and full of magic forest. I walked into the middle of the forest and saw an incredible thing right before me—a tree with an enormous door made of rocks. I yelled the spell in the magic book, “Let me in, my door!” Then the door opened with a huge “bang.” I walked inside, but there were two juxtaposed roads. I was a bit confused. I walked to the right side of the road.
After that, I walked into the magical garden, and many gold birds were flying inside. I met one of the gold birds that can speak. His name is Glory. Glory took me around, and we ate the special food in the enchanted forest.
As we feasted on the delicious treats, Glory shared stories of the garden’s secrets and the adventures of its inhabitants. I felt a sense of wonder and excitement, knowing that I had stumbled upon a place filled with magic and mystery. As we feasted on the delicious treats, Glory shared stories of the garden’s secrets and the adventures of its inhabitants. I felt a sense of wonder and excitement, knowing that I had stumbled upon a place filled with magic and mystery. With each tale, I could see the vibrant colours of the forest come to life, and I realised that this enchanted realm held more than just beauty; it was a treasure trove of wisdom waiting to be discovered.
After the story, I looked at my watch; it’s time to go home. We dab each other and hug each other, and I started to walk out of the enchanted forest. As I went home, I felt very amazed by this experience, knowing that I had not only witnessed the wonders of nature but also uncovered a deeper connection to my surroundings. With each step, the memories of laughter and shared stories echoed in my mind, leaving me with a sense of peace and gratitude that would linger long after I left the forest behind.
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DAY 1-Y5RW-Yiming Kong- FEEDBACK
4 September 2021
Dear diary, this morning, I strolled into the enchanted forest where the trees were whistling in the wind.A minute later, a monster was flying away from a tall girl and a white rabbit wearing a blue waistcoat.Weird!Very weird, strange and eerie, which did not sound nice to me at all!Not at all.I felt very curious and confused in this forest.Next, I saw a ten metre tall monster roaring and animals escaping for their lives.The animals then talked!Very strange and peculiar !Soon after, I heard an owl screaming extremely loudly that maybe even the terrible and hideous monster could have heard what sounded like an extremely harsh and noisy voice:
“Run! New monster arrived at the enchanted forest! Escape now or die!”
“Run! New monster arrived at the enchanted forest! Escape now or die!”imitated a parrot , flying quickly behind the owl.
I had to stop the frightening and large monster.But how?I definitely needed some assistance.
“Hi, Terry!”exclaimed Arnold, who appeared out of nowhere.
“Hi! Should we stop this monster?”I asked Arnold.
“Sure, my friend!”he replied to me.”Why not, my good teammate?”
We went off to search for weapons.Later, I found more than three hundred swords. Arnold suggested that we use the swords to put it in one of the enormous beast’s leg. I agreed because it was a magnificent idea in my opinion.
We took the sharp swords and pushed them into the monster’s leg.When we were complete with Arnold’s suggestion, we were very exhausted. But one minute later, the 10 metre tall monster collapsed. We felt very lucky and relieved that the monster didn’t see and kill us. We rested for an hour or so before we left the enchanted forest and we saw the monster the girl chased. The monster was not alive, but dead. I asked how come the monster was dead and its head was missing.
“Alice, this girl, threw the vorpal sword at the Jabberwocky and it got killed. Then, Alice cut its head off!” answered the rabbit, saying everything in a fast pace.
“Wow, amazing!” I replied.”Thanks for telling me!”
I went home to write about my amazing adventure in this enchanted forest and how I killed a monster-which I finished-just yesterday!
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A day in the enchanted forest
Mon 6 Jan. 2025
Today was a day that I will never forget. With my group of friends, we travelled to a mysterious forest with a shroud covering it like a blanket. When we pushed through the mist, we discovered a perplexing utopia where golden dragons swooped through the air and magic that danced all around us, covering us in a thick mystic veil, leading us to discover this sensational place.
As we walked on, there was an unanticipated crash as a gargantuan serpent headed straight for us. We saw its poison dripping from its fangs as it slowly crept on us. Then, a ruby red shape bolted straight for the monster. As our eyes adjusted, that silhouette slowly transformed as a phoenix. There was sweat all over our group as intense heat ploughed straight through our group.
After that display of sensational fighting, we stumbled upon a supernatural grove of Whispering Trees. If you open your ears enough, you just might hear them sending you a story. Each one story is unlike another, telling breathtaking tales that will make you delve right into a different time-period, allowing you to experience the magic of our world close up. We spent our whole midday there, diving into various paranormal adventures.
When we were about to head back, we saw an unprecedented beam of light which we followed until we came across a golden glow all across the horizon. There was only one word to describe this miraculous feeling, MAGIC.
After an unimaginable day, we had to bid farewell to the incredible land of The Enchanted Forest where we saw magical mythical animals that roam this place which we will always keep next to our heart.
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