Day 5 Writing Homework
Prompt:
Imagine your school is deciding whether to make recess 10 minutes longer. You think this is a great idea!
Write to convince your principal why the school should make recess longer.
Remember to:
Start with an introduction.
Write your opinion on the topic.
Give reasons for your opinion and explain them.
Finish with a conclusion.
Plan your writing, use paragraphs to organise ideas, and write in sentences.
Pay attention to spelling and punctuation.
Check and edit your writing so it is clear.
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- Due Date : January 12, 2025
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Dear principal,
Have you ever thought how much children work, don’t you think that they should have a longer brake? Well if children have an extra ten precious more minutes they can feel fresh air, make friends and play together.Children have will time to finish off their games ,stretch and keep the blood pumping. When children come to class they are refreshed and ready to learn. Imagine how much better the school would be if it had extra ten wonderful minutes.Its not just good for the children its better for the teachers ,so they have more time to get ready for setting up children’s work, correct papers, and they also get a longer brake with no kids around!When we have those extra 10 minutes we can exercise and kids who don’t finish there food fast enough they have more time for a little stretch.To help the blood flow the children have more time to play and gain a healthier body.Imagine the smile on parents faces when they see a healthy ,smart child! When a child steps in there class room eager to learn they have a calmer temper and start there work right away! Just ten more minutes make a huge step for children to be more knowledgeable. Children can sit calm and get more done in a shorter time.When I have extra 10 minutes I understand more of my work and finish my work easily.These precious 10 minutes give everybody one step closer to a great life.Seeing children like me having a great future and a happy life means the world to every student ,so those extra ten minutes gives every student an opportunity to thrive and grow strong.
Kind regards from Aanya