Day 6 Writing Homework
Prompt : Write two persuasive emails about the playground renovation:
A formal email to your local council member requesting inspection and support (300-350 words)
An informal email to a local business owner requesting sponsorship (300-350 words)
Each email must include:
At least two examples of figurative language (metaphor, simile, personification)
Strong emotionally evocative language
Vivid physical descriptions that engage at least three senses
Clear adaptation to the specific audience
Proper email structure
500-600 Words
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- Due Date : April 23, 2025
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Subject: Help Bring Joy Back to the Park—Sponsor Our Playground Renovation!
Hey Jenna,
Hope you’re doing awesome! I’m reaching out because we’ve got a big dream brewing—and I think your amazing bakery could be the cherry on top.
Remember that old playground over by Willow Park? The one where kids used to zoom down the slides like mini superheroes and the air buzzed with energy like a summer festival? These days, it’s more of a ghost town. The colors are washed out like a forgotten painting, the equipment creaks like it’s sighing from neglect, and the whole place just feels… sad.
But here’s the thing—we’re not giving up on it. A few of us in the neighborhood are kickstarting a renovation project to bring it back to life. We’re talking fresh paint, new slides, safe mulch, and maybe even a splash of mural magic. Picture this: kids’ laughter ringing out like music, the scent of clean woodchips and fresh grass, sunlight bouncing off bright play structures—pure joy in motion.
That’s where you come in! We’re looking for local sponsors, and SweetRise Bakery is top of our list. Not only do you make the best cupcakes this side of Manhattan (seriously, that lemon lavender one is art), but you’re also one of the biggest-hearted businesses in town.
Your support—whether it’s a donation, baked goods for the fundraiser, or just spreading the word—would mean the world. In return, we’ll shout your name from the rooftops (and also put it on banners, shirts, and social media, of course).
Let’s build a space where kids can feel free, safe, and inspired again. Let’s make the park sing.
Thanks for considering it. Let’s chat soon?
All the best,
Alioth
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