Day 6 Writing Homework
Prompt : Craft a persuasive speech on one of these topics: 1. The importance of arts education in schools 2. Technology’s impact on human connection 3.Environmental responsibility in everyday life 4. The value of historical preservation in modern society Include the techniques discussed today with a focus on clarity, structure and emotional appeal.
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Day 6- environmental protection in everyday life.
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3-10(6)- Amber Wong
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The Unskippable Topic_ Art
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3-10(6)- Felix
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How technology is affecting Humans
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3-10(6)- Jayden Zhang
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Imagine a school without drama, the walls are bare and there are no pictures anywhere. The only subjects in the school is Math, History, and geography. That is also a school without laughter or smiles, just dull facts. This is what learning will be like without art. This is what life will be like without art. We need to begin experimenting with art at primary school because that is when you brain grows and it is during that period that your mind absorbs information. If creativity is neglected in schools, then you will most likely become a rather lifeless being when you reach adulthood. And it is proven when a large-scale study of 717 students and educators in Australia and Singapore found that schools which neglected creativity saw considerably lower levels of creative, critical, and innovative thinking among students which will significantly impact their adult lives.
In fact, engaging in arts during primary school might even be your path to fame. 80% of famous individuals are recognised for their involvement in arts such as creating music, dancing, acting, sculpturing, painting, graffiti, designing clothes, modelling photography, architecture, culinary art and so much more. These aren’t just another way to get your pay, these are hobbies and that is the best type of job. The National Arts Participation Survey found that 84% of Australians acknowledge the positive impact of arts and creativity, and 97% engage with it in some form. This level of attention highlights the significance of art in daily life apart from future careers.
Art is what separates humans from animals, we are neither as strong, as fast, nor as tough as any other species but the one thing we do better than them is the reason we rule the world. we create because it means something to us. We build, sketch, sculpt, and design not just to survive but because it feels right, making us a truly unique species. Art allows us to express our emotions. Art allows us to enjoy ourselves. Art allows us to be who we are. And all of those points make use humans, not animals. Art is not decoration. It is how we show emotion, test ideas, and figure out who we are Art takes what is inside us and turns it into something real. That ability to construct meaning is what makes us human.
In conclusion, art is a crucial part of life and should be included in all primary schools. It helps students develop creative thinking, improves focus and observation, and builds confidence through self-expression. Art also strengthens problem-solving skills and supports learning in subjects like science and maths by encouraging visual reasoning.
Homework day 6 writing
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3-10(6)- Joyce Lu
My name is Jayden kong and i would like to support that technology is good for us and the environment . This fantastic thing will get you going. I would like to announce that technology can store and research things, power up our daily devices and help with health and medical researches. technology is important, technology is doing everything for us, technology is help people with disabilities.
First, would like to announce that, technology can store and researching things without people need to remember them. For example notes, calendar and sticky notes can remember things. Apps like google, chrome and Microsoft edge can help with researches. So technology is important because it can remember, restore, and let us play games with fun. Studies have shown that most people who spend time on technological devices often have fun.
Additionally, I would like to say that technology is essential for life because it supports human needs like electricity, cars, trains and public transport. Without them we would not have a chance to create the same world that we had before ever again. Public transport is serviced by the government which is extremely cheap. But without them our life is going to be a mess. And remember that this can also be used to power laboratory to make new experiments or discoveries new things. With it we would not have a chance to create new blessings.
Last I would like to announce that technology can help people with medical issues, like hearing, and broke leg or arm. These come in handy when people get hurt in a fight or crashed somewhere. With Technology we can make more potions to prevent bacteria and blessings to make us live longer. Also technology can replace a broken arm or leg with machines that can provide us a better moving replacement. Helping people means medical, creating replacements means medical, using technology for medicines is medical, so everything is medical and technology is for life.
To put it into I nutshell we must altogether technology to essential and good for life because it can remember things without thinking, it powers cars and public transport and it can do replacements and surgeries.
My name is Jayden Kong and I would like to support that technology is good for us and the environment. This fantastic guide will get you going and explore opportunities to discover where it gets involved. I would like to announce that technology can store and research things, power up our daily devices and help with health and medical researches. Technology is important, technology is doing everything for us, technology is helping people with disabilities.
First, would like to announce that, technology can store and researching things without people needing to remember them. For example the followings are; notes, calendar and sticky notes can remember things. Apps like google, chrome and Microsoft edge can help with researches. So technology is important because it can remember, restore, and let us play games with fun. Studies have shown that most people who spend time on technological devices often have fun.
Additionally, I would like to say that technology is essential for life because it supports human needs like electricity, cars, trains and public transport. Without them we would not have a chance to create the same world that we had before ever again. Public transport is serviced by the government which is extremely cheap. But without them our life is going to be a mess, and remember that this can also be used to power laboratory to make new experiments or discover new things. With it we would not have a chance to create new blessings.
Last I would like to announce that technology can help people with medical issues, like hearing, and fixing a broken leg or arm. These come in handy when people get hurt in a fight, or crashed somewhere. With Technology, we can make more potions to prevent bacteria, and discover blessings to make us live longer. Also technology can replace a broken arm or leg with machines that can provide us a better moving replacement. Helping people means medical, creating replacements means medical, using technology for medicines is medical, so everything is medical and technology is for life.
To put it into I nutshell we must altogether technology to essential and good for life because it can remember things without thinking, it powers cars and public transport and it can do replacements and surgeries.
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3-10(6)- JK
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These ideas should be taught in schools so that children can learn early to protect and respect the planet. After all, the next generation holds the power to make a change.
Because in the end, if we destroy the environment, the environment will destroy us. If we save the environment, the environment will save us. We pollute the air, we poison the water, we darken the sky — for profit, for power, for nothing.
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Day 6 Writing
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3-10(6)- Thomas
WE MUST TAKE CARE OF OUR ENVIVIRORNMENT
Hello boys and girls. My name is Shaista and today, I am going to tell you why we should take care of our environment. It is important for our survival. We must be grateful and take care of our planet which is 70% water and 30% land. `
Firstly, we live in our planet. We have, to be grateful about it. We MUST look after and take care of our planet Earth. Some people even live in other planets with food supply and water. Would you rather live in a safe and covered home with shops, parks and other places near your home or would you rather live in a place where there is no shelter and it is way too hot or way too cold? It is obvious that you would choose the first option, so now be grateful and look after our Earth. You can do this in many ways and help our Earth.
There are many ways we can help our Earth. One way is we can do the 3 Re’s. We must reduce usage of single use items such as plastic bags, water bottles, metal cans etc. We also need to reuse our things instead of throwing it in the bin like plastic bags, containers, and old clothes. The third Re is recycling just as important as your studies and fun. We can recycle many things such as paper, glass and certain plastics that help conserve natural resources and decreases pollution and reduces waste that goes into landfills. To add on to the 3 Re’s we can do other things such as preparing good meals with nude food [ food that is packed without disposable packaging, especially plastic wrap, foil, or single-use containers. It is all about bringing food in reusable containers, beeswax wraps, or even just as it is, like a banana or apple in its natural “wrapper”] or like saving energy by using less light and electricity. There are countless more ways to save our Earth and these are just a few ways for us to save our planet.
To conclude or put it into a nutshell, we should save our Earth for our survival, others’ survival everybody’s survival. So be grateful for us living in this Earth and you help yourself and others around you.
THANK YOU
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3-10(6)- Fathima Shaista Mohamed Salman
The Tech, That is Reshaping You Every Day
Name: Nayan Bathula
Topic: How modern technology is reshaping everyday life
Word count: 561 (Including title and Name)
Reflection:
For my feature article, I chose an anecdotal lead because I wanted to start with something that feels real and familiar. Everyone wakes up and checks their phone in the morning, so I thought that would grab the reader’s attention straight away. It also sets the mood for the entire article because my topic is about how phones have become part of our daily routines. The anecdotal lead makes the article sound natural and easy to relate to.
Body:
Beep! Beep! You wake up, reach for your phone, and before you even get out of bed, you are already checking messages or watching videos. Phones are part of almost everything we do, and they have changed the way we live in amazing ways.
The first mobile phone was made in 1983. It was called the Motorola DynaTAC 8000X, and it looked like a giant brick! People could only use it to make calls. Later came phones like Nokia and BlackBerry, which let people text and send emails. Then the iPhone and Android phones arrived — and they changed everything. These phones were not just for calling anymore. They became little computers that could play games, show movies, help with homework, and connect with people all over the world.
Phones have made communication much faster. A long time ago, people had to write letters that took days or even weeks to arrive. Now, you can message someone in another country, and they get it instantly! You can also video call your friends and family and see their faces, even if they are far away.
Another way phones have changed our everyday life is how we learn stuff. Before, if we wanted to know something, we had to ask a teacher, a parent, or look through big library books. But now, we can just grab our phones, search it up, and get the answer in seconds. It is like having a tiny teacher in your pocket! But even though that is cool, we must be careful because not everything we see online is true. So, it is important to use phones for learning, not just scrolling or gaming all day.
Phones also help us find our way. Before GPS, people had to use paper maps or ask strangers for directions. Now, we can just open Google Maps and see exactly where we are going. It is like having a tiny guide inside your pocket.
Even how we spend money has changed. Before, everyone carried coins and cash. Now, many people use Apple Pay or Google Pay to buy things by just tapping their phones. Shopping has become easier and faster.
But there is a minor problem too. Because phones do so much, we can spend too much time on them. Sometimes we scroll for hours instead of going outside or talking to people face to face.
Still, it is amazing how one invention can reshape daily life. The phone helps us connect, explore, and learn — and it keeps getting smarter every year.
So next time your alarm rings in the morning and you pick up your phone, remember: this little device is not just part of your day — it is part of how the world has changed.
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3-10(6)- Nayan Bathula