Day 7 Writing Homework

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Prompt : Write a complete feature article (800-1000 words) on the Silverwater Creek pollution issue.
Your article must include:
An engaging headline
A compelling hook
At least two paragraphs that follow the PEEL structure
Incorporation of ethos-building elements (expert quotes, data)
Balanced presentation of perspectives with a persuasive lean
Vivid descriptive language and imagery
A persuasive conclusion with call to action

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  • Due Date : April 24, 2025
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  7. HG

    Toxic Waters: The Fight to Save Silverwater Creek
    Silverwater Creek used to be a fun and peaceful place. Families would go there to fish, birds sang in the trees, and kids loved playing by the water. But now, the water is dirty and smelly. Rubbish floats on top, and many animals are gone. What happened?
    People in the community are starting to worry. Pollution is harming the creek, and we need to do something before it’s too late.
    Silverwater Creek flows through our town. It helps water our plants, and many animals live there,such as ducks, frogs, and fish. But lately, the creek doesn’t look the same. The water is no longer clear. Sometimes it smells bad, and there is rubbish everywhere.
    Experts say the creek is being polluted by rubbish from drains, people littering, and waste from nearby factories. Dr. Helen Tran, a scientist, says, “Silverwater Creek is full of chemicals and plastic. If we don’t help it now, we may lose it forever.”
    Pollution is hurting the animals and the people who enjoy the creek. When rubbish and chemicals go into the water, they make it unsafe for animals to live. Many kids say they used to see frogs and fish, but now they only see rubbish. Samir, a 10-year-old student, said, “We used to go down to the creek after school, but now it’s gross. We don’t see frogs anymore, just trash.” The dirty water is taking away a special place from kids and families.
    There are many reasons why the creek is getting polluted. A big one is stormwater drains. These drains carry rainwater off the roads but they also carry oil, litter, and even dog poop into the creek. People also throw rubbish into the water or near it, and sometimes factories let dirty water go into the creek. A report from the local council said that most of the waste in the creek comes from people. That means we can fix it. If we try.
    Some people think cleaning the creek will cost too much money. Others believe nature can fix itself. But many experts say we need to help. Dr. Tran says, “It’s not just about money. It’s about our health, the animals, and our future.”
    At the same time, many schools and families want to help right now. Teachers are doing lessons about caring for the environment. Some groups are cleaning up the creek on weekends. Even kids are helping. They want to save the creek and bring it back to life.
    If you walk by the creek now, you’ll see plastic bags, bottles, and old tyres. But if you close your eyes, you might remember what it used to look like. Clean water, fish jumping, dragonflies flying through the air. That’s the creek we should have.
    We can bring back Silverwater Creek. We just need to care and take action. We need rules to stop people and businesses from polluting. We need to remind everyone not to litter. And we need to help clean up the creek.
    Silverwater Creek is part of our community. It’s not too late to save it. Join a clean-up. Talk to your school. Tell your friends and family. Together, we can help the creek shine again.

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  10. Ayaan

    FORMAL EMAIL TO COUNCIL MEMBER
    Subject: Request for Playground Inspection and Support for Urgent Renovations

    To: Councillor [Last Name]
    From: [Your Full Name]
    Date: [Today’s Date]

    Dear Councillor [Last Name],

    I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to respectfully request that the council inspect and support much-needed renovations to the playground at [School or Park Name], which has become not just outdated but increasingly unsafe for the children and families in our community.

    What was once a hub of laughter and motion now feels more like a forgotten corner of town. The playground’s surfaces are cracked like dry riverbeds, the metal slides are rusted and hot to the touch, and the swings groan under pressure like old bones. The scent of warm rubber, splintered wood, and dust replaces the fresh, green aroma a park should offer. Children tiptoe through the space instead of running freely—it’s heartbreaking to watch a place meant for joy become one of quiet caution.

    The playground is more than equipment—it’s a beating heart of our neighborhood. A well-kept play space encourages physical health, social connection, and emotional wellbeing. It’s where friendships are forged and imaginations stretch like the sky above the monkey bars. Right now, that heart is barely beating.

    I understand that council resources are stretched, but even a small investment in an inspection and plan for phased renovation would make an enormous difference. We are more than willing to partner with the council, gather local support, and pursue grant opportunities if needed. What we ask is your leadership—to see the space with fresh eyes and help us restore its purpose.

    Thank you for your time and service to our community. I would be grateful for the opportunity to meet and discuss how we can bring our playground—and its laughter—back to life.

    Warm regards,
    [Your Full Name]
    [Contact Information]
    [Address or School Affiliation]

    INFORMAL EMAIL TO LOCAL BUSINESS OWNER
    Subject: Let’s Bring Joy Back to Our Playground – Will You Help?

    To: Jake Kiser
    From: Ayaan Talwar
    Date: 24.4.25

    Hi Jake,

    I hope you’re doing great and that business is buzzing. I’m reaching out not just as a local resident, but as someone who sees your business as a real supporter of our community—and I think we could do something really special together.

    Our school’s playground is in rough shape. It’s gone from being the neighborhood’s heartbeat to something more like a ghost of what it used to be. The seesaw creaks like a tired hinge, the paint is flaking like autumn leaves, and the old slide feels like a radiator in the summer sun. Kids still play there—but not with the joy they used to. You can see it in the way they hover at the edges, unsure whether to run or retreat.

    We want to fix that. A group of us—parents, students, and teachers—are kickstarting a project to restore and reimagine the playground. And we’d love your help.

    Would your business consider sponsoring part of the renovation? Even a small donation would go a long way. In return, we’ll include your logo on our thank-you signage, in community newsletters, and at the opening celebration we’re planning (yes, with cake and balloons!). Plus, you’ll be known as a business that helps local kids smile a little wider and play a little safer.

    You’ve always been the kind of place that supports real people—not just customers. With your help, we can turn this forgotten corner into a garden of laughter again.

    Let me know if you’d like to chat more. I’d love to drop by or hop on a quick call. Thanks so much for considering this—you’d be making a huge difference.

    All the best,
    Ayaan

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      Hello Ayaan, you submitted incorrect homework. Please submit the correct one. Thanks

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