Week 10 Writing Homework
Imagine you are the leader of a newly discovered magical land. Write a persuasive essay explaining the three most
important laws you would implement to ensure your land thrives. Describe how these laws reflect the lands unique characteristics and why they are essential for creating an ideal society.
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Sintla Isles, a country with the population of 8.7 million. Sintla Isles has a unique compartment of laws, these laws adapt to the environment. This country is truly special due to the cultural tapestry it holds. It’s a utopia for animals that the biodiversity of them is infinite. Sintla Isles’s constitution got everyone to sign and agree to some unique laws. You can count on Sintla Isles if you want to be treated equally.
The Equal Public Service treaty ensures that everyone is equal. Everyone has the exact same right to access public services as you do. This law guarantees that no police, doctor/nurse, firefighter, or any job will be biased. Judges will not be biased based on skin, look, race, and gender, or else they will be punished. They do not take bribes from others and never will their case be biased due to relations with them or their friends. Courts are always monitored so even the slightest of biased perspective will be captured. Normally special law officers educate judges to do right and fish out the wrong. Despite this training if they still show biased opinions they will be punished at certain levels. Biased opinions for 1-4 statements will be charged 200 Sints (1.7 AUD/per Sint) per statement; is and above 5 biased statements will be counted as 60,000 Sints. Taking a bribe will add additional 70 Sints. A biased arrest will take 1yr and 2month of jail. These laws apply to police, judges, lawyers and all law or arrest-based occupations. Similar charges are taken if biased doctors/nurses, firefighters, or any important job are found. Feel free to report biased people who wield tinier jobs: such as cleaners who might not clean the floor for one student, repairers who don’t repair for one. Jobs like these pay a 100 Sint fee, but jobs such as teachers or landlords that are biased take triple the charge; and you optionally get to have a free therapist for 2 months. This way the therapist can deal with trauma so when the victim grows up, they have a decreased chance of becoming biased. Despite the fees being exaggeratedly expensive, they stop people from making biased decisions, to both them and others; this is the secret recipe to a happy community, however this is only one ingredient.
The Protection of Animals agreement protects animals of all kinds from extinction, this is probably the second-best law. This law protects the diversity of animals Sintla Isles has; birds are probably its most amazing animals. Some of their birds weld astonishing crests, or might have a variety of colors, some have weird but beautiful habits, some of them can spread their wings and transform into shapes, while others have it all. Any animal that is least concern or near threatened status can be hunted, the status vulnerable and endangered, people must be given permission to hunt, and critically endangered and Extinct in the wild status must be always supervised and it is illegal to poach them. If you poach vulnerable without permission from an official you will be charged 110 Sints per kill, for endangered you’ll be charged 130 Sints per kill. If you harm them without permission, you’re charged 50 Sints and if you torture or capture them, you will be sentenced to 4 weeks of confinement. If you poach the critically endangered, you get sentenced to 6 months and 3 weeks of prison. If you poach Extinct in the wild animals, you’ll be arrested for 1yr and 7 months. Additionally, if you poach or harm endangered, critically endangered, and Extinct in the wild you must donate 20,000-40,000 Sints to an organization supporting that animal. This too is a very tight strict law, but it prevents them from hunting animals and keeps people happy because they get to see the elegant animals of Sintla Isles. Tourists get to see these elegant animals therefore paying the government money through taxes. Then the government can spend more on tourism. This is a special sauce for later, in the recipe on how to make a happy community.
The Job Finding and Compensation deal was made within the government’s council. This law was firmly advocated by the legislative council. If your family is failing the government will lower taxes for your family and give the adults a job and money. Imagine if your family had only your mom, you and your brother, your mom just lost her job and now you are almost out of money, and your family can’t support you, and you have no school. Due to this law in this situation, the government would lower taxes for you only, get your mom a suitable job for her skill, and the government would get you a school and pay for your school for 2 months; adding on that if you have no cloth or food the government will buy it for you. The payback rate is 5% off for example if you get 100 Sint support from the government, they need you to pay only 95 Sints once you get a job. However you can’t purposely spend all your money to get free things, a unique company called SPOMMO ( Sintla’s Payment Of Money Monitoring Organization) is on your tail, this organization was organized and paid by the government, they monitor what you buy or sell, therefore if you buy a golden statue with all your money then beg the government for money, they know what happened and won’t give it to you. In this way if you buy a gun in an illegal trading post, they are sure to report to SSPU. The SSPU (Sintla’s Special Power Unit) can break into houses and get control of evil doers. Once the scammers are caught, they are sentenced a month and 4 weeks of confinement, plus an additional 1,000 Sint fee. However, if you donate your money to a charity the government will help you when you ask the government for support. The final ingredient will be mixed with the special sauce and the outcome is a great, prosperous, happy community.
Overall, Sintla is a great country that you should live in. You could see graceful animals, beautiful exotic birds especially. You’ll be treated equally with no discrimination, and you’ll be courted by a fair judge. And if you get poor and need help the government will compensate you, cheaper than the real price. So those reasons are why Sintla Isles has such a happy community and why you should come live here too!
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As the chosen leader of Altheria, a land where the sky glows with floating lanterns and the trees sing with ancient magic, I carry a responsibility that is greater than power. I carry a vision. A vision of a fair, united, and lasting society. But no vision becomes real without action. That is why I will articulate three essential laws, on taxes, the environment, and transport, that will shape our future and protect all that makes Altheria magical.
Some may say taxes are unfair. That kind of rhetoric is common in weak kingdoms that fail. But in Altheria, we know better. Our wealth is not gold, it is magic. Some citizens harvest moonlight silk, some trade in healing dust, others care for crops that grow by song. This law ensures that everyone gives according to what they have. The more you gain, the more you give back. These funds will support free magical education, enchanted healing for all, and homes that float for families in need. This is not just about money. It’s about respect. A society that shares its gifts grows stronger together.
In Altheria, nature is not just beautiful, it’s alive. Our rivers sparkle with spirit. Our forests hum with ancient songs. But already, careless mining and wild spellcasting are leaving scars. This law will protect our natural wonders by banning harmful practices and encouraging magical farming, healing of broken lands, and conservation rituals. Our power comes from the land. Without it, our magic fades. Protecting the environment is not a choice it is a duty. A land that honours its roots will always rise strong.
Movement is magic. But in Altheria, too many are stuck while others fly high in private sky ships. This law creates equal, clean, and safe transport for everyone. Floating bridges, shared gliders, and public sky rails will be powered by wind crystals and supported by our fair tax system. When all people can move freely, they can trade, learn, visit, and grow. No one should be left behind. A united land is a thriving land.
These three laws are not just rules. They are the heart of a visionary society. They reflect the magic, values, and spirit of Altheria. With articulate leadership and bold choices, we will build a land where everyone rises together.
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Narnia, an island with a population of 1.3 million people. But not just ordinary people, people who fell happy, safe, and free. Narnia’s unique portfolio of laws helps keep its lush green fields, diverse range of animals, and joyful people safe and at ease. These laws are vital to Narnia’s wildlife survival and help stop the extinction of many species. But why do these laws work? Let’s find out why certain laws are helping Narnia to strive for a great future.
Firstly, in many countries, littering just gives someone a small fine, but in Narnia, serious consequences can come out of littering. This law helps Narnia keep its luscious fields tidy. But what consequences can come out of littering in Narnia? Well, littering on a field will get you at least 2 years in the infamous Solitary Prison, and at most 5 years there. Littering on the streets, however, certainly wont give you an easier time, for you will secure a solid 4 years in Solitary Prison. Undoubtedly, this law is the reason Narnia is crystal clean.
Moreover, Narnia’s diverse range of wildlife is also protected by a law. In fact, not one species has gone extinct since 1967, when people first arrived in Narnia. On this wonderful island, no human shall take the form of a hunter. Instead all citizens in Narnia must help in the “Conservation for Narnia’s Animals” at least once a month. If any citizen kills or helps kill an animal, they will immediately be sentenced to the death penalty. Due to this, no human has never, and will never, dare to kill an animal on Narnia.
In addition, Narnia also has punishments for harming humans. In many countries, murdering other humans is a huge crime. However, some of those countries do not handle the crime well. In Australia, killing will lead to at least 20 years in prison. However, it is clear that 20 years in prison is possible to survive, so the murderer will be on the loose in no time. But with Narnia’s law, murderers will be killed in front of the whole town as a form of punishment. It is clear that with this law, no human will ever dare to murder.
In summation, Narnia is striving to perfection. With its strict, but helpful laws, then island is the safest and happiest place for humans to be. With unforgiving punishments for littering, animal slaughtering, and human killing, this paradise is a dream in the making. If every country were to have Narnia’s laws, Earth would thrive like never before.
Narnia, an island with a population of 1.3 million people. But not just ordinary people, people who are safe, free, and happy. With its unique portfolio of laws, Narnia’s lush green fields are free of litter, its diverse range of wildlife is safe from extinction, and people are safe from violence and murderers. But why do these laws work on Narnia? Let’s find out how these laws are helping Narnia strive for perfection, and why these laws work so well.
To start off with, littering is a huge problem in many countries and islands. Most countries will give only a small fine if they catch you littering, however, in Narnia, big consequences will come out of throwing rubbish on the ground. For example, if someone litters on a luscious field, they will secure themselves at least 2 years in the infamous Solitary Prison. However, littering on the streets won’t give you an easier time, for you will secure yourself 3 years in Solitary Prison. Due to this, no one has dared to litter in Narnia since 2003.
Moreover, Narnia is also very protective of its diverse range of wildlife. Instead of residents taking the form of hunters, everyone who lives in Narnia must help conserve wildlife. In fact, if you live in Narnia, you must help the Conservation of Narnia’s Wildlife (CNW) at least once a month. This society helps animals which are endangered and tries to save them. Plus, if anyone in Narnia kills or helps kill an animal, they will immediately be sentenced to 10 years in jail. Because of this rule no species has gone extinct since 1967, which was when people first came to Narnia.
In addition, murdering humans is also something Narnia is strict about. In many countries and islands, murderers are a huge problem. On top of that, countries do not know how to deal with those murderers. For example, in Australia, a murderer will get minimum 20 years in prison. 20 years is clearly survivable, so soon, a murderer will be on the loose again. However, in Narnia, murderers will get murdered in front of their whole suburb as an act of punishment. With this rule, no one has ever dared to murder anyone on Narnia.
In summation, these three laws are helping Narnia strive for perfection. With consequences for littering, animal slaughter, and murdering, Narnia is a place where humans and animals can feel safe. If every country had the laws that Narnia has, then I guarantee the world would be cleaner and safer than ever before.
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If I was the chosen leader for Beijing, a place where the population is 21.86 million. Also, it’s bright and the clouds are adrift, that land of mine would be perfect. I would hold the responsibility of something even greater than power. I had a vision of equality, safety and justice for our community. This is why I will have these three laws pointed out the most.
First equality, at Beijing you will feel very welcome, and you’d feel at home. People will greet you with open and wide smiles and their manners at the best. No one would ever be racists to you nope you heard me correctly. They wouldn’t say anything biased nor because of your skin color, your face depending on what you look like and certainly not because of your back round. Beijing is a just and prosperous society where all individuals have equal rights and opportunities.
Second safety, this miraculous place is the world’s top 31st safest place. Beijing will always be safe. For example, in 2022, there were 4.42 million criminal cases, the lowest in a decade. Beijing has amazing safety that you could never possibly think of. This place is one of a wonder that people want to visit partly because of all the safety that’s around.
Finally, justice for our community, leading international human rights groups continue to point to widespread abuse in the country’s judicial system. Beijing lets you roam freely they will most certainly not give you minimized freedom and will not say you can’t do this you can’t do that.
In conclusion, Beijing is a great country you should live in. Just think of all the equality you could get. Your safety would be in great hands. Finally, you will most absolutely get your own freedom and justice from your community. It’s vital for you to come and visit here.
What three laws would you have for a new, magical land that you own? If I was the leader, I would help the poor, ensure animals are protected and add more renewable, sustainable transportation services to make the area thrive. I think these laws are very important to create a healthy, well-connected and balanced community.
Firstly, I would help the animals in the area. We could add more vets and centres that help with animal care such as zoos while having an environmental law. It includes allowing anyone to rescue animals themselves and stop anyone from destroying creatures’ habitat. People that don’t follow this rule could have serious fines or a potential for jail time. It’s important that we have this rule so that they won’t go extinct or endangered, losing our identity known for special and cared animal place.
Moreover, the charity law helps the poor. People who have a higher-than-average income will have a slightly higher tax given to the charity. They can have enough money for basic needs including water, food and home to live in. This way we can have an equitable society. Also, it reduces violence and other negative behaviour like stealing, breaking into houses and murdering people. It is less likely that they resort to crime because they have enough to fulfill themselves to meet basic needs.
Finally, I would add a law where all transportation services use renewable energy. This is so that we can stop burning fossil fuels that could harm the environment and our physical health. The gas we create has chemicals that is negative to your health while it forms carbon dioxide in the atmosphere. Instead, we can use electrical vehicles reducing impact to the future generations. Therefore, this law is beneficial to let the generations after us to thrive.
In conclusion, I think that my three laws are beneficial for a positive society. It helps with environmental aspects such as reducing global warming and care for all animals while the poor have essentials making an equal community. The society bonds together without any arguments as the land continues to thrive with tigers pouncing and butterflies fluttering.