Week 5 Writing Homework
Prompt:
Think of a current event or issue that you are passionate about. In 500 words, write a persuasive paragraph explaining why others should care about this issue and what they can do to help.
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Unstainable Fishing
Have you ever heard of unsustainable fishing? Well, that’s what I’ll be talking about today. Unsustainable fishing is a terrible way to fish. It can cause a damaged ecosystem; it can damage the coral reef that already needs to improve and can draw other innocent animals that righteously accidentally swim into the bait. This is a horrible way, and I am writing to convince you to stop.
First and foremost, unsustainable fishing can cause serious damage into the ocean’s precious ecosystem. Researchers from WWF (World Wildlife Fund) says that when too many fish are taken out of the ocean it creates an imbalance that can erode the food web and lead to a loss of other important marine life, including vulnerable species like sea turtles and corals. It means that predators that rely on fish will go ravenous and have barely anything to eat. Poor animals will starve and slowly die and then the ocean will just be some empty, cold water that doesn’t have any stunning wildlife we love. We must stop unsustainable fishing before our wonderful ocean ecosystem is dead, stony filled with no emotions.
Furthermore, the reef will be damaged or even bleach more from unsustainable fishing. Scientists of NOAA (National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration.) have shown the impacts from unsustainable fishing on coral reef areas can lead to the depletion of key reef species in many locations. Such losses often have a ripple effect, not just on the coral reef ecosystems themselves, but also on the local economies that depend on them. Our reef is a valuable and vital part of our seas to keep it the one we know now. For the reefs are the most important part; they’re the foundation. In order to keep it, unsustainable fishing should be banned as our thrilling reef needs to be remained.
Ultimately, ways of unsustainable fishing can draw poor innocent animals that yearn for freedom but is quickly ended from cruel nets and lines. Studies have shown that hundreds of thousands of marine mammals, seabirds, and sea turtles are captured each year, alongside tens of millions of sharks. Many of these species are endangered and protected, while some such as the vaquita, Eastern Pacific leatherback turtle, and Maui dolphin are on the brink of extinction. Animals must be protected before they experience their worst nightmare, extinction. Yes, it may be one word, but it has significant meaning. And no one wants any more animals to be extinct. I certainly don’t. Unsustainable fishing must be stopped for endangered animals and other ones too before our ocean will be clear, with no ripples and fun engagement.
To conclude, unsustainable fishing is a horrible practice that must be stopped. It already causes a damaged ecosystem; it can damage the coral reef that already needs to improve and can draw other innocent animals that righteously accidentally swim into the bait. Anyone can make a change, especially you. We shouldn’t ignore this important situation anymore. Let’s stand up and take action together.
(P.S For the dolphins!)
(P.P.S I wrote exactly 500 words not including my title and my P.S)
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The war between Gaza and Israel
The endless war between Gaza and Israel. The year of pain and hurt. People dying and parents crying for losing their kids. I am supporting then no matter what. People are trying to tell them to end this war for once and all. They need peace and all the people have to move to other countries because of this war. Destroyed mosques for the Islamic people. I am a Muslim, and I also say to stop the war to. People are getting weak, and they have nothing to eat and drink. People need medications and all kind of medical stuff. don’t you know how they might feel, and they could have pain in their bodies and blood bursting out of their bodies.
The good possibilities. A group of people called UNICEF. These people help in education and hunger. They are now stopping the war for ten minutes so they can have some food. Children getting education but if we don’t get any support then everything will go back to pain and war without drinking and hunger. We need everyone’s support. Let’s help those in need but it is your choice if you want help then you can and if you don’t want to then then it is not a single bit problem. The zephyr of time is going fast, and it also has been 2 years. Who will want a war for two years.
WE MUST TELL THEM TO STOP FOR ONCE AND ALL.
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Y5RW_WK5 – Yashal