Day 1 Writing Homework
Prompt : Close your eyes and picture yourself on a beach. In 300 words, describe what you see, hear, taste, touch, and smell using the sensory imagery that we discussed today!
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- Due Date : April 16, 2025
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My eyes were caught on the waves, as the smell of fresh, aquatic, water filled my nose as a whole. I glanced over to the sand, and saw children running around, building sand castles, and even throwing sand at each other. As I took a step towards the ocean, the noise of gushing water was coming closer, and later better than never, next thing I knew there was water at my feet. When the laughter and giggles of children were also processing in my brain, I knew this beach was filled with nothing but sweet, relaxing, calmness.
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Ritu – DAY 1
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Hanson Scholary Writing HW Day1
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Jin – DAY 1
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Annie Chen – DAY 1
The clumsy waves crashed against the shore as the tiny grains of sand tickle my feet. There are children yelling in excitement as they prepare to bounce the ball. The surfers jumped and did tricks on the waves like an acrobat, each wave sending a splash of joy onto my face. My mouth erupted like a volcano as I took several sips into my Pop. Each sip, freezes my brain as I sat on the mat, sitting down with the beauty of the mountain in the distance.
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Melody Lee – DAY 1
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Writing Homework 14-04-2025
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Mason Park – DAY 1
As I take a stroll along the shoreline of the sandy beach. The salty sand touching my feet made me feel a sense of calmness. The air rushing through me on a summer day with a combination of the sun’s warmth is so relaxing. Smooth seashells, ravel and cool to the touch, rest in my palm. The water laps on my skin—its embrace refreshing and fluid. Driftwood, weathered and rough, tells tales of ocean journeys. A beach towel’s texture feels comforting beneath me. Nature’s textures surround me in their raw beauty.
With the sound of the the ocean water whispering secrets as it collides with the land and the seagulls crying overhead as they rattled their beaks made me realise why lot of individuals come here. The faint sound of the leave rustling in the wind blends with the chit chatter of beachgoers who also feel welcomed in the sandy paradise. My feet shuffle through sand, sometimes splashing in the shallows. It’s nature’s sounds—a soothing, vibrant melody unique to the coast of any beach
The sight of many of people either playing or relaxing was a sense of delight. Golden sands stretch into the horizon, shimmering under the warm sun. Waves glitter as they dance and crash, leaving foamy trails behind. Seagulls glide effortlessly above, silhouettes against the the great blue sky. Bright umbrellas dot the beach, paired with colorful towels. Driftwood rests near tide pools teeming with life, while boats bob gently in the distance. Its the scenery, vibrant and alive.
The bitter taste of salt lingers in the air, mixing with the crispness of a cool ocean breeze. As I jump into the deep blue the saltiness of the water it rushes into my mouth. Fresh seafood satisfies my taste buds—shrimp or tender fish grilled to perfection. Juicy watermelon or icy lemonade offer sweet, refreshing relief under the blazing sun.
The air carries the sharp, salty scent of the ocean, blending with the scent of seaweed washed ashore. Sunscreen’s coconut aroma wafts by, blending with the sweet, toasty smell of nearby beachside snacks. A hint of charcoal drifts from a distant barbecue, while the fain smell of fresh marine life reminds me of nature’s untouched environment.
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Rajeeve – DAY 1
As I take a stroll along the shoreline of the sandy beach. The salty sand touching my feet made me feel a sense of calmness. The air rushing through me on a summer day with a combination of the sun’s warmth is so relaxing. Smooth seashells, ravel and cool to the touch, rest in my palm. The water laps at my skin—its embrace refreshing and fluid. Driftwood, weathered and rough, tells tales of ocean journeys. A beach towel’s texture feels comforting beneath me. Nature’s textures surround me in their raw beauty.
With the sound of the the ocean water whispering secrets as it collides with the land and the seagulls crying overhead as they rattled their beaks made me realise why lot of individuals come here. The faint sound of the leave rustling in the wind blends with the chit chatter of beachgoers who also feel welcomed in the sandy paradise. My feet shuffle through sand, sometimes splashing in the shallows. It’s nature’s sounds—a soothing, vibrant melody unique to the coast of any beach
The sight of many of people either playing or relaxing was a sense of delight. Golden sands stretch into the horizon, shimmering under the warm sun. Waves glitter as they dance and crash, leaving foamy trails behind. Seagulls glide effortlessly above, silhouettes against the the great blue sky. Bright umbrellas dot the beach, paired with colorful towels. Driftwood rests near tide pools teeming with life, while boats bob gently in the distance. Its the scenery, vibrant and alive.
The bitter taste of salt lingers in the air, mixing with the crispness of a cool ocean breeze. As I jump into the deep blue the saltiness of the water rushes into my mouth. Fresh seafood satisfies my taste buds—succulent shrimp or tender fish grilled to perfection. Juicy watermelon or icy lemonade offer sweet, refreshing relief under the sun.
The air carries the sharp, salty scent of the ocean, mingling with the faint musk of seaweed washed ashore. Sunscreen’s coconut aroma wafts by, blending with the sweet, toasty smell of nearby beachside snacks. A hint of charcoal drifts from a distant barbecue, while the faint smell of fresh marine life reminds you of nature’s untouched environment.
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Sam – DAY 1
As I walked down onto the beach my toes started to feel warm from the sun. The waves on the ocean were as calm as a sheet of glass. Every now and again there were short green plants in the sand. At the back of the beach there were so bulky that even if there was a hundred people on the beach there was still enough shade for everybody.
“Hey Mia, come and sit down over here” said a voice from a far away distance. Mia could see a little glob in the trees far off, but Mia knew that voice. It was her best friend Addison. Mia rushed over to her, she ran as fast as she possibly could. While she was running, Mia could hear little waves banging against the surface of the shore. She could also see that Addison was building a cabana for them.
“Hey Addison, I see you brought your cabana and I brought some cupcakes for us to enjoy” smiled Mia excitedly. The pair kept on talking and talking, until it was time they thought that they would go have a swim in the nice, cool ocean. The smell of the salty water filled their nostrils, leaving a cool and refreshing feeling.
“Mia do you want to go a bit further out” said Addison hopefully. She did have a look on her face that looked like she was expecting a no as her final answer.
“Sorry if we go out any further it means we go deeper, and as a safety requirement we can’t go past our shoulders in the water” said Mia. “Plus there could be more of a chance to get bitten by a shark, how about we go up to the cabana and have some cupcakes”. So they started walking out of the refreshing water and then dried themselves off with a towel.
“How did you make these cupcakes, they are so good” exclaimed Addison.
“All you have to do is take your time and make them with love” said Mia smiling at her friend. The sweet smell filled the air all around them. Mia put her hand down on the sand, it was so hot from all the sun it had gotten while they went swimming.
After eating their cupcakes and a lot of talking about their plans for the week, they decided to go back into the water and have another nice long swim.
“Let’s have a race to see who can get there first” said Addison hurriedly “ 3, 2, 1 go” she screamed. They both ran as fast as their legs would carry them. Splash. Addison got to the ocean first. With her jump water had splashed everywhere and all over Mia. Addison started swimming further and further out too far for Mia’s liking.
“Addison come back, I see a shark in the water near you, swim back and don’t make too much splashing in the water” exclaimed Mia worried. Addison started swimming frantically towards the shore, but she was not fast enough to out swim a shark who lives in the water 24/7. Mia could see blood in the water and a fin turning around looking for his next victim to hunt down on.
“Help me Mia I can’t swim” cried Addison tear streaming down her face with the pain in her leg. Mia rushed into the water to help her friend, Mia grabbed her arm tightly and pulled her back to the surface of the shore.
“Call an ambulance” cried Addison, who was sobbing uncontrollably. Mia grabbed her phone out from her bag and called triple 0.
“Hello what is your situation” said a lady across the phone.
“Hi, I would like an ambulance for my friend as she has got bitten by a shark” Mia replied, shaking.
“Ok lovely, what I would like you to do is to stay calm, an ambulance is on the way” said the lady. Addison was holding on to Mia, afraid and in pain. A few minutes later Mia could hear sirens ringing not too far away.
“Hopefully it is the ambulance” thought Mia. In the distance Mia could see people running across the beach, over to where they were sitting.
“So little girl, what we are going to do is take your friend onto a stretcher and take her to the hospital” said a man picking up Addison and putting her onto a stretcher beside her. An ambulance started driving down the beach and when it got to them some other people came and opened the doors at the back off-road Addison to be put into the ambulance.
“You can see your friend once she has had a look at her leg” said the man closing the doors behind him.
THE END
UNTIL…………..
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Alex – DAY 1
I walked along the beach. As I was walking I could feel the fresh smell of the beach like it was an air freshener but it also smelled that gave me a tingle in my nose. As I kept walking along the beach I could feel the light breeze coming against me. This fresh air felt warm as I felt like I was sleeping in a comfortable bed. I kept walking in the beach, as I did it felt like an escape to all my problems and also my stress. Beach felt like a solution to all my problems and could be open with anything.
As I stroll along, I could feel the soft smooth sand under my feet. The sand was very hot and I walked through it felt like I was walking on a burning grill. The sand was mixed with a different coloured shells. The light from the sun shined on the shell which reflected onto me creating a rainbow. My foot was making marks on the beach as I took every step, these marks remained there until the water came and erased it away. As I kept walking, I looked around and it felt like I was having the best time of life. The bright shining sun went through my cold skin and give me a feeling of excitement. When I kept walking I could see the birds roaming around the sky like a pack of wolves making irritating squeaky noises as it is hungry and trying to find its prey. The sky turned from dark blue sky to a bright shimmery blue sky. Soft, fluffy big clouds were covering the sky, as it started to split away. As it split away, the sun restored and shined on the waves and the cold water started boiling. As these waves dashed, the noises soothed me every time.
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latha B 5 – DAY 1
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A Final Wish Come True
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Gurfateh – DAY 1