Day 3 Writing Homework
Prompt : Write a complete 3-minute persuasive speech on climate change using all techniques learned today.
Your speech must include:
Clear AIDA structure
At least five different rhetorical devices (label them)
Strong emotionally evocative language
Rich physically descriptive language engaging multiple senses
At least two original symbolic or metaphorical images Effective transitions and cohesive paragraphs.
500 WORDS
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Day 3 – Climate Speech
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Day 3 – Yusuf Khan
Friends, colleagues, fellow inhabitants of this precious planet,
(Attention) Look around you. Feel the gentle caress of the morning air, hear the distant hum of the city awakening, see the vibrant colours of life unfolding. This is our home. A breathtaking tapestry woven with intricate ecosystems, a symphony of natural wonders, a legacy passed down through generations. But I stand before you today with a heavy heart, because this legacy, this vibrant tapestry, is fraying at the edges.
(Interest) The culprit? Climate change. It’s not a distant threat; it’s a present reality. We see it in the increasingly ferocious storms that lash our coastlines, leaving devastation in their wake. We feel it in the scorching heatwaves that bake our land, threatening our health and our livelihoods. We hear it in the desperate cries of species facing extinction as their habitats vanish. This isn’t just about melting ice caps and polar bears; this is about our future, our children’s future, and the very habitability of this Earth.
(Desire) Imagine a world where the air is thick with pollution, where fertile lands turn to barren deserts, where coastal communities are swallowed by rising seas. This isn’t a scene from a dystopian movie; it’s a potential future we are hurtling towards if we fail to act. But imagine instead a world where we have harnessed the power of nature, where clean energy illuminates our cities, where thriving forests purify our air, and where our children breathe freely under a clear blue sky. This is the future we can build, the future we must build.
(Action) The power to shape this future lies within each and every one of us. We cannot afford apathy. We cannot afford to shrug our shoulders and say it’s someone else’s problem. This is our problem, our responsibility.
( Rhetorical Question: Anaphora) Are we going to stand idly by while our planet withers? Are we going to betray the trust of future generations? Are we going to let the beauty and bounty of this Earth slip through our fingers like grains of sand? The answer, I believe, is a resounding NO!
( Metaphor:) Climate change is a thief in the night, silently stealing our future. But we have the power to lock our doors, to build a fortress of sustainable practices and renewable energy.
( Personification:) The Earth is not a passive object; it is a living, breathing entity, and it is crying out for our help. We must listen to its pleas.
( Hyperbole:) The consequences of inaction are not just significant; they are catastrophic. We are talking about the potential collapse of ecosystems, mass displacement of populations, and a world irrevocably altered for the worse.
( Simile:) Transitioning to a green economy is not a burden; it’s an opportunity, like planting a seed that will blossom into a healthier and more prosperous future for all.
We need systemic change, yes. We need governments to implement bold policies, businesses to embrace sustainable practices, and scientists to continue their vital research. But individual action is the bedrock upon which this change will be built.
( Emotionally Evocative Language:) Think of the innocent eyes of a child, gazing at the wonders of nature. Do we have the right to condemn them to a future choked by pollution and ravaged by environmental disasters? Think of the vibrant coral reefs, teeming with life, now bleached and dying. Can we stand by and watch this underwater paradise vanish forever? Think of the ancient forests, the lungs of our planet, being felled at an alarming rate. Can we silence the whispers of the wind through their branches?
( Physically Descriptive Language:) Picture the parched earth cracking under a relentless sun, the acrid smell of wildfires filling the air, the taste of salt spray as storm surges inundate coastal homes, the eerie silence of a forest devoid of birdsong. These are not abstract concepts; these are tangible realities for many around the world, and they will become our reality if we fail to act.
( Symbolic Image:) Imagine a single drop of water. Alone, it seems insignificant. But when joined with millions of other drops, it forms a mighty river, capable of carving through mountains. Our individual actions, however small they may seem, are like those drops of water. Together, they can create an unstoppable force for change.
( Original Metaphorical Image:) Our planet is a shared vessel sailing through the cosmos. We are all passengers, and we have a collective responsibility to ensure its safe passage. We cannot afford to drill holes in the hull or ignore the gathering storm clouds. We must work together, bail out the water, and chart a course towards a sustainable horizon.
(Cohesive Paragraph & Transition): The challenge before us is immense, but so is our capacity for innovation, compassion, and collective action. We have the knowledge, the technology, and the moral imperative to address climate change. What we need now is the will.
(Cohesive Paragraph & Transition): Let us move beyond fear and embrace hope. Let us transform our anxiety into action. Let us turn this crisis into an opportunity to build a more just, more sustainable, and more resilient world for ourselves and for generations to come.
(Action) I urge you today: make a change. Reduce your carbon footprint. Advocate for sustainable policies. Educate yourselves and others. Speak up for our planet. Every action, no matter how small, sends a ripple of change outwards. Let those ripples converge into a tidal wave of positive transformation. Let us be the generation that turned the tide on climate change. Let us safeguard the beauty and bounty of this Earth, our only home. Thank you.
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Day 3 – Divjot
Friends, colleagues, fellow inhabitants of this precious planet,
(Attention) Look around you. Feel the gentle caress of the morning air, hear the distant hum of the city awakening, see the vibrant colours of life unfolding. This is our home. A breathtaking tapestry woven with intricate ecosystems, a symphony of natural wonders, a legacy passed down through generations. But I stand before you today with a heavy heart, because this legacy, this vibrant tapestry, is fraying at the edges.
(Interest) The culprit? Climate change. It’s not a distant threat; it’s a present reality. We see it in the increasingly ferocious storms that lash our coastlines, leaving devastation in their wake. We feel it in the scorching heatwaves that bake our land, threatening our health and our livelihoods. We hear it in the desperate cries of species facing extinction as their habitats vanish. This isn’t just about melting ice caps and polar bears; this is about our future, our children’s future, and the very habitability of this Earth.
(Desire) Imagine a world where the air is thick with pollution, where fertile lands turn to barren deserts, where coastal communities are swallowed by rising seas. This isn’t a scene from a dystopian movie; it’s a potential future we are hurtling towards if we fail to act. But imagine instead a world where we have harnessed the power of nature, where clean energy illuminates our cities, where thriving forests purify our air, and where our children breathe freely under a clear blue sky. This is the future we can build, the future we must build.
(Action) The power to shape this future lies within each and every one of us. We cannot afford apathy. We cannot afford to shrug our shoulders and say it’s someone else’s problem. This is our problem, our responsibility.
( Rhetorical Question: Anaphora) Are we going to stand idly by while our planet withers? Are we going to betray the trust of future generations? Are we going to let the beauty and bounty of this Earth slip through our fingers like grains of sand? The answer, I believe, is a resounding NO!
( Metaphor:) Climate change is a thief in the night, silently stealing our future. But we have the power to lock our doors, to build a fortress of sustainable practices and renewable energy.
( Personification:) The Earth is not a passive object; it is a living, breathing entity, and it is crying out for our help. We must listen to its pleas.
( Hyperbole:) The consequences of inaction are not just significant; they are catastrophic. We are talking about the potential collapse of ecosystems, mass displacement of populations, and a world irrevocably altered for the worse.
( Simile:) Transitioning to a green economy is not a burden; it’s an opportunity, like planting a seed that will blossom into a healthier and more prosperous future for all.
We need systemic change, yes. We need governments to implement bold policies, businesses to embrace sustainable practices, and scientists to continue their vital research. But individual action is the bedrock upon which this change will be built.
( Emotionally Evocative Language:) Think of the innocent eyes of a child, gazing at the wonders of nature. Do we have the right to condemn them to a future choked by pollution and ravaged by environmental disasters? Think of the vibrant coral reefs, teeming with life, now bleached and dying. Can we stand by and watch this underwater paradise vanish forever? Think of the ancient forests, the lungs of our planet, being felled at an alarming rate. Can we silence the whispers of the wind through their branches?
( Physically Descriptive Language:) Picture the parched earth cracking under a relentless sun, the acrid smell of wildfires filling the air, the taste of salt spray as storm surges inundate coastal homes, the eerie silence of a forest devoid of birdsong. These are not abstract concepts; these are tangible realities for many around the world, and they will become our reality if we fail to act.
( Symbolic Image:) Imagine a single drop of water. Alone, it seems insignificant. But when joined with millions of other drops, it forms a mighty river, capable of carving through mountains. Our individual actions, however small they may seem, are like those drops of water. Together, they can create an unstoppable force for change.
( Original Metaphorical Image:) Our planet is a shared vessel sailing through the cosmos. We are all passengers, and we have a collective responsibility to ensure its safe passage. We cannot afford to drill holes in the hull or ignore the gathering storm clouds. We must work together, bail out the water, and chart a course towards a sustainable horizon.
(Cohesive Paragraph & Transition): The challenge before us is immense, but so is our capacity for innovation, compassion, and collective action. We have the knowledge, the technology, and the moral imperative to address climate change. What we need now is the will.
(Cohesive Paragraph & Transition): Let us move beyond fear and embrace hope. Let us transform our anxiety into action. Let us turn this crisis into an opportunity to build a more just, more sustainable, and more resilient world for ourselves and for generations to come.
(Action) I urge you today: make a change. Reduce your carbon footprint. Advocate for sustainable policies. Educate yourselves and others. Speak up for our planet. Every action, no matter how small, sends a ripple of change outwards. Let those ripples converge into a tidal wave of positive transformation. Let us be the generation that turned the tide on climate change. Let us safeguard the beauty and bounty of this Earth, our only home. Thank you.
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Fellow Inhabitants of Earth,
Imagine waking up tomorrow to a world where the air is too thick to breathe, where the oceans have swallowed the beaches, we once walked upon, and where wildfires rage as a constant reminder of our collective failure. ‘The oceans have swallowed the beaches we once walked upon’.
Climate change is no longer a distant threat. It’s here, now, in our homes, our cities, and our very way of life. In 2025, global temperatures reached record highs, while natural disasters have become part of the new normal. Just last summer, wildfires ravaged parts of California, turning forests into ash, and floods submerged entire communities in Europe. These events are not isolated—they are the warning signs that our planet is on the brink.
You may wonder, ‘How did we get here?’ It’s simple: we have been extracting from the Earth without regard for what we leave behind. Every factory that spews carbon into the air, every forest we clear for urban sprawl, every ounce of plastic we discard like it doesn’t matter—these actions have consequences. But there is still time. We can change the trajectory. We have the power to reverse the damage, if only we take action now.
We know what the solutions are: renewable energy, sustainable agriculture, reforestation, and reducing waste. These solutions are not just theoretical; they’re tangible. Countries around the world are already transitioning to greener alternatives, and some companies are putting the planet before profits. But we must do more. We must demand that our governments and businesses act with urgency. The clock is ticking.
So, why does this matter? Because the future is not something that just happens to us—it’s something we build, every day, with every choice we make. Imagine a world where your children can breathe clean air, where vibrant forests are not just memories, and where rising seas no longer threaten to drown coastal cities. This is a world within our reach, but only if we act now.
Think about the feeling of stepping into a field of wildflowers in full bloom—imagine the scent of fresh earth and the rustling of leaves in a breeze. These experiences are the heartbeat of our planet. We must protect them, for they are not just beautiful—they are life itself. If we continue to ignore climate change, we risk losing the very essence of the Earth’s vitality. Can we really stand by and let that happen?
I call on each of you to take action today. Whether it’s reducing your carbon footprint, supporting policies that combat climate change, or educating others about the urgency of this crisis, every step counts. It’s time to demand change from those in power and to hold ourselves accountable for the future we are creating. Together, we have the power to restore balance to our planet, to turn the tide before it’s too late.
So, let’s stand up, not just for ourselves, but for future generations. The Earth is not a resource to be exploited—it is our home, our responsibility, and it deserves our protection.
Thank you
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