Day 1 Writing Homework
Prompt : Write a complete persuasive letter based on the library demolition scenario. Your letter must include:
Correct formal letter format with all components
At least three effective rhetorical questions
Extensive use of emotive language throughout
At least one paragraph featuring painful imagery
At least one paragraph with detailed physical descriptions
A minimum of three advanced rhetorical techniques
Appropriate formal tone throughout
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Aaliyah Noor
42 Willowbank Drive
Roseville, NSW 2069
14 April 2025
Councillor Hang
Roseville Community Council
135 Civic Lane
Roseville, NSW 2069
Subject: Objection to the Proposed Demolition of Our Community Library
Dear Councilor Hang,
I write you with a heavy heart weighted by profound sorrow and misery regarding the council’s proposal to demolish the heart of our intellectual heritage, within our community that rests amidst our lovely suburb, this proposal is in favor of yet another sterile, marked with etches of soulless commercial, a horrid monstrosity.
As a student whose intellectual growth has significantly been nurtured within the hallowed walls of our library, a sanctuary which carries many crucial benefits, I find myself prevailed to voice my vehement opposition. Where shall my fellow peers and students turn to, so they can find knowledge amongst a supportive intellectual sanctuary? How can you let this grotesque facade occur? Demolishing a beacon of hope which leads many incredible minds to find peace surrounded by books which withhold knowledge, astounding gateways to knowledge. The mere though of those sacred shelved-piled high with humanity’s greatest thoughts and ambitions-being reduced to splintered debris sends instinctive tremor of revulsion through our community’s collective awareness. I implore you, with my whole hear, to sincerely reconsider this cataclysmic decision before an irreversible cultural horror is committed against our community’s academic legacy. How can we justify extinguishing this beacon of knowledge which has illuminated numerous, brilliant minds across generations, maybe even decades, or even centuries?
The destruction of our library would not simply cause harm—it would tear a gaping, festering wound in the soul of our community, one that would ache with sorrow for generations. Each cherished book, torn from its rightful place, would be like severing an artery in our shared body of knowledge, leaving us to bleed cultural memory and intellectual promise. Can you not picture the horrific scene? Bulldozers—ravenous metal beasts—ripping into the library’s dignified façade, their steel jaws devouring the sanctuary that has long nurtured our dreams. The deafening symphony of destruction—concrete cracking like bones, glass shattering like hope, wood splintering like trust—would echo through our streets, drowning out the quiet wisdom of authors who have guided us for centuries. Is this the legacy of cultural vandalism you’re willing to claim? The hollow void left behind will forever whisper with the ghostly cries of unread stories, unmade discoveries, and minds never awakened to their fullest light.
Our library stands as a guardian of knowledge—its very presence a testament to our community’s intellectual spirit. The weathered stone exterior, shaped by decades of seasons, holds a learning space no digital replica could replace. Inside, sunlight filters through dust-kissed air, warming the oak shelves whose grains whisper of ancient forests.
The familiar aroma—a blend of aged paper, polished wood, and worn book bindings—stirs an immediate sense of wonder in all who enter. Reading tables, smoothed by countless hands, bear faint marks of notes and study—silent echoes of academic discovery. Above, vaulted ceilings catch and soften every whisper, filling the space with a calm, contemplative hush.
This multisensory harmony—sight, scent, sound, and touch—creates an almost sacred space for thought and imagination. What commercial building, however sleek, could ever replicate such soul?
Our library is more than just a mere building—it’s a living archive of ideas, a sanctuary for learning, and a space that fosters connection across generations. Demolishing it would erase not only bricks and books but a legacy of knowledge and community. I urge you to preserve this vital cornerstone of our suburb’s identity—for us, future students, and the brilliance yet to come.
Yours in profound concern,
Aaliyah Noor
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K.Sarah
ABC Street.
Subject: The Unthinkable Demolition of Our Community Library: A Call to Action
Dear Mayor and esteemed Council Members
I hope this letter finds you well. It is with great concern and an overwhelming sense of urgency that I write to you regarding the proposed demolition of our beloved community library. This proposal, should it move forward, represents not just a physical loss, but the decimation of an irreplaceable cultural institution—a lifeline for our community members of all ages, backgrounds, and walks of life.
How could we, as a society, allow the destruction of a space that has nurtured generations of curious minds, facilitated countless moments of discovery, and served as a sanctuary for those in search of knowledge? To tear down the library is to sever the very roots of intellectual growth and community connection that it so selflessly fosters. Are we truly prepared to abandon the generations of children who have found their love for reading there, or the elderly who rely on it as their sole avenue for continued learning?
The library is more than just a building; it is the soul of our community. Consider for a moment the painful imagery that would accompany its demolition: the clang of steel against stone, the choking dust rising as our sacred space is reduced to rubble. The sound of history being erased with each crushing blow. Would we stand idly by as the lifeblood of our town is destroyed before our very eyes? Is this the legacy we wish to leave for future generations?
Physically, the library stands as an architectural masterpiece—its soaring windows, carved wooden shelves, and intricate stonework are testament to both the craftsmanship of the past and the hopes of those who envisioned it as a place of learning and unity. The marble floors, still polished with the memories of countless visitors, gleam as they catch the light from the tall arched windows. The oak bookshelves, brimming with the weight of centuries of knowledge, speak of the wisdom contained within their pages. To destroy this treasure is to destroy a piece of ourselves. Can we truly live with such a loss?
Furthermore, it is essential to recognize the profound emotional impact this demolition would have on our community. Many of us have walked through the library’s doors in moments of both joy and sorrow, seeking solace, escape, and inspiration. For students, the library is a place of study and focus, where the hum of concentration fills the air. For families, it is a safe haven—a place to bond over storytime or explore new worlds together. For the elderly, it is a quiet retreat, offering a much-needed escape from the isolation that can accompany old age. To lose the library is to lose a part of what makes us a community—a place where all are welcome, regardless of age, background, or circumstance.
Moreover, I ask you to consider the long-term consequences of such an action. Are we truly so blind to the value of our cultural institutions that we would sacrifice them for short-term gains? What will become of our children if they are deprived of the opportunities the library provides? How will we explain to the elderly, the unemployed, the immigrants, and the marginalized that their access to knowledge and community is expendable? Can we stand before them and say that their needs are less important than the interests of a few?
In conclusion, I implore you to reconsider this decision. To demolish the library is not merely an act of urban redevelopment; it is an attack on our collective identity. It is an affront to the spirit of knowledge, connection, and community that we have worked so hard to cultivate. Please, do not let this be the moment we allowed something irreplaceable to slip through our fingers. Let us stand together to preserve our library—our history, our culture, and our future.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I trust that you will reflect upon the profound implications of this decision and choose to act in the best interests of our community.
Sincerely,
Sarah K
K.Sarah
ABC Street.
The Demolition of Our Community Library: A Call to Action
Dear Mayor and esteemed Council Members
I hope that this comment finds you well. It is with my great concern and an overwhelming sense of urgency that I write to you about the suggested demolition of our beloved community library. in this proposal, should it move forward, represents not just a physical loss, but the havoc of an irreplaceable cultural establishment—a lifeline for our community members of all ages and backgrounds.
How could we, as a society, allow the destruction of a space that has nurtured generations of curious minds, clear the way for countless moments of discovery, and served as a sanctuary for those in search of knowledge? To tear down the library is to sever the very roots of intellectual growth and community connection that it so selflessly fosters. Are we truly prepared to abandon the generations of children who have found their love for reading there, or the elderly who rely on it as their sole avenue for continued learning?
The library is more than just a building; it is the soul of our community. Consider for a moment the melancholic reality that would accompany its demolition: the clang of steel against stone, the choking dust rising as our sacred space is reduced to rubble. The sound of history being erased with each crushing blow. Would we stand idly by as the lifeblood of our town is destroyed before our very eyes? Is this the legacy we wish to leave for future generations?
Physically, the library stands as an architectural masterpiece—its soaring windows, carved wooden shelves, and intricate stonework are testament to both the craftsmanship of the past and the hopes of those who envisioned it as a place of learning and unity. The marble floors, still polished with the memories of countless visitors, gleam as they catch the light from the tall arched windows. The oak bookshelves, brimming with the weight of centuries of knowledge, speak of the wisdom contained within their pages. To destroy this treasure is to destroy a piece of ourselves. Can we truly live with such a loss?
Furthermore, it is essential to recognize the profound emotional impact this demolition would have on our community. Many of us have walked through the library’s doors in moments of both joy and sorrow, seeking solace, escape, and inspiration. For students, the library is a place of study and focus, where the hum of concentration fills the air. For families, it is a safe haven—a place to bond over storytime or explore new worlds together. For the elderly, it is a quiet retreat, offering a much-needed escape from the isolation that can accompany old age. To lose the library is to lose a part of what makes us a community—a place where all are welcome, regardless of age, background, or circumstance.
Moreover, I ask you to consider the long-term consequences of such an action. Are we truly so blind to the value of our cultural institutions that we would sacrifice them for short-term gains? What will become of our children if they are deprived of the opportunities the library provides? How will we explain to the elderly, the unemployed, the immigrants, and the marginalized that their access to knowledge and community is expendable? Can we stand before them and say that their needs are less important than the interests of a few?
In conclusion, I implore you to reconsider this decision. To demolish the library is not merely an act of urban redevelopment; it is an attack on our collective identity. It is an affront to the spirit of knowledge, connection, and community that we have worked so hard to cultivate. Please, do not let this be the moment we allowed something irreplaceable to slip through our fingers. Let us stand together to preserve our library—our history, our culture, and our future.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I trust that you will reflect upon the profound implications of this decision and choose to act in the best interests of our community.
Sincerely,
Sarah K
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K.Sarah
ABC Street.
The Demolition of Our Community Library
Dear Mayor and esteemed Council Members
I have the fiath that you can change your decision for the demolition of our community library . It is with my concern and an intenseness of necissity that I write to you about the suggested demolition of our beloved community library. In this letter, should it move forward, represents not just a regular loss, but the havoc of cultural establishment because it is a bloodline for our community from all ages and backgrounds.
How can we, as a society, give permission of the destruction of a library that has helped generations of scrutiny minds, clear the way for countless moments of discovery, and served as a haven for those in search of knowledge? To tear down the library is to sever the very roots of growth and community connection that it so selflessly fosters. Are we truly prepared to abandon the generations of children who have found their love for reading there, or the elderly who depend on it as their avenue for continued learning?
The library is more than just a building; it is the soul of our community. The sound of history being erased with each crushing blow. Consider for a moment the melancholic reality that would accompany its demolition: the clang of steel against stone, the choking dust rising as our sacred space is reduced to rubble. The sound of history being erased with each crushing blow. Would we stand idly by as the lifeblood of our town is destroyed before our very eyes?
Physically, the library stands as an masterpiece—its soaring windows, carved wooden shelves, and intricate stonework are testament to both the craftsmanship of the past and the hopes of those who visioned it as a place of learning and unity. The marble floors, still polished with the memories of countless visitors, gleam as they catch the light from the tall arched windows. The oak bookshelves, brimming with the weight of centuries of knowledge, speak of the wisdom contained within their pages. To destroy this treasure is to destroy a piece of ourselves. Can we truly live with such a loss?
Furthermore, it is essential to recognize the profound emotional impact this demolition would have on our community. Many of us have walked through the library’s doors in moments of both joy and sorrow, seeking solace, escape, and inspiration. For students, the library is a place of study and focus, where the hum of concentration fills the air. For families, it is a safe haven—a place to bond over storytime or explore new worlds together. For the elderly, it is a quiet retreat, offering a much-needed escape from the isolation that can accompany old age. To lose the library is to lose a part of what makes us a community—a place where all are welcome, regardless of age, background, or circumstance.
Moreover, I ask you to consider the long-term consequences of such an action. Are we truly so blind to the value of our cultural institutions that we would sacrifice them for short-term gains? What will become of our children if they are deprived of the opportunities the library provides? How will we explain to the elderly, the unemployed, the immigrants, and the marginalized that their access to knowledge and community is expendable? Can we stand before them and say that their needs are less important than the interests of a few?
In conclusion, I implore you to reconsider this decision. To demolish the library is not merely an act of urban redevelopment; it is an attack on our collective identity. It is an affront to the spirit of knowledge, connection, and community that we have worked so hard to cultivate. Please, do not let this be the moment we allowed something irreplaceable to slip through our fingers. Let us stand together to preserve our library—our history, our culture, and our future.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I trust that you will reflect upon the profound implications of this decision and choose to act in the best interests of our community.
Sincerely,
Sarah K
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to you, to talk about the proposed new shopping mall project. As a student who values knowledge, the local library is a sanctuary for storing cultural and intellectual gems. Like me, other people also treasure this library, and if you decide to demolish the town’s beloved library, many of us will be devastated. I would like you to reconsider moving the project to another sight, where no library will be destroyed, and this is why.
Alton Library holds Priceless Memoires
From stone carvings, to manuscripts, to first edition books, our local library provides Kensington a variety of knowledge. If you demolish this sacred haven, all of these precious books, irreplaceable artifacts and prized letters will no longer have a home. Hundreds of hearts are bound to break, hearing the news of our library being demolished. What is the point of having a library when it will all get destroyed?
People learn new things from libraries
From discovering new theories, to finding new equations, to studying theorems, the library has immense potential power, providing tools for people to expand their knowledge. Learning is like opening new doors for people to get smarter. With libraries, their legacy will indefinitely last for decades to come. Do you realise that you are ruining generations of knowledge, if you build a new shopping centre here?
Books transport you to another world
Books are a large component of libraries. All across Australia, children and adults indulge in reading. Whether it is a newspaper, or picture book, these prized books are crucial to us. Where are people going to read if there is no library?
In conclusion, I believe that if you decide to demolish our sacred library, many of our hearts will break, whether it is from no more books, not being able to experience learning anything new, or the significance of losing priceless memories. If you decide to build a new shopping mall, futures will be ruined, pathways will be destroyed, and lives will not be the same.
Sincerely,
Lily Moore
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Winni – DAY 1
Painful Imagery exercise:
I stand outside the beautiful walls of the community library, watching with a tortured soul as the monster of a bulldozer tears into the sanctuary of knowledge and secrets. I know that every single person around me had the same feelings of utter lividity, knowing that with every brick the council destroyed, they were destroying a piece of our soul. The bulldozer ripped through the concrete wall like an infant knocking over building blocks, scattering the papers like a furious hurricane, though most painful of all, destroying everything we ever held dear. The great rhino tramples the shelves, transforming them into bidimensionales. Slowly but surely, eliminating all hope we ever had.
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Dear: Council Cyrilia road Sydney NSW
456 Kent St Sydney NSW
14/4/2025
It has come to the attention of myself that the council is planning to demolish the community library to make way for a measly shopping center. In everyone’s opinion, this is an abhorrent idea, destroying a sanctuary of peace and learning to replace it with a loud realm of greenhouse gasses and air pollution. You may as well be signing the death warrant of intelligence. Anyone can see how much the public adores the library, and how it is the reason behind our intelligent community. Surely you can see that. If you destroyed the library, you would be destroying the bond between our community and everything we love. You would destroy who we are!
First of all, I must say that we are in utter shock and disarray at why you want to destroy such a beautiful place. It is an ethereal place of knowledge and power. Its books invite you with its quiet finger of curiosity, forcing you to open the pages to an entirely new world. No one would ever dream of destroying this landmark in history. Think of it as if you were to destroy your favourite photos of your dead grandma. That is how we feel about you destroying our majestic library of knowledge and secrets.
Ensuingly, destroying the library would destroy any trust the community has in you, meaning that your life would be 10 times harder. Even without the added grief of destroying a magnificent placeholder in our history such as this. You as an entity are nothing without the people. Yet the people are nothing without the library. So you are nothing without the library. If you destroy our beautiful athenaeum of knowledge, we will do anything in our power to bring it back.
So please, please don’t knock down this marvellous bibliotheca, or you will regret it. Think clearly without being clouded with money fantasies and you will be happy, and the people will be happy. The people are you and the library is the people. Save the library, save yourself, destroy the library, destroy yourself. Bear all that in mind for a few weeks and Let’s see what happens.
Yours sincerely: Lincoln
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24 Simspon St, 2113 17 Bread St, 2112
14/4/24
Dear Council,
This letter is sent in regards of your descision to knock down our precious local library to support building some commercial building. Destroying the sacred building would not only destroy a valuble structure but also crumble the hearts of thousands living in this town. Would you commence the execution of a building that had captivated the hearts of many just to build yet another polluting, common, filthy structure? No other building, no matter how luxurious, can ever compete with the local library; a cataphony of books, sleek and modern, precious and ancient. I express my anguish and represent the town in our opinion in this matter. We all share this town. Sometimes leaders have to lead by counting in on the publics’ opinion.
The terrible destruction of the treasured library would tear a gaping hole in our hearts. A wound which would surely leave a scar. Knocking down this prized building will destroy an integral part of the city, just to build a common monstrosity? The public cares plenty for this building. For some, it is a place to rest and recharge after a long day. There’s something wonderful about sinking into a beanbag, letting the weight of the day melt away as your mind drifts quietly elsewhere. For others, it is a haven — a space to escape the noise of the world, to breathe, to think, and to simply be. Whether it’s used to unwind or to find focus, this space holds power beyond its walls: it becomes a reflection of comfort, clarity, and calm. To destroy it would to be to destroy a place where people turn to in need, to destroy a beloved building.
The library is a safe haven at any time, whether its the day, where quiet streams of sunlight stretch through the open windows like slender fingers, or the night, where the cool rays of moonlight gently light the room. It is a place of peace, a maze of ancient carved bookshelves with books, modern and ancient, sitting there, inviting readers to come. The unique smell of the library is irreplaceable, the perfect blend of the crisp paper and smooth leather of books, and the natural musty smell of the shelves. The only sounds are the quiet sound of flipping pages – other than that, a peaceful, serene silence. The library is a unique, special building which has captivated the hearts of thousands. Would you really want to destroy this place?
Don’t make a terrible mistake when the public has been warning you, before you are left with the legacy of a loss and regret piles up in your hearts.
You have started this. But it is not too late to stop it.
Don’t be remembered as the executioner of a precious place, but revered as the saviour of a sacred sanctuary
It’s not too late – yet.
Yours in concern,
Jordan Wong
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Dear Councillor Jacob,
It has come to my attention that the council has proposed the demolition of our beloved community library in replacement with a spiritless, lacklustre commercial mess. As a student whose life has been built around these eloquent and accessible books, I find a need to express my passionate disapproval. Our library isn’t just a mere building – it is a compassionate haven where people of all ages can learn and grow. Would it be justified to value money over the education of our students and community? To ruin our sacred library space is to ruin the hearts of this community as a whole. I plead you to take some time to re-evaluate this heartbreaking decision – one that threatens to erase the memories that have formed within this building.
Imagine bulldozers and cranes ravaging through the debris of our library mercilessly, reducing it to just a meagre memory. Picture the monstrous machines, their steel limbs tearing through the books, shattering the glass, and crushing the stone, swallowing this beacon of knowledge whole. Each roar of their engines would drown out the laughter of our community. This is not just a demolition, it’s an erasure of our community.
Our library is an extravagant building, delicately and intricately crafted with the finest details. Many architects, engineers, and constructors worked for years to bring this structural masterpiece to life – building the large arches, placing down each brick, and creating glowing artworks using stained glass. To replace this place of grandeur with an uninspiring structure made of metal beams and concrete would be to erase their hard work. It would be a waste of beauty, effort, and creativity in favour of commerical monotony.
I ask you to reconsider this decision. Imagine our future where, instead of spending time with vanilla-tinged paper filled to the brim with stories and the imagination of others, children try out the latest perfumes at the shops. A world where, instead of listening to the calming sounds of paper turning, the continous beeps of the librarian’s scanner, and the soft scratches of pencil on paper, kids get overstimulated by other’s chatting and music blasting in their ears. This is what replacing our library with a mall will do. Students will never get to expierence the joy of stuffing your head in a book, reading to your heart’s desire. Our community deserves more than just a commerical building. Future generations will look back at your decision. Although I am just a student, I beseech you to make the right decision.
Yours sincerely,
Hillary
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33 Bedside Road
16/4/24
Dear Council
Imagine a world without libraries, where there were no books to read, and no quiet corners for studying. Libraries are places where most people find information there. If we demolish them, we lose more than just buildings, but also precious information. without libraries, students’ education would be affected, jobs could be lost, and people who loved books couldn’t read anymore. This is why we must not demolish libraries.
First and foremost, a place where libraries no longer existed, could affect students’ education. Why education? Because libraries provide a crucial role that provides all the sources of knowledge inside the thick books. Students gather all of this information to help them study. If libraries were demolished, students who relied on these were now left alone to do it themselves.
Additionally, librarians who worked at libraries were now left to find new jobs. This may result in low-income daily and people will be forced to find a new job. However, finding a new job can be tough, causing people to become tired.
Libraries are also a great place to get inspired. They host fun events, like story time for younger kids or book clubs for older ones. These activities help people become more creative and curious. Many libraries even have art programs, science workshops, and other hands-on activities. Without libraries, where would children and adults go to get inspired to try something new or explore their talents? Libraries are like treasure chests full of ideas waiting to be discovered.
Furthermore, children who love to read books may also be affected. Consider if there were millions of children who loved reading books, these kids might’ve visited the library often. However, since councillors are planning to demolish libraries. Children who relied on libraries may now have to switch to audiobooks. Audiobooks cost a substantial amount of money. Like I said before, this may result in low income issues.
Now, think about the whole situation like this “what if a library meant a home to me,” now, reconsider if you want to demolish the precious libraries.
Libraries aren’t just for students or people who love to read—they are for everyone. They provide services to all ages and backgrounds. For example, many libraries offer free computer access, which is important for people who don’t have their own devices at home. They also offer support for people looking for jobs, helping them with resumes or job searches. Demolishing libraries would mean taking away these valuable services from the community.
In conclusion, libraries are more than just buildings filled with books. They are important centers of learning, creativity, and support. By keeping our libraries open, we are ensuring that everyone has a place to grow, explore, and find what they need. Demolishing libraries would be like taking away an essential part of our community. We should protect them and make sure they stay open for future generations to enjoy. This is why we should not knock down our precious libraries.
Yours Sincerely.
Jack Dish.