Prompt : Write both emails for the playground scenario:
Informal Email to Fellow Students: Gather support for your playground improvement campaign using informal tone
while maintaining a persuasive impact.
Formal Email to Principal: Request playground renovations using formal tone, persuasive evidence, and
emotive/descriptive language.
Requirements:
Include all email components (subject line through sign-off)
Use at least 5 examples of emotive language in each email
Include at least 5 examples of descriptive language in each email
Maintain appropriate register for each audience
Keep Formal email to 500-600 words
Keep Informal email to 500-600 words
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Yes day 3
writing email day 5
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Day 5 Mohamed
1st formal writing:
Holiday Writing Course Year 6 Day 5_ Email about Playground Needing to be Fixed
praveen is nandu
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Day 5 Praveen
2nd hw informal writing
Holiday Writing Course Year 6 Day 5_ 2nd HW – Informal Email about Playground Needing to be Fixed
2nd hw informal writng
Holiday Writing Course Year 6 Day 5_ 2nd HW – Informal Email about Playground Needing to be Fixed
actually no this:
Holiday Writing Course Year 6 Day 5_ 2nd HW – Informal Email about Playground Needing to be Fixed (1)
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Day 5 Praveen (1)
this is 2nd informal writing hw
Holiday Writing Course Year 6 Day 5_ 2nd HW – Informal Email about Playground Needing to be Fixed (1)
https://docs.google.com/document/d/102xY-JYtb3rdEuJcCzbhQLw8MurhTjM_8XXJkBk5kaE/edit?tab=t.0
https://docs.google.com/document/d/11c4WIgE-_K4VwNCdnPNp79tfXvBAGp-2wAzlhtXHpFw/edit?tab=t.0#heading=h.riy5rvrvaszq
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I finally finished
Day 5 homework
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Day 5 Ruibin
both (this one is informal)
day 5 homework2
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Day 5 Ruibin (1)
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rsY19msCrkVbzF_6_2gOGZ6tBoq6bV9fQ_volTcZaok/edit?tab=t.agwbl7692h3d
Use this link. 🙂
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Day 5 vinnie505
I was busy on the weekends with plans, and also on Friday, and by the time we got back it was too late , so I didn’t do this hw
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KD5_kOBBefTJJdJAY76xgk-IrWKad99dQH1yqmxQHpA/edit?tab=t.0
Informal email
Day 5 Homework Informal email
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Day 5 A
Day 5 Formal:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/12hDy_w6cE7CMOV8rhNWejw5XBvej1AmhHTUARmmfSUg/edit?tab=t.0
Day 5 Formal:
Homework Day 5 – Formal Email