Day 6 Writing Homework

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Prompt : Write two persuasive emails about the playground renovation:
A formal email to your local council member requesting inspection and support (300-350 words)
An informal email to a local business owner requesting sponsorship (300-350 words)
Each email must include:
At least two examples of figurative language (metaphor, simile, personification)
Strong emotionally evocative language
Vivid physical descriptions that engage at least three senses
Clear adaptation to the specific audience
Proper email structure

500-600 Words

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  • Due Date : April 23, 2025
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  5. HG

    Subject: Request for Inspection and Support of Local Playground Renovation
    Dear Council Member Bob,
    I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to express my concern regarding the current state of the playground at [Playground Name or Location] and to respectfully request your support in initiating an inspection and considering a renovation of this vital community space.
    As a resident of and a parent, I have witnessed how much our local children and families value this playground. Unfortunately, over the past several years, the condition of the equipment and surrounding areas has significantly deteriorated. Many of the play structures are outdated, rusted, or broken, posing potential safety risks. Additionally, the lack of accessible features and shaded areas limits the usability of the space for children with disabilities and for use during warmer months.
    A renovated, inclusive, and safe playground would not only serve the physical and emotional well-being of our children but would also foster greater community engagement. Modern playground designs prioritise safety, accessibility, and environmental sustainability aligning with our city’s broader goals for inclusive and family-friendly public spaces.
    I kindly request that you arrange an official inspection of the site at your earliest convenience and consider allocating resources or grants toward its renovation. Your support in championing this cause would make a lasting difference for families across the neighborhood.
    I would be happy to meet with you in person or participate in a community discussion to explore how we can work together to move this project forward. Thank you for your time, attention, and ongoing service to our community.
    Sincerely,
    HG

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      Hi there! Thank you for submitting your work! However, we noticed that your piece is a bit short. To give you the most helpful feedback, could you please elaborate on your ideas and provide more details? Also, try to adhere to the required word count. You got this!😊

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